2017淄博中考范文
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2017淄博中考范文篇一
淄博市2017年初中信息技术学业考试说明(定稿)
淄博市2017年初中信息技术学业考试说明
一、指导思想
1.引导各学校开全课程、开足课时,落实好正常的教学活动。
2.促进教师认真贯彻、落实课程目标,培养学生积极的学习态度和信息习惯。
3.鼓励教师积极开展课堂教学改革,创新课堂教学模式与学习方法。
4.以能力培养为主,积极发展学生个性,为高中段持续学习打好基础。
5.发挥考试的导向作用,推动我市信息技术教育的健康发展。
二、考查目标
1.基本的信息活动能力与信息应用能力。
2.主动获取、加工、交流、分析、发布信息的能力。
3.善于观察社会生活,捕获所需信息的能力。
4.对技术的迁移运用能力与创新精神。
三、命题原则
1.立足基础知识、基本技能,加强对技术价值与操作感受的考查。
2.注重对运用技术处理信息能力和分析问题、解决问题能力的考查。
3.增加开放性和探究性题目,加大对技术素养、计算思维和创造、创新能力的考查。
4.保持试题的原创性、时代性和灵活性,体现课程价值。
四、考试形式、时间、题型和分值
1.考试形式:采用闭卷、上机考试形式。
2.考试时限:45分钟。
3.分值:满分50分。
4.题型:(样题见附件)
(1)单选题(10题,每题2分,共20分)
(2)文字录入(1题,5分)
(3)操作题(4题,共25分)
①Word、PPT作品创作(二选一,1题,6分)
②Excel数据分析与处理(1题,7分)
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③Flash动画制作(1题,6 分)
④Photoshop图像加工(1题,6分)
5.软件版本:Windows7、Office2013、Flash8、PhotoshopCS、Adobe Audition3.0、Camtasia Studio8、VB6
6.硬件要求:CPU双核2GHz以上,32位/64位处理器,内存(DDR3)不小于4G,硬盘不小于500G,液晶显示器。
五、考试内容
以泰山版初中《信息技术》教材第一~三册所包含的内容为基础,并结合当下信息技术的发展制订考试内容,所涵盖的基本知识点和目标要求如下:
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2017淄博中考范文篇二
2017中考必考的30篇英语作文
中考必考的30篇英语作文
第一篇:【写作要求】
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生,我们应节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起,做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题,写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括:
1.地球的污染越来越严重,我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起,做到“低碳生活”的。如:每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.
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My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
第二篇:【写作要求】
每当朋友之间即将分手的时候,耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我,如果你正享受幸福,请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,可以围绕主题适当展开,阐述交友的重要性和好处。
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Friends
What are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.
第三篇:【写作要求】
最近,你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论,同学们就这一话题意见不一,你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息,以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题,写一篇短文。
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3)词数:100左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇:美德virtue
Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions.
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Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions.
Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue,and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day.If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them,it's hard to imagine what our world will be like.
However,some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness.
In my opinion,we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help,but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness,our world will be full of love.
第四篇:【写作要求】
某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛,请你根据提示的内容,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下:
1. 尽管我们常常感到有压力,但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松;
2. 我们应该足够细心,因为“失之毫厘,谬以千里”;
3. 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡,试着安排好自己的空余时间;
4. 任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习,我们会取得大的进步。
5. 有问题时,我们…
要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数90个左右;{2017淄博中考范文}.
3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象,用2句话补充完整。
【优秀满分范文】How to Deal with Our Study Problems
Although we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with stress.
We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough,
because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well. Don’t lose heart at any time. You will make great progress through hard work.
When having problems, we can ask people around us for help. It’s not wise to keep our worries to ourselves. 第五篇:【写作要求】
学校英语社团在举办征文比赛,请你根据以下提示内容,写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下:
1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈,她四十几岁;
2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题,并建议我如何解决它们;
3. 作为一名医生,她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班,把她的大部分时
间都奉献给了工作;{2017淄博中考范文}.
4. 所以,我认为她不仅是位好妈妈,也是名好医生。
5. 我希望 ……
要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数90个左右;
3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象,用2-3句话补充完整。
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The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.
