2017中考英语作文评分标准
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2017中考英语作文评分标准篇一
2017年中考英语作文专题复习
2017年中考英语作文专题复习
书面表达(结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点!)
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么呢?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确,这一句足矣。第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!
要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折:but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
只要把这十个字都搞定了,那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定!
写作步骤
1 审题:审清作文体裁(类型)时态、人称、要点等细节;
2 列提纲(文章结构框架):分3段(层),以及每段(层)大体内容;
3 写作:在提纲的基础上补充要点;
4 复查:2遍——1遍看查要点、拼写、语法、标点等问题;2遍不出声读查,靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等;英语写作检查的原则:
5 誊抄:不允许做任何的更改。
*总之做到三审:体裁、时态和人称、要点;
三思:词汇—>短语—>句式;
三查:要点、拼写和语法、连贯。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同,例如:
汉语 英语
A. 句号 。 .
B. 省略号 „„ „
C. 顿号 、 无
结构
文章分3段(层):
(1)综述:概括性强,最多2句话引入主题;
(2)正文——主要内容:层次性强,一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话;
(3)结尾:紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。
逻辑
1)表层次:
1first, second, third, last 2firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3the first, the second, the third, the last 4in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly 5 to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 6to start with, next, in addition, finally 7first and foremost, besides, last but not least 8most important of all, moreover, finally 9on the one hand, on the other hand 10for one thing, for another thing
2)表转折;but, however, yet, though, although, after all, in spite of,
3)因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, due to,since, owing to, as a result(of), hence, thus
4)例证 for example, for instance, such as
5)表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
6)表示利弊的:be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; „have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; have an effect on sb.;
表示喜爱的:love/like/enjoy„; be fond of„; be interested in„; show great interest in„;
7)总结 As I see, As for me,As we all know,To my mind, as far as I’m concerned, from my perspective, in general, generally speaking, I think..., in fact , in a word, all in all, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up,
句型
一(1)简单句
1. 主系表 I am a middle school student. He is fourteen.
2. 主谓 I ran fast.
3. 主谓宾 We will have dinner together.
4. 主谓宾宾补 (主谓+固定搭配) We keep our classroom clean and tidy.
(2)简单句+状语短语
1. 时间状语 I am a middle school student now. He is fourteen this year.
2. 地点状语 We will have dinner together at home.
(3)简单句(主句)+状语短语
1. 时间状语从句 My parents helped me a lot when I was in trouble.
2. 条件状语从句 If you have any questions, please write to me.
3. 原因状语从句 I like English best because it is interesting and fun.
(4)主句+宾语从句
我认为(我想、我希望) I think he is helpful and great.
I believe you will love this city. I hope I can be a volunteer some day.
(5)使用定语从句
我喜欢可以跟着跳舞的音乐。 I love music I can dance to.
父母是我最爱的人。My parents are the people who I love most.
(6)简单句+连词+简单句
1. 并列连接 I am a middle school student and I study in No. 1 Middle School.
2. 转折连接 I work hard at English but my English is not good enough.
3. 因果连接 He is good at English so I often ask him for help.{2017中考英语作文评分标准}.
二1. I am of the opinion that=My point of view is that=I think=I hold the idea that=as far as I’m concerned=To my mind=in my opinion 2.Among various kinds of +复数名词在各种...中,Among various kinds of sports, I like sth in particular. 3 as the saying goes,/as the proverb goes/as the proverb puts it 4 It’s said/reported/believed that 5 It’s our duty to do sth 6 ask/tell sb. (not) to do sth. 7 concentrate on sth 8 be busy doing sth. 9 be supposed to do sth=should do sth 10Every coin has two sides. Computer has both advantages and disadvantages No pains, no gains. All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. Failure is the mother of success. Think twice before you do. Where there is a will, there is a way. Do as the Romans do. The early bird catches the worm. An apple a day keeps the doctors away. All roads lead to Rome. Practice makes perfect. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑,长一智。
A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 今日事,今日毕。Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。
11.be glad to do sth 12buy/give/show/bring/lend/send/pass/tell sb. sth. 13 there be 句型 14 enjoy/hate/like/finish/stop/mind/keep/go on doing sth. 15 find it + adj to do sth. 16 get + 比较级 17 don’t do sth=stay away from sth 18 had better (not) do sth. 19 help sb. (to) do/help sb.with 20 I don’t think that 21 I would like to /Would you like to„? 22 is one of the + 最高级 + n(pl.)„ 23 It is +adj. for sb. to do sth. (important/ essential/ necessary/ urgent/ proper)24 It is a good idea to do sth. 25宾语从句、定语从句、感叹句型 26 不用说„„ It goes without saying that „ = (It is) needless to say (that) „= It is obvious that 27 It seems that„ 28 It sounds +adj. /It looks +adj. 29 It takes sb some time. to do sth. 30 It’s bad/good for„ 31 It’s time for„/to do sth. 32 Can you give me some advice on... 33 keep sb. doing 34 keep/make sth. +adj. 35 like to do / like doing 36 make / let sb.(not) do sth. 37 neither„nor 38 not„at all 39 not„until 40 One„the other„/Some„ others„ 41 prefer„to/prefer to...rather than...42 see/hear sb. do(doing) sth. 43 so„that 44 have fun doing sth48 thank sb for sth. 49 The more„the better 50 There is sth. wrong with„ 51 too„to 52 used to 53 What about /How about„? 54 What’s the matter with„? 55 What’s wrong„? 56 Why not„? 57 Will (would, could) you please„?
