中考学生作文
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中考学生作文篇一
2014年中考学生考场作文样例
中考学生作文篇二
中学生作文
不一样的课堂 在缤纷的人生旅途中,我们品味着酸甜,吞咽着苦辣。可有一种力量会使我们在前进道路中的脚步变得更加坚定与无畏。这便是父母的启迪、支持与关爱。
记得,去年暑假里的一天,我们全家出门旅游。在大都市繁华的街道上走了许久,我的脚上磨出了许多小水泡。爸爸和哥哥却好像没有看见一样继续在前面走着,而我由于顾疼孤零零被落在了后面。看见他们轻快的步伐、满心的愉快,我的心里莫名升起一丝羡慕。可这羡慕又能怎样,不愿在众人面前掉眼泪的个性,让我咬牙忍着疼痛,拖着可怜的小脚丫往前赶路。爸爸终究不忍将我落下太远,走到我身旁说:“前面有一家药店,我给你钱,你自己去买创可贴。”我像是抓到了救命稻草:“爸爸,你陪我去呗!”爸爸微笑着看着我:“乖女儿,你自己去吧,爸爸相信你能行!”我有些不情愿,可又不肯认输——自己不行。我一瘸一拐地买来创可贴,自己找了个安静的地方脱下鞋袜,细心地贴在破了的水泡处……
生活中,爸爸在许多事情上都是交给我自己处理。有时,我很生气;有时,会有些委屈:我的爸爸为什么和别人的爸爸不一样呢?慢慢地,我长大了,也明白了。我为有这样一个爸爸而高兴、自豪。爸爸让我学会了坚强,让我变得更加自立自强,使我真正明白了在大树下不受风吹雨打的树苗是难以成才的。 我的人生旅程才刚刚开始,可回首望一望有老爸相伴的那一串串或深或浅,或正或歪的脚印。我知道,有了爸爸——这位我一生中的导师的指引,我一定能走的更稳、更远、更精彩!
中考学生作文篇三
中考学生作文1
2011中考学生作文
I’m a member of DIY Club
DIY Club makes my life colourful. I’m glad to be a member of DIY Club. Our teacher usually lets us draw some beautiful pictures and make some models. If I have good imagination, I can create an attractive model. Sometimes, we draw some pictures of our daily life, and use some words to describe each picture as well. This helps us improve many skills. When I meet some difficulties, our teacher always helps me to overcome them. We help each other and share our happiness together. It seems that nothing is impossible if you put all your heart into it.
DIY Club makes my life full of happiness. It’s rewarding and helpful. I feel happy and glad as such a member. (7+8+3)
I’m a member of Animal Lovers
As a Grade Nine student, I’m quite glad to be a member of Animal Lovers. In this special social group , I’m responsible for designing posters to help people around me realize the importance of protecting animal, especially those in danger. Acting as a member of Animal Lovers, I feel honored and excited as I believe I’m doing something meaningful to the society. Joining Animal Lovers not only increases my awareness of protecting animals, but also adds a brilliant touch to my daily life.
I’m a member of the Red Cross
I’m glad to be a member of the Red Cross. The experience of being a volunteer in this organization is both interesting and meaningful. Every year, I help raise money for the poor. Sometimes, my team and I visit the elderly people. What’s more, I learn some skills of helping injured people. Being a member of the Red Cross makes my life colourful. I’m very proud of to say that I’m a member of the Red Cross! (7+8+3)
I’m a member of my class
I’m glad to be a member of my class. I can study and play with my classmates. We often help each other. I usually tell some interesting stories to my classmates. I also clean the classroom sometimes and never feel bored. I feel happy as such a member. I learn the importance of team work and how to make friends. I become more confident than before. As a result, I am very thankful to my class. (7+8+3)
I’m a member of Animal Lovers
Nowadays more and more people pay attention to protect the animals. I’m glad to be a member of Animal Lovers. As a member in it, I usually take care of the homeless cats. In addition, I stop others from hurting the birds with my friends from time to time. I feel proud of myself as such a member. I think it’s important for us to be kind to animals. It not only protects the environment but also makes us happy. I can learn responsibility from the work. Therefore, I’m keen on protecting the animals and I’ll be a member of Animal Lovers forever. (7+8+3//7+8+2)
I’m a member of Computer Group
To me, it’s great pleasure to be a member of Computer Group. I joined it 3 years ago and I soon found it interesting to write applications. Thus, I spent all my spare time reading books
about programming and writing my own ones. Often I had to test and application over and over. However, now I can easily write an application to help my friends and teachers. This makes me feel extremely happy. I’m really proud of myself to be a member of Computer Group!