第六篇:【写作要求】
假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上,以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题,为某中学生英文报写一篇报道,内容要点如下:
1. 目的:为贫困地区的孩子们筹款
2. 10月23日,星期六
3. 路径:学校—市中心
4. 简况:学生把自己分成四人一组,出发前计划好了一切,步行很艰辛,但活动过程中大家互相帮助,互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下,筹得善款5万多元。
5. 感受:每个人都很累,但都很高兴,因为…
注意:1. 报道须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3. 词数80个左右。
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Walk for children in poor areas
Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.
It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end.
We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.
第七篇:【写作要求】
“保护环境,人人有责”,你想成为一名绿色使者吗?请行动起来吧!其实,环保就在我们身边。请以“How to Be a Greener Person” 为题,写一篇短文。
注意:
1.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2.短文词数90 左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:draw, both sides of paper, plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sort
How to Be a Greener Person?
It’s our duty to protect our environment around us.
【优秀满分范文】 How to be a greener person
It’s our duty to protect the inviyonment around us.{2017淄博中考范文}.
When we go to school, we should ride a bike or take a bus. When we go out for activities, we shouldn’t step on the grass. We can’t draw everywhere. When we go shopping, we’d better use a cloth bag. At home we can save water and electricity. When we leave a room, we should turn off the ligts. At school we can collect wast paper and recycle things, such as bottles, cans and plastic bags. We shoudn’t listen to pop music or spit in pulic.
Let’s do something to protect our environment.
第八篇:【写作要求】
“灿烂星空,谁是真的英雄?”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄,为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄,在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄……
从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄,以The Hero in My Heart为题写一篇短文。
要求:①包含所选信息卡上的内容;②适当拓展,如学英雄的感想、行动等;③不能出现表明你身份的信息;④词数80左右,不含已给出部分。
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For
【优秀满分范文1】The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Canada.
Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938, he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn’t stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.
I am deeply moved by his stories. So I’ll work hard today and do my best to help others.
【优秀满分范文2】
The Hero in My Heart
2017淄博中考范文篇三
2017中考热门话题作文
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为了交流学习经验,提高学习效率,《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动,请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. I think all these above will be helpful to us.
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亲爱的同学,你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了,请你以“My English Study”为题,谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求:1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟;2.词数80左右。
【优秀满分范文】{2017淄博中考范文}.
My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the
teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
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父亲节马上就要到了,但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展,并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右,开头和结尾以给出(不计入总词数)。
提示:1.如果有足够的零花钱,可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西,如领带等:
2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为
父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。
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Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so? 4
请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 提示:1.春节是中国最重要的节日;
2.人们大多回家过年,家庭成员团聚;
3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友(friends and relatives);
4.孩子们喜欢春节。
【优秀满分范文】
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.
People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.
Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
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假设Linda是你的好朋友,你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来,你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示,简要介绍Linda的变化。
提示:1.外貌:以前个子矮,短发;现在个子高多了,长发。
2.爱好:以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天;现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。
3.性格:以前外向;现在有些内向。
要求:1.不要逐字翻译,适当发挥;
2.层次清晰,语言流畅;
3.80词左右。
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Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.
She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and
chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.
I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.
假如你是李华,今年上初三了,现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数:60-80。
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I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.
I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the
evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying. I really miss my old days.
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某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good
relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点:1.父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;
2.你对这些问题的看法;
3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework. 10
今天是母亲节。假定你是李华,请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下:
1. 表述你与母亲间的情感;2. 为母亲制作一张卡片;
3. 帮助母亲做点事;4. 陪母亲散步等。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear John,
It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?
I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.
Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy.