58.How nice to hear from you again./Let me tell you something about the activity./I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th./I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit./I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.59.I’m looking forward to hearing from you. / I’m looking forward to your reply.
亮点
一、the + est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)
例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen。海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education。没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much (再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。) 例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much。我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V .。。(不可否认的„„)
例句:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse。不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道„„)
It is well-known + 句子~~ (全世界都知道„„)
例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us。
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的„„)
例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired。毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of is that + 句子(„„的优点是„„)
例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution。使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子is that + 句子(„„的原因是„„)
例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air。我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子(如此„„以致于„„)
例句:So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it。
时间是如此珍贵,它经不起我们浪费。
十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V (虽然„„)
例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory。
{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不} 虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V (愈„„愈„„)
例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make。
十二、By +Ving, can (借着„„,„„能够„„)
例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy。 借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。 十三、enable + Object(受词)+ to + V („„使„„能够„„)
例句:Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能„„)
例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge。
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是„„的时候了)
例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems。该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、Those who ~~~ („„的人„„)
例句:Those who break the law should be punished。违法的人应该受处罚。
十七、There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不„„)
例句:There is no one but longs to go to college。没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不„„)
例句:Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports。由于考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的) It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)
例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是„„的原因)
例句:Summer is hot.That is the reason why I don't like it。夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 时间,S + 现在完成式。(过去„„年来,„„一直„„)
例句:For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination。过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。
二十二、Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式
例句:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard。自从他上高中,他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V („„是值得的。)
例句:It pays to help others。帮助别人是值得的。
二十四、be based on (以„„为基础)
例句:The progress of the society is based on harmony。社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。 二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
We should spare no effort to beautify our environment。我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (让„„明白„„事)
例句:We should bring home to people the value of working hard。我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
二十七、be closely related to (与„„息息相关)