I’m a member of Animal Lovers
I’m glad to be a member of Animal Lovers. In this group, I always adopt homeless animals and take good care of them with other members. What’s more, we sometimes raise some money for the SPCA. I’m proud of myself and feel happy all the time to be such a member because I can not only make friends with animals but also learn how to care for other people. What great fun it is to be a member of Animal Lovers! (7+8+3)
I’m a member of my family
Family is a person’s best shelter, it provides care, love and happiness for a man. Everyone has his own family, so do I. I’m very glad to be a member of my family. In my family, my father works hard and earns money for us, he intends to make us lead a comfortable life. My mother takes charge of some important things in my family, and she does the housework. I try my best study hard and sometimes I help my parents to do not only housework but also some other things.
I feel very proud being a member of my family. On one hand, the positive atmosphere in my family spreads an active attitude in my mind. It helps me a lot and makes me get rid of my bad habits in addition, I learn how to face and overcome a coming problem. On the other hand, my parents gives me care and love all the time. So I get aware of the importance of love and care little by little and bit by bit. Besides, my parents teach me how to respect other people and how to live independently. The knowledge they teach me is really useful and I’m really thankful to my parents.
Family is very precious for a man. No one can live a happy life without his own family. So let’s cherish our families and enjoy being members of our own families! (7+8+3)
I’m a member of “F1 League”
Surprise to hear that? Well, actually the “F1 League” is the name of our class. It means “Forever One”. I regard our “F1 League” as a beloved family, which is made up of my dearest friends and teachers. I have been the monitor for 4 years since I first came to this class. Tracing back to the glory memories, I not only participated in different activities, but also led my “league members” to challenge ourselves in study. I once held the “Food Festival” and the “English Speaking Contest” with my friends. My creative ideas have always inspired others. I can never be happier to be a member of it. My experience as the “League Leader” has brought me unforgettable memories and taught me how to work as a team. I am really proud of myself as a league member. (7+8+3//6+8+3)
When I was only a little girl, I took up reading as my hobby. Now I am a member of a reading club. I am very glad about it. All of the members share our own books with each other. Even if we read the books from morning till night, we never get tired of reading. We enjoy ourselves all the time. In my opinion, reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.(7+8+3)
I ‘m a member of singing and dancing club
Undoubtedly, various activities are of great significance. As far as I am concerned, being a member of singing and dancing clubs enriches my life and broadens my view. I sing and dance with my friends in this club. I do feel excited for the following reasons. Firstly, singing and dancing serve as a private escape from the heavy school life and satisfy my emotional needs. Additionally I have gained friendship in this club. It’s really a priceless treasure. To put everything in a shell, so fantastic is singing and dancing club that I’ve fallen in love with it.
Once I discovered Green Peace, a global environmental protection organization and join it. I’m glad to be a member of it. As a student, I don’t have to be a volunteer or to travel around the world, I don’t eat sharks’ fins and I don’t use APP paper which is made from trees of rainforests. I do my best not to pollute the environment and give others suggestions about environmental protection. Now my friends care about the environment more often and I’m proud to be in this organization with millions of members who want to save our planet. (7+7+3)
I’m a member of the Science Club and I’m glad to be a member of it. I am not only in charge of the experiments, but also responsible for interviewing our new members. Many people want to join us because our activities are interesting. From our study, I know how insects communicate with each other, how plants live in the deep sea without light. I feel proud as such a member because I play an important role, my friends need me. I really love our Science Club. (7+7.5+2)
I’m a member of this world
Everyday, we can see some wars on TV and newspapers. Think about it: If there’s a war, people will be hurted, and some people who lives nearby will possibly die. They had beautiful life before, but now they are worried everyday. We live in the same world, so we are the member of this world, we are sisters and brothers! I will be a volunteer to help other people and stop the wars all over the world, because I’m a member of this world. I can’t finish this great mission myself, so I need your help. Let’s be good members of this world!