What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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2017淄博中考范文篇四
2017中考满分作文7大着眼点
2017中考满分作文7大着眼点
一、关于卷面。同学们必须记住,考场作文,是阅卷老师读了你的作文后打分的。卷面的整洁、写字的工整、段落结构的协调,都直接影响着阅卷老师的 视力感觉,对阅卷老师的打分心理产生冲击。一个好的卷面,即使作文不怎么出色,分数也不会少。一篇生动的作文,如果卷面不整,分数就不会高。
很多同学写字并不好,你们在考场上一定要记住,必须一笔一划写清楚,不要太大,也不要太小。千万别写得太潦草。你不认真,阅卷老师也不会认真。
二、关于文体。国家教育部关于中考的《指导意见》中,对作文的要求是:不得设置审题障碍,要淡化文体要求,鼓励学 生写真情实感。据此,我们可以 明确地准备记叙文一种体裁。同学们在备考的时候,要阅读优秀的记叙文范文,掌握几种叙事方法。譬如:开头情景渲染、开门见山点题、中间注意插叙等等。
这里提一下小应用文。小应用文今年中考八成要考,大家要注意。书信、通知、颁奖词、短信、导语、简单的说明文、分析概括某种现象等,可能还会出现。建议大家查查资料,把去年中考语文试卷的小作文题复习一遍,做到有备无患。
三、关于标题。根据新课标精神,近两年的作文发生了一些变化。其中最大的变化是:命题和半命题作文成为主流。去年的中考作文,命题作文约占70%,半命题约占7.5%,话题和材料作文,占15%。即使出现了材料作文,有些也是二选一题目。
如果是命题作文,我们自然不用考虑起标题。如果是半命题或其他形式,我们则要尽力求新。如《从__身上学到的》,就考验了同学们的补题技巧和题 材创新。有的同学直接填了“父母”、“老师”、“同学”,创新程度就不够。有的同学写了“那片松柏”、“温总理”、“那座雕像”、“陈贤妹”,就能使阅卷 老师感到“眼前一亮”。
四、关于立意:首先,我们必须记住,作文是让阅卷老师读的,不是自己在QQ空间上信马由缰地乱写,因此,作文的立 意必须积极向上。对于有争议的 内容,不要太大胆。譬如,你要求中日开战夺回钓鱼岛,中菲海军在黄岩岛摆战场,你骂朝鲜独裁,等等类似的内容,只能降低你的分数。一句话,我们要写阅卷老 师愿意看的,作文得高分才是正途。 其次,无论中高考作文怎么出题,立意的范畴基本分为8类。一是生命意义,写生活中感悟的滋味。二是自然景物,写对周遭世界的感悟。三是情感体 验,写你珍藏在内心的人和事。四是享受幸福,写那些给我们温暖和智慧的情节。五是成功成长,写花季中的酸甜苦辣。六是道德修养,写生活中宝贵的品质如诚 信、真诚、勇敢、善良等。七是哲理品悟,写自己从生活细节中提炼的规律性认识。八、告别往昔,写对生活中值得珍藏的片段。上面几个方面,有侧重也有交叉, 同学们要根据作文题目,明确不同的立意。
五、关于题材。在这里,我明确反对写古人,譬如,每次中考,司马迁、李白、屈原、陶渊明、林则徐等,都会当做材料出现在作文里,老师们已经看腻了,大家要避免这个误区了。
那我们选什么题材呢?我的建议是,把上述的8个立意的范畴,各准备一个比较典型的题材。也就是说,准备好8件生动的事儿,以备中考作文采用。
这里需要强调的是,无论同学们写什么题材,强烈建议用第一人称,写你自身经历的事儿,写你生活中真实的感悟。大家储备素材的时候,要找自己亲身经历的事情,或者发生在身边现实生活中的事例。一般来说,在考场上瞎编乱造,多数会出现纰漏,导致减分。
六、关于结构。作文的结构无非是“总分总”、“分总”、“总分”。就考文而言,前两者比较适用。大家一定要记住,作文的开头不要很长,不要因为 玩弄作文书上的技巧而弄得开头超过了5行。我个人倾向于“一句话开头”,直接交待你想说的话和想说的事儿,第一句就是时间地点人物事件。
关于结尾,我们一定要明确,结尾就是抒情和扣题的。在结尾必须抒情,归纳你想表达什么,而且扣题,最好“糊膏药”(出现标题或标题中的关键词)。
同学们要记住,六七百字的作文,要有六七段,千万不要出现“大肚子作文”、“大头作文”,“大尾巴作文”,这样结构不协调,视觉也不够顺眼。
七、关于语言。学生作文的语言不生动,常常是作文老师最头疼的难题。在作文教学中,学生语言的提高,是最为困难 的。备考作文,语言的准备是最难 的。在此给考生们提几点建议:一是遇到你喜欢的句子和段落,你干脆背下来,也许能用在考场上,反正就是这一锤子卖卖,即使没产生作用,也不会扣分。二是, 记住要有描写。写人要有动作和语言描写,写事注意细节和环境描写。三是,句子最好短一些,不要一逗到底,一个句子的主谓宾定状补都有了,就用句号。四是注 意修辞手法。
综上所述,我们明确了中考作文的命题规律,搞清楚作文的几个构成要件是什么,阅卷老师注重的是什么,这样就能有针对性地复习,以期取得较高的分数。{2017淄博中考范文}.