例句:Taking exercise is closely related to health。做运动与健康息息相关。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V (养成„„的习惯)
We should get into the habit of previewing and reviewing。我们应该养成预习和复习的习惯。 二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, (因为„„)
例句:Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream。
因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么„„!)
例句:What an important thing it is to keep our promise! How important a thing is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
三十一、Leave much to be desired (令人不满意)
例句:The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我们的交通状况令人不满意。
三十二、Have a great influence on ~~ (对„„有很大的影响)
例句:Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
三十三、do good to (对...有益),do harm to (对„„有害)
例句:Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~ (对„„造成一大威胁)
例句:Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
三十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best (尽全力去„„)
例句:We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。
2017中考英语作文评分标准篇二
2017考研英语作文评价目标和评分标准
2017考研英语作文评价目标和评分标准 阅读和作文一直是考研英语中比较重要的两部分,也是最难啃的两部分,很多考生本着“笨鸟先飞”的觉悟,从现在就开始了作文的复习,不过在复习前,还是有必要先对考研英语作文有个总体的了解,才能明确复习的重点和方向。
一、考研写作评价目标
教育部颁布的考试大纲中规定,考生应能写不同类型的应用文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等,以及一般描述性、叙述性、说明性或议论性的文章。写作时,考生应能:
(1)做到语法、拼写、标点正确,用词恰当;
(2)遵循文章的特定文体格式;
(3)合理组织文章结构,使其内容统一、连贯;
(4)根据写作目的和特定读者,恰当选用语域。
二、考研写作评分标准
1.考研写作考试内容
写作部分由A、B两节组成,主要考查考生的书面表达能力。共30分。
A节:考生根据所给情景写出约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用性短文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等。共10分。
B节:考生根据提示信息写出一篇160~200词的短文(标点符号不计算在内)。提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等。共20分。
2.评分原则和方法
(1)虽然A、B两节的考查要点有所不同,但对考生写作能力的基本要求是相同的,所以一般评分标准对两节都适用。但根据两节不同的考查要点,评分时应有不同的侧重点。 A节作文的评分重点在于信息点的覆盖、内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式与语域的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题进行调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的个别关键词或词组,但使用提示语中出现过的句子将被扣分。
B节作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。
(2)评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次,然后按该档次的要求来给分。在评B节作文时,评分人员在档内有1~3分的调节分。
(3)A节作文的字数要求是100词左右。B节作文的字数要求是160~200词。文章长度不符合要求的,酌情扣分。
(4)拼写与标点符合是反映语言准确性的一个方面。评分时,要视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
(5)如书写较差,以致影响读者理解,将分数降低一个档次。
以上这些标准就相当于一本书的说明,看起来没用,但却是读懂读透一本书不可或缺的环节,考生一定要深刻理解并在复习中切实融入对其的理解。
虽然有突破口、也有规律可循,但这并不意味着我们可以一劳永逸、高枕无忧,要知道,想要精通世界上任何一门语言,除非有天生的语言天分,否则偷不得半分懒,只能勤勤恳恳反复练习。一遍不懂读两遍,默念不行就大声念出来,遇到不认识的单词就查,不懂的句子就静下心来拆分结构。总之,读书百遍、其义自现,英语学习之路上没有笨蛋,只有懒人。
2017中考英语作文评分标准篇三
2017年中考英语作文万能句型
2017年中考英语作文万能句型
一、开头句型
1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻,…
3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……
4.As the proverb says, 正如谚语所说的,
5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到,…
6.It„s generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…
7.It„s likely that … 这可能是因为…
8.It„s hardly that… 这是很难的……
9.It„s hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是
11.There„s no denying the fact that…毫无疑问,无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…
13.what„s far more important is that… 更重要的是…
二、衔接句型
1.A case in point is … 一个典型的例子是…
2.As is often the case…由于通常情况下…
3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
4.But the problem is not so simple.Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单,所以……
5.But it„s a pity that… 但遗憾的是…
6.For all that…对于这一切…… In spite of the fact that…尽管事实……
7.Further, we hold opinion that… 此外,我们坚持认为,…
8.However , the difficulty lies in…然而,困难在于…
9.Similarly, we should pay attention to… 同样,我们要注意…
10.not(that)…but(that)…不是,而是
11.In view of the present station。鉴于目前形势
12.As has been mentioned above…正如上面所提到的…
13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说
14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is… 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即 …