Reading is to mind is just as food is to body. To my joy, I am a member of reading club. I can do some reading on a great many subjects. I can also share my view with other members in the club and gain more knowledge. What’s more, just imagine the scene that communicating with famous writer and understanding their thoughts, that will be a most sweet memory in my whole life. I really feel confident and happy as such a
member. I believe, with the experience of reading, I will be more successful in the future. (14)
I’m glad to be a member of society
I’m glad to be a member of society.
Every weekend, we pick up rubbish in order to clean our environment. Besides, we pay a visit to old people who live alone. We dancing and singing to make them happy. We also tell jokes to them, then we all laugh happily.
This group is meaningful. It teaches me to help others as possible as I can And I believe that if you always be helpful to others, some day when you are in trouble, someone will give you a hand in return.
I am glad and proud to be a member of society. How meaningful it is!
(5+6.5+2)
中考学生作文篇四
2014中考作文范文
2014中考作文范文
1.【2014青岛】
现在,有的同学不吃早饭就去上学。请针对这种现象写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.学生不吃早饭的原因。2.不吃早饭对学生的影响(至少两个方面)3.你认为应该如何合理安排早餐?{中考学生作文}.
范文(1) Some of us go to school without breakfast. We stay up late to study. We prefer sleeping a little longer to getting up early. So we don’t have enough time for breakfast.
In the morning we usually have four classes. It’s a long time before lunch. If we don’t have breakfast, we may feel hungry in class and won’t concentrate on our study. What’s more, it’s bad for our health.{中考学生作文}.
From now on, we’d better get up a little earlier, and have noodles for breakfast. It’s also good to have bread, milk and eggs. It’s better to have some fruit after breakfast.
Let’s have breakfast every day. (98words)
范文(2) Some of us go to school without breakfast. One reason is that they may not feel like eating anything early in the morning. Another reason could be that they don’t think the food is delicious.
If they don’t have breakfast, they’ll get hungry during the classes, so they won’t listen to the teacher carefully. Even worse, It’ll be bad for their health. A growing child needs enough nutrition.
Breakfast provides the energy our body needs. I really hope everyone can have breakfast at a regular time. Milke, eggs, bread, vegetables and fruits are good for us. A good breakfast is really necessary for us.(97 words)
2.【2014达州】
目前,举国畅行勤俭节约、反对铺张浪费。我们中学生应当在这些行动中该做些什么呢?请根据下面要求,联系实际,适当发挥,以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 参考词汇:junk food, order the food, eat up, restaurant, healthy food.
Save Food and Eat Healthily
As middle school students, it’s our duty to do something for it.
To save food, we should remember that at any time we should eat up all the food and shouldn’t waste any of food. Especially, when we dine out, we should order the food that we can rightly eat. Because many people in our country don’t have enough food to eat.
To eat healthily, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food at school or at home. Of course, we may eat in the restaurant in case we have no time, but not too often.
At last, we hope that we all work together at once.
3.【巴中市2014】
“中国梦”代表每个中国人的梦想。作为中学生,你对未来又怎样的憧憬?对人生有怎样的期盼?请你围绕“梦想”这一话题,根据提示信息写一篇英语短文。
内容要点提示:1.我的梦想是什么? 2.我为什么有这样的梦想? 3.我将怎样实现我的梦想?
提示词:achieve one’s dream, hold on to, difficulty, give up
My dream I dream of becoming a teacher when I’m older, and I hope to work in my old school. Because I want to reward my teachers for teaching me so well, I’ll also try my best to teach my students as my teachers taught me. To achieve my dream, I’ll have to study harder from now on, I’ll never give up my dream no matter what difficulties I met. I’m sure my dream will come true as long as I hold on to it.
If everyone does so, I strongly believe our China dreams must come true and China will get better and better.
4.【2014抚州】{中考学生作文}.