写给最亲密的人的一封信
昨天的“我”:
你好!
看到你迟缓的身影,看到你紧锁的愁眉,看到你默默的泪水,我的心绪变得格外沉重。我知道,你在为初三酸甜苦辣的生活而惆怅万分,你在为成长中的种种烦恼而再三埋怨;你还在为前进中的点点滴滴的挫折而心灰意冷。
生活不可能一帆风顺,生命不可能只有幸福,这种生活经历谁都会遇到。我在书上看到这样故事,一个年仅19岁的姑娘,因考后感到一点信心也没有,虽考分超过高校录取线7分,却在成绩单发下的前一夜服安眠药自尽,她是船长的女儿,父母的心肝宝贝,从小泡在蜜罐里长大,可没想到蜜喝多了,意会如此般脆弱。
有句名言说得好:“痛苦能够孕育灵魂和精神力量。”在我看来,灾难也许是傲骨的乳娘,祸患也许是豪杰的乳汁,“痛苦”、“灾难”与“祸患”是需要吃苦才能克服得了的。孟子写下了“生于忧患,死于安乐”,《史记》所述“良药苦口利于病,忠言逆耳利于行”,还有那“宝剑锋自磨砺出,梅花香自苦寒来”,多少先古哲向我们阐述了这一深遂的道理,只有在风吹雨打中守望自我的理想与信念,我们才会拥有强悍的生存能力。
古往今来,多少风流人物在逆境中坚守自我,终成大器。“文王拘而演《周易》;仲尼厄而作《春秋》;屈原放逐,乃赋《离骚》;左丘失明,厥有《国语》; 孙子膑脚,兵法修列;不韦迁蜀,世传《吕览》;韩非囚秦,《说难》、《孤愤》、《诗》三百篇,大抵圣贤发愤之所为作也。”如此愁苦而悲愤的遭遇成就的是他们熠熠生辉的选择。
“正入万山圈子里,一山放出一山拦”。有了这种认识,你还会害怕前面的苦难和失败吗?朋友,希望你正视苦难,坚守自我,坚信自我,甩自信掉忧郁怨恨,用信心扬起理想的风帆,我想信,美好的明天一定会属于你。
十年后的你
2016年6月18日
【简评】同样的内容,换一种角度,换一种形式,也许能闪出了诱人的光彩,《写给昨天的“我”和一封信》便是成功的典范。作者将一篇原本普通的议论文,用书信的形式娓娓道出,不仅篇章新颖,而且情感充沛。开篇的人物描写,简洁到位,人物形象跃然纸上;接着引出的现实事例,典型深刻,故事情节发人深省;继而展开的议论,气势恢宏,文采飞扬。确实是一篇文质兼美、匠心独运的好文章。
和父亲在一起
泥泞留痕,不经历风雨,怎见彩虹?