三、结尾句型
1.I will conclude by saying… 最后我要说…
2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that…因此,我们有理由相信…
3.All things considered,总而言之 It may be safely said that…它可以有把握地说……
4.Therefore, in my opinion, it„s more advisable…因此,在我看来,更可取的是…
5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论…
6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…通过数据我们得到的结论是,…
7.It can be concluded from the discussion that…从中我们可以得出这样的结论
8.From my point of view, it would be better if…在我看来……也许更好
四、举例句型
1.Let„s take…to illustrate this。
2.let„s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this。
3.Here is one more example。
4.Take … for example。
5.The same is true of…
6.This offers a typical instance of…
7.We may quote a common example of…8.Just think of…
五、常用于引言段的句型
1.Some people think that … 有些人认为…To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below。坦率地说,我不能同意他们的意见,理由如下。
2.For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now。多年来,……一直被视为……,但今天的情况有很大的不同。
3.I believe the title statement is valid because… 我认为这个论点是正确的,因为…
4.I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …我无法完全同意这一观点的… I believe…
5.My argument for this view goes as follows。我对这个问题的看法如下。
6.Along with the development of…, more and more…随着……的发展,越来越多…
7.There is a long-running debate as to whether…有一个长期运行的辩论,是否…
8.It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that…它通常是认为…
2017中考英语作文评分标准篇四
2017考研英语大作文评分标准
2017考研:英语大作文评分标准
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英语作文可能是很多同学的“老大难”,毕竟阅读再难也就是个选择,完形填空也是选择,只有作文是实实在在的要自己手写的,考察的知识点包括对单词,句子,语法应用,搭配关系等等,不知道有没有同学学校的期末考试的时候会帮老师去阅卷,老师一般都会给大家一份评判标准来做参考,那么考研英语也是这样的,不管多么大型的考试,老师们在阅卷的时候都会有一定的评分标准,然后老师们在根据作文的水平灵活掌握,大家可以把本文整理出来的评分标准来做参照物,参考斟酌自己的作文水平,好有方向有目的的提升自己的作文水平。(温馨提示,在此我们只讨论大作文分评分标准)
第一个等级肯定是满分也就是20分,能够在英语作文这里拿到20分,那基本已经是神级标准,可以直接去考英语类的研究生了,这个等级的作文要求是:“内容切题,包括提纲的全部要点,文章通顺,言之有物,语言流畅,句式变化多,用语的面宽。虽有个别不妥之处,但是该生基本功较好,表达能力较强,文章的长度符合要求”。当然,考研英语阅卷到底还是由人来阅卷,不会特别机械的将标准生搬硬套进去,肯定会存在上下浮动一两分的情况。
第二个等级定分大概在16分,这个等级的要求是:“内容切题,包括提纲的全部要点,言之有物,表达基本清楚,文字连贯,句式变化较多,结构和用词有少量的一般性错误,文章的长度符合要求”。同学们可以看到,相对于满分等级的要求,这个等级的要求只是简单降低,但是基本要求比如长度和完成提纲的全部要点等等完全都还在,同时这个等级也应该是大家基本能够达到的等级,大家想一想,英语作文大小加起来30分,分值比例还是很大的,我们做过统计,两个作文加起来在18分到24分之间是正常水平,如果低于这个分数,的话,英语过线会变得很难,这样就要保证在阅读时一个不错或者错一两个,同学们有这个信心吗?如果没有信心的话,那么还是在作文方
面努力一下吧。
第三个等级定分在12分,这个等级的评分标准是:“内容切题,包括提纲的全部要点,表达基本清楚,但结构和用词错误较多,有少数是严重错误,文章的长度符合要求”。这里的“严重错误”一般指的是搭配关系出错,或者连接词使用错误等等,如果你想使用长难句,一定要注意自己写的句子的语法有没有错误,当然如果能够写一个或者几个非常出彩的长难句是很加分的,但是如果有语病,那么可能还会减分,为求稳妥,大家在没有把握的情况下可以换一种表达方式来表达,比如用两三个短句子来代替。
第四档是8分,评判标准为:“内容切题,包括提纲中所列的要点,表达尚可理解,但结构和用词错误多,有些是严重错误。文章的长度基本符合要求”。什么叫做“文章的长度基本符合要求”呢?比如作文要求要求写200词,但是你写了180词左右,那这就叫做“长度基本符合要求”。
第五档是4分,标准为:“短文和题意勉强有关,但条理不清,篇章结构不完整,语句错误多,且多为严重错误——词不达意”。这个基本上就是老师看在你写了给的面子分了,我相信准备考研的同学们,英语作文都不会是这个水平的,假如真的有,那就努力吧。
是的,我们还有最后一个等级的评判标准,就是2分,标准是:“条理不清,词不达意;语句错误都为严惩错误,字数不足”。这种分数就好像朋友圈里你发了动态,朋友给你点赞,告诉你“朕已阅”这种的意思。
在评分标准之外,此外,还想要提醒大家一点,就是书写,既然目前考研统考不大可能实现机考,纸质考试肯定是要自己写作文的,那么字迹工整清晰,卷面整洁这些基本的要求还是要做到的,假如你的作文真的是只有8分的水平,字迹清楚美观,阅卷老师觉得赏心悦目,肯定会在权限范围内多给你一定的分数,全国考研统考,分数线都是定死的,能多一分就是多给自己争取一个机会啊,所以同学们还是真的需要特别注意英语作文的写作的。
上面讲述的评分要点及其写作要点,考生们要认真学习,牢记方法和技巧。何凯文编写的2017《考研英语写作高分攻略》这本书对我们的考试帮助很大,考生们要好好利用哦,加油。
2017中考英语作文评分标准篇五
2017中考英语复习:英语写作三部曲
2017中考英语复习:英语写作三部曲
英文书面表达是中考试卷中的最后一部分内容,分值设置通常为十到十五分。它考查考生的英语表达能力,看是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。通常,该题对写作的目的、内容、体裁及字数都有明确的要求,会提供一些材料,如文字、图画和图表。因此,中考英语书面表达题不同于汉语写作,做到以下几点即可:审清题目要求,能读懂题;组织好所提供的材料;连词成句,连句成篇,用明白、通顺、恰当、得体的英语表达出来。毕竟是初级写作,篇幅和难度方面要求并不高。
写作的过程应当是有计划、有步骤地展开。可以把这一过程划分为三部曲,即写作前、写作中、写作后。
一、写作前
不可急于动笔,要先审题,列出要点,写出提纲。接下来,脑海中确定文章的体裁与时态。初中阶段所接触的体裁主要有:记叙文、应用文、议论文及说明文。其中,应用文又包括信件、电子邮件文稿、寻物启示、失物招领、请假条、留言条、通知等不同的形式,这些都是生活中常用的。至于时态,要依据表达的内容来灵活应用。初中阶段较常用的主要时态有:一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。其他时态多为必要时穿插使用。平时有必要积累一些有代表性的,与生活贴近的文章,用以参考。{2017中考英语作文评分标准}.