未来很美好,你长大以后打算做什么?厨师、记者、艺术家------描述一个你梦想的职业。
My dream job
When I grow up, I’m going to be a singer. I love music and I’m good at singing. I want to be a singer like Lady Gaga. I can sing beautiful songs for people and make them happy. And also I can make much money. Then I can buy a beautiful house with a garden for my parents because they do so much for me.
To realize my dream, first, I’m going to join the singing club and practise singing as often as possible. Second, I’m going to be a student at a music school. At last, I’m going to take part in some singing competitions to improve myself. I hope my dream can come true.
5.【莆田市2014】
“平安出行,文明乘车”已成为人们普遍关心的一个社会热门话题。请你根据图表中所提示的内容要点用英语写一篇短文。
内容要点:
参考范文:
How can we keep safe when we go out? First, we must obey the traffic rules, especially when we cross the road. Second, we are supposed to help children and the old to cross the road. Third, we should be careful when we get on a bus.
While we are on a bus, we should remember not to spit in public or throw litter around. Neither should we speak loudly to disturb others. We’re expected to offer our seats to people in need. What's
more, smoking is not allowed on the bus.
In short, as students we should not only keep safe when we go out, but also be ready to help others.
6.【2014兰州】
学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士,并结合自己的观点,以“How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,谈{中考学生作文}.
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves?
Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we
must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and
safely. Besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last but not
least(最后但也是很重要的), summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.
In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
7.【2014滨州】
假如你校将举行以“中学生自我保护”为主题的英语征文活动,请根据下面的提示写短文。内容提示:{中考学生作文}.
1.不带管制刀具(restricted knives)到校。 2.上下楼梯不要拥挤
3.注意饮食安全 4.注意交通安全,遇到紧急情况(emergency)要报警。
How to protect ourselves
How to protect ourselves is especially important to us students.
First, don’t take restricted knives to school. They might hurt our classmates or ourselves . Secondly, there are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Thirdly, we should eat more healthy food and we’d better keep away from junk food, At last, we must pay attention to the traffic. Remember to call the police for help when we have an emergency.
It’s our duty to protect ourselves. Let’s start from today.
8.【2014安徽】
假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在署假期间对学生的.要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。
●家庭安全:小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗;●游泳安全:不独自去游泳,不去河、湖游泳; ●交通安全: 过马路要当心,不在马路上玩耍。提示词:electricity(n. 电)
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow. Let me tell you something about them.
We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave. Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes. If we really want to, we must go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers. What’s more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyone should watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first. Have a good summer holiday!
10.【2014河南】
你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My special____”为题用英语写一篇短文,描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。
My special grandma
My grandma is special to me because we’re like friends. She always helps me out whenever I am in trouble. There are no secrets between us.
When I am with my grandma, we spend a lot of happy time together. I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything. My grandma is good at many things. One thing she’s best at is cooking. She often cooks delicious food for me. I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well.
11.【2013聊城】
在父亲节(6月16日)来临之际,请你根据下表提供的信息,写一篇以“My father”为题的英语作文,
My father
My father is a 40-year-old math teacher. He is tall and fat with short hair and big eyes. He always works hard. His classes are lively and interesting and deeply loved by his students.
My father is an honest and kind man. He often helps other children and me with our maths. My father’s hobby is playing table tennis. We often play table tennis together at the weekends. My father is not only a good father but also a good friend. I have learned a lot from him. I love my father very much.
12.【江宁区2014一模】
今年央视春晚,一曲《时间都去哪儿了》让许多观众深受感动。假设你是九年级一班的李明,你将代表班级参加学校举行的“感恩父母”英语演讲比赛。演讲内容包括:
1.讲述一件你和父母之间难忘的事情; 2.你对“感恩父母”的认识;3.具体的感恩行动(至少两点);
4.表达祝福与愿望。 fever at midnight. I felt so terrible. My mother took me to hospital immediately. She took good care of me without a rest during the whole night.
My parents give me almost everything. However, they don’t want to get any reward from me. From now on, I will help my parents do more housework. My mother’s birthday is coming, I will make a birthday card for her. I must thank her by studying hard. I hope my parents are in good health forever.