——题记
人生正是在面对和战胜挫折的过程中成长起来的。在人生路上,留下一步步坚实的脚印,才能体现出人生的价值,这是我和父亲一起走泥路时的启示。
当竞赛成绩后,我得知名落孙山,心情就犹如当时的天气,阴阴沉沉,被一层阴霾笼罩着,久久平静。
回到家后,吃过晚饭,父亲见我垂头丧气的样子,便说带我到家后的田野走走。我无精打采地答应了。刚刚下完雨,空气清新,周围的稻穗和山峦经历了风雨的洗礼,显得生机勃发。我望着一派生机勃勃的景象,心情稍微放松了些。这时,父亲说:“你能找到走来时的脚印吗?”我低下头望着地,很快就找到了,并指着给父亲看。父亲又问:“在平时天气晴朗的时候,你能找到脚印吗?”我马上回答,父亲问我为。我说道:“下了雨,土地变得泥泞,留下了痕迹。”父亲边走边说: “这不正像是人生吗!”“人生?”我猛地醒悟,是啊,经历了风雨的洗礼,才能在人生之路留下痕迹,才能人生的价值。我望着父亲踏下的个坚定的脚步,仔细地思考着这过程中收获的智慧。
挫折是人生路上的风雨,经历风雨的洗礼,才能留下生命的痕迹,才能生命的价值,才能书写生命的意义。
我振作了,我充满斗志了,我永远不会忘记与父亲走泥路时收获的智慧,我将踏出个展示价值的脚印,用我的行动为书写一条之路。
和你在一起
网络啊,你是高科技、现代化的象征,按说,和你在一起,我会收获知识和快乐,可是,你却让我失去了太多太多——
镜头一
“爸爸,学校收资料费,要27块钱。”我对爸爸说。爸爸听了后,颇感不满地问我:“上周不是才交了18元资料费吗?”我心里害怕起来,生怕爸爸知道我在欺骗他,生怕爸爸知道我是骗钱上网,支支吾吾着不知怎么回答爸爸的问题,但爸爸还是从他的兜里掏出了27元钱递给我,说:“到校就交给老师,可不要丢了啊!”„„网络啊,请你看看,和你在一起,我失去了比金钱还要宝贵的诚实。
镜头二
英语课上了还不到十分钟,我就没有了一点精神。我清楚,这是我与A在网络玩了一整夜游戏的结果。心里面虽然强迫自己要拿出点精神,但却管不住自己,慢慢地我就将头靠在课桌上睡着了。当然,英语老师没有忘记当着全班同学的面狠狠地批评我一番,外带罚站两节课的时间„„网络啊,请你看看,和你在一起,我失去了比金钱还宝贵的人格尊严。 镜头三
我的朋友B被外校的C打了一顿,B将这件事情告诉我们,我们都非常气愤,商量着如何解决这个问题。D说:“不如我们学学网络游戏中的办法,一伙人联合起来收拾收拾C。”这个建议获得了我们一致的同意。于是,放学后,我们组织了六个人在路上截住了C,对他进行穷追猛打,直至将C打得头破血流、肋骨折断„„网络啊,请你看看,和你在一起,我失去了比金钱还宝贵的善良品格。
网络啊,虽说你是高科技、现代化的象征,但你让我们失去了太多宝贵的东西!我恳请你想一个良方,让我和你在一起的时候,只收获知识和快乐,不要再失去所剩无几的财富! [点评]本文值得借鉴的地方:1、“我”与网络对话,直陈“和你在一起”的种种损失,这种构思别开生面,令人耳目一新。其次,在开头设计悬念,吸引人看下去,在结尾提出愿望,让人掩卷深思,也是本文构思上的一大亮点。我们己经谈过构思的作用,本文更是一个有力的证明。如果按普通的叙述办法来写这篇文章,容易显得呆板平淡。2、串珠式结构并在每颗“珠”的后面以“和你在一起,我失去了比金钱还宝贵的„„”作结,形成排比段,使文章脉结清晰,对网络的 “指控”十分有力。
[思维拓展]这篇文章可以适用于“成长的烦恼”、“与网络对话”、“得与失”、“经历”之类的命题作文或话题作文。
2017淄博中考范文篇五
2016-2017中考英语作文指导及范文
2016-2017中考英语作文指导 如何写好一个句子? --如何写好复合句。
复合句是由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句构成的句子,我们在写作时,要学会使用宾语从句,状语从句和定语从句等。下面就谈谈有关这方面的一些句型。
句型 1 主+谓+that从句-- We’re sure that we’ll win the first prize.我们肯定能得头奖。He found that his English was too 他发现他的英语太差了。She decides that she is going to be a nurse.他决定要当个护士.I don’t believe that he has finished his work.我相信他还没有做完他的工作.