二、写作中
动笔前要有清晰的轮廓,即上述的要点、体裁、时态,并可回顾一下已学过的类似篇目。但在考试时,最好不要直接写在试卷上,以免修改时涂改太多。先写在草稿纸上为宜。写作中应注意三大问题:文章所要求的格式,逻辑顺序和遣词造句。以下主要谈格式的运用与过渡性和连接性词汇的运用。
(一)常见格式
信件的格式:
[Dear Betty,
Thank you for your last letter. Here are…
Love,
Lucy\&]
电子邮件的格式:
[Subject:My dog From: Thomas\&Nancy,
Good news! I have a new pet…
Thomas\&]
日记的格式:
[Friday,April 10th Fine
Today our school held a sports meeting on the playground…\&]
(二)、写作中的遣词造句
1、使用熟悉的,已掌握的词汇和句型;少用难拼写的词及复合句,多用容易词、简单句。
2、学会用同义词及同义句替换不会写的词句。
3、使用过渡性、总结性的词汇。
如:文章及段落起始的用语:to begin with, first of all
表示先后次序的词:first, second, then, next, finally
表示因果关系的词:so, because, as
表示并列关系的词:and, or
表示转折关系的词:but, however
表示举例的词: for example , such as, on the one hand, on the other hand
表示总结性的词:in fact, in a word, in general
4、多用固定词组,为文章增色。
5、直接用英语表达,避免用汉语思维。
6、简单发挥,不能脱离中心。(下转第18页)
(上接第16页)
7、符合字数要求。
三、写作后
在草稿纸上完成文章后,不要立即誊写在试卷上,以下几步也极其重要。
(一)再次查看题目要求,看有无遗漏。
(二)看语言是否通顺,语法是否正确。包括大小写、标点、时态、语态、主谓一致及词语搭配等。
(三)查看字数是否符合要求。通常要求为100字左右。
(四)认真书写于试卷上。字迹规范、美观,卷面整洁。
经历了这样的三部曲,写作任务基本结束。
此外,学生还应了解老师怎样把握评判尺度。以满分为15分为例,可参看以下五个档次的评分细则。
一级(13-15分)
1、所写内容符合所提供的各种信息,有创意;
2、句子正确通顺,或只有个别小错;
3、单词拼写错误不超过4个。
二级(10-12分){2017中考英语作文评分标准}.
1、所写的内容与所提供的各种信息基本符合;{2017中考英语作文评分标准}.{2017中考英语作文评分标准}.
2、句子基本正确。表达错误较少,表达较通顺;
3、单词拼写错误不超过6个。
三级(7-9分)
1、所写的内容与试卷所提供的信息基本相符;
2、句子表达错误较多,但尚可读懂;
3、单词拼写错误不超过10个。
四级(4-6分)
1、所写内容与试卷提供的信息不符; 2、只有少数句子表达正确; 3、拼写错误在10个以上。 五级(3分以下) 只有个别词语可读,但通篇不知所云。
2017中考英语作文评分标准篇六
备战2017中考英语作文题热门话题
备战2017中考英语作文题热门话题
一、 学术文化篇
1.沉迷网络游戏
题目:李华沉迷于电脑游戏中,影响了学习。作为他的好朋友,你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整,语言流畅。 提示词:give up concentrate on be (become)interested in
★ 范文
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.
Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
2.怎样学好英语
世界在发展,文化在交融,英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验,请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。
要求:1. 词数:80—100词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
2. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
★ 范文
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
二、 素质教育篇
3.如何减压让生活更美好
许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:
(1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;
(2) 我的压力是什么;
(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。
★ 范文
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
4.学做好人好事
今年是学习雷锋五十周年纪念日,雷锋同志说过:“我要把有限的生命,投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”
请写一篇意思连贯,符合逻辑,不少于80字的作文。
在作文中,简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情,为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。
★ 范文
Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character. Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “learn from Leifeng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.
To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.
I strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of us treat Leifeng as our model and copy his spirit.
三、 现代生活篇
5.怎样保持健康的生活习惯
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。
信息提示:健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。
要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
★ 范文
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
6.毕业感想
初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。
提示词语: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
★ 范文
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as
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