句型点评:在动词say,think,hope,believe,expect,explain,hear,know,find,regret,remember,decide后可接that引导的宾语从句,that常可省略。
句型2 主句+whether/if+从句.我不知道他会不会来。。我问他是否有字典。I don’t know 句型点评:if和whether可引导一个表示疑问的宾语从句,二者一般情况下可通用。
句型3 主句+疑问词+从句--No one knows what he is doing.没有人知道他在干什么。Take back what I said just now.我收回刚才说的话。Could you tell me where the booking office is?你能不能告诉我售票处在什么地方?I must thank you 我一定要谢谢你为我所做的事。
句型点评:连接代词who,whom,whose,what,which等和连接副词when,where,why,how等都可以用来引导特殊疑问句充当宾语从句。注意:从句中要用陈述语气。 句型4 主句+when/while/as/before/after+从句(时间状语从句)
We took notes as/while/when we were listening to the teacher.我们一边听老师讲课一边做笔记。Please keep silent while/when she’s writing.她在写作,请保持安静.I was speaking when a policeman came in.我正在说话,这时,突然进来一个警察.You must finish the work before I go home.你们必须在我回家以前把工作做完。
句型点评:时间状语从句通常由从属连词when,while,as,after,before等引导,使用时必须注意他们之间的词义和用法区别。
句型5 主句+until/till-从句--Last night,his parents waited for him till/until it was 12.昨晚他父母一直等他到12点。 我们练唱一直练到下课。The child 这个小孩看完电视剧后才开始做功课。He did not go home until/till he finished his work.他一直把工作做完之后才回家。
句型点评:在使用本句型时要注意until/till的用法,若主句中的谓语动词是“keep,remain,stay,wait..”等延续性动词,则用动词的肯定式,until/till的含义是“一直到....为止”;若主句中的谓语动词是“arrive,come,finish,go,reach,start”等瞬间性动词,则用动词的否定式,这时的until/till的含义是“直到....才....” 句型6 主句+since-从句/It is+.....since.....
自从我们来到这个城市,就一直住在这儿。 句型点评:since是从属连词,连接时间状语从句表示“自从....以来”。从句中的谓语动词通常用过去时,主句中的谓语动词通常用现在完成时,以表示从过去某一时刻开始,一直延续到现在的动作或状态。
句型7 主句+as soon as/the moment.... ---Please call us as soon as you arrive at the airport.请你一到机场就给我们打电话。I’ll tell your mother the news as soon as I see her.我一见到你母亲就把这个消息告诉她。As soon as the students got they began to help the farmers with their work.学生们一到农场,the children stopped talking.老师一进来,孩子们立即停止谈话。
句型点评:as soon as表示“一...就...”的意思,它引导的从句所表示的动词几乎跟主句的动作同时发生,相当于the moment that引导的从句。
句型8 主句+where/wherever(no matter where)从句 --Get up where you fall.哪里跌倒就在哪里站起来。She phoned to I always follow you.不论你到哪里,我总是跟着你。Wherever you go,you may find friends.不论你走到哪儿,你可能找到朋友。 句型点评:where和wherever都可引导表示地点的状语从句,不过wherever的语气较强,相当于“no matter where”意思是“不论/无论......在/到哪里....”。
句型9. 主句+because从句;Since/As从句+主句
He didn’t pass the English examination last term .因为他学习不努力,所以上学期英语考you’d better put on a coat.今天天气很冷,you can begin your experiment.既然一切都准备好了,现在你们可以开始做实验了。 句型点评:表示原因的状语从句通常用从属连词because,since和as等引导。 句型10. 主句+so that/in order that-句型
他大声喊,为的是让别人听见。We had to 为的是参观长城和其它名胜。
句型点评:so that/in order that意思是“以便;为的是”,引导表示目的状语从句,其从句中的谓语动词通常要与一些情态动词“may,might,can,could”等连用。另外,“so as to/in order to/to+do”也可引导目的状语。 句型11 主语+be/v+so+adj./adv.+that从句
她唱得很动听,所以受到了听众的高度赞扬。 珍妮是这样一个可爱的孩子,所以每个人都喜欢她。She did so well in the office that she was praised by the manager。她在办公室里
干得很出色,受到了经理的表扬。
句型点评:表示结果的状语从句,通常用“so/such....that”表示“如此...以致”来引导。 句型12 主句+as+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句 主句+not/so(as)+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句 黄河不像长江那样长。他不像我所想的那样聪明。I hope you will start as early as you can.我希望你们尽早动身。 句型点评:“as+adj./adv.+as”这个结构中,其中的形容词或副词要用原级;“not as(so)+adj./adv.+as”意为“不如....那样;不像....那样”,其中的形容词或副词也用原级。
句型13 主句+adj/adv比较级+than+..... 主句+(the)+adj./adv.最高级+...... 卡车比自行车跑得快多了。It’s 这是我读过的最好的一本小说。In autumn,the weather of Beijing is much cooler than that of Wuhan.秋天北京的天气比武汉凉爽得多。 句型点评:表示甲>乙(或甲< 乙),要用“形容词(或副词)的比较级+than”句型;表示最高级时,常用“(the)+adj/adv.最高级+.....”等句型。
句型14 Though/Although-从句+主句 Although you are very clever,you are unable to work out the problem.尽管你很聪明,你也不可能解出这道题。He made little progress although he studied very hard.尽管他学习很用功,但是他取得的进步很小。
句型点评:though和although引导的让步状语从句可以置于句首,也可以置于句末。注意“though/although”不与不but同时使用。
句型15.主句+if/unless-从句 We will go and visit the museum if it is fine tomorrow.如果明天天晴,我们将去参观博物馆。I won’t let you leave unless you promise to return tomorrow.=If you don’t promise to return tomorrow,I won’t let you leave.除非你答应明天赶回来,否则我就不让你离开。 句型点评:if/unless引导的条件状语从句可以放在句首,也可放在主句后面,其从句常用一般现在时表示将来。(即主从句要遵从:主将从现的原则)
句型16 先行词+关系代词who(that)/whom/whose+从句-- The child who is reading is my daughter.在那儿读书的那个孩子是我的女儿。The man(whom)you met at the gate is my teacher.在门口你碰到的那个人是我的老师。The boy whose mother died in the accident works hard.其母亲在事故中死去的那个孩子学习努力。 句型点评:在定语从句中,如果先行词是人,要用关系代词“who,whose,whom,that”等引导,其中who在定语从句中作主语或宾语;whose在定语从句中做定语,whom在定语从句中作宾语。 句型17 先行词+关系代词that/which+从句
The book(that/which)you lent me yesterday is very interesting.你昨天借给我的书非常有趣。The film which/that is about animal is wonderful.关于动物的那部电影好看极了。
句型点评:在定语从句中,如果先行词是物,要用关系代词“that,which”等引导。在定语从句中that,which作主语时,不能省略;若作宾语时则常省略。 附2015年各省中考满分作文---
1.上周五,你们班举行了《我们的梦想》的主题班会,在班上同学们踊跃发言;有的想成为老师,有的想成为一名警察,有的想当医生.....请你根据下面的表格的提示以“Our Dreams”为题,写一篇英语论文,报告这次班会的情况,并谈谈你自己的梦想。
Our Dreams Last Friday,our class held a class meeting about
our dreams.Here is my report.Liu Wei’s dream is
to be a teacher,so he decides to study education.Li Ming,he does sports every
day,wants to become a policeman,for he thinks
that without physical exercise,he can not make his dream come true.Susan wants to be a movie
dreams one day.
2.某校开展“我是课堂小主人”建议征集活动,各班就此展开讨论,同学们纷纷发言:“我希望能有足够的自主学习时间....”“我喜欢的课堂是每个人都有一台笔记本电脑,方便网上查询.....”“课堂上我们能自由的讨论,充分展示我们的学习成果.....”等等。请你结合同学们讨论的结果,给以电子邮件的形式写一封信,建议什么样的课堂形式更为同学们喜爱,也更有利于同学们未来的发展。内容包括以下要点:
1)What is your favorite class like? 2)Please tell us an unfotgettable experence you’ve had in your class. 3)Please give at least two suggestions. My favorite class is an open and free class where we can learn by myself and discuss in groups,it is good for my development,I think.
I still remember an unforgettable experiencein my math class.Several days ago,I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class,but they were too hard for me to work them out.So I had to ask my classmate for help.After a considerable discussion,we solved the problems in our group.How excited I was.
Having such a great experience,I want to give two suggestions.Firstly,please don’t teach us too much in class.We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and
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