14.【2011郴州】
假如你是王明,你将代表学校参加郴州市屮学生英诂演讲比赛。演讲的题目是 We should help parents
parents do housework. Now many students are too lazy to do housework. But I think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy with their work and tired after work. I often help my parents do many chores. In the morning, I will make the bed and water flowers. They are relaxing and interesting.In the evening, I often clean the room and take out the trash. When I see the tidy room, I feel proud of myself. My parents are pleased with me. I think it's our duty to help our parents with some chores.
15.【2012新疆阜康】
在阳光雨露里,我已长高、长壮,但这还不是全部,长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是……,成长的点点滴滴,久久不能忘记。请以I am not a child any more为题,记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事,表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。
I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others. It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My
中考学生作文篇五
中考小作文训练
中考小作文训练
考点精析:
小作文是近年来中考常见的作文试题,它要求学生熟练地运用某种表达方式,在较短的篇幅中精心构思成文,以考查学生的作文能力。小作文的主要特点体现在“小”字上,它一般都有严格的字数限制,通常在200-300字,有极强的规定性、约束性,要求考生“带着镣铐跳舞”。因篇幅所限,其写作语言要求要言不烦,惜墨如金,根据题目指定的范围,大胆取舍,着力突出主要内容和内容的主要方面,使文章中心明确。小作文虽然“小”,但它仍是一篇完整的作文,正所谓“麻雀虽小,五脏俱全”,它仍然要求有开头与结尾,有脉络与层次,有过渡与照应,以形成有机的整体。
相对于大作文,小作文的文体要求一般都比较明确,涵盖了记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文等文体,还有作文修改,题型丰富,方式灵活。
一、小记叙文。一般不要求有完整的记叙要素,而是以事件的某个环节或一个人的某个方面为中心,突出一种表达方式或一种描写方法,勾勒出一个精彩镜头,描绘出一个动人的画面,取得特写的表达效果。
二、小说明文。不要求面面俱到,但要注意恰当地选择说明方法,合理安排说明顺序,精心运用说明语言,表述清楚对象的特色。其主要方式有:1.说明统计图表:这是结合有关的数学知识,注重实用、分析型的试题。2.介绍图画内容:一般是给一幅漫画,要求说明画面内容。3.介绍一种学习方法:或查字典的方法、或写作文的方法、或学习某一学科的方法等。4.介绍一本好书:或文学名著、或科技知识读本、或有关某一方面的专门知识读本等。
三、小议论文。要求熟练地掌握议论这种表达方式,阐明一种观点或阐释一个事理。主要形式为给材料作文,或写短评、读后感,或要求归纳论点、补写论据或续写。形式非常灵活,是写作考查的“重头戏”。可以是新闻热点的点评,名言警句的阐释,不良现象的针贬,人生哲理的品悟等等。
四、应用文:语文课本中要求学生练习的应用文有十几种,这些都曾经作为小作文的考试内容。近几年,大部分省市都不考应用文,所以这类试题有所减少。但是,从2001年起,全国不少省市又开始重新重视起了应用文的考查,这也是实用性语文教学观所致吧。
五、修改文章:俗话说:“文章不是写出来的,而是改出来的。”修改文章是提高学生作文能力的很好的方法。
解题思路与技巧:
一、写小记叙文:注意题目要求,调动日常积累,用生动形象的语言完成写作。
二、写小说明文:1.说明统计图表:要运用所学数学知识,先分析统计数据,辨析各数据间的相互关系,揭示其蕴含的规律,总结出图表的结论,然后举一二数据为例加以说明。
2.介绍图画内容:先仔细观察,弄清画面各部分的关系,借用方位词准确全面地介绍画面内容。注意是“客观”说明,不要编故事。3.说明某种学习方法:说明的重点应包括方法内容、具体操作、实际效果等。4.介绍一本好书:要介绍书的主要内容,最吸引你的地方,书的价值,还要讲明你之所以喜欢它的原因。
三、写小议论文:写作时要考虑论点、论据、论证三要素。因为其“小”,所以要开门见山,单刀直入,第一句话最好明确论点,然后展开论述,或举出一两个恰当的事例,或引用或强化中心。
四、写应用文:先明确考查的是哪一种应用文,再按照这种应用文的格式要求,下笔成文。另外还要注意语言的简明、连贯、得体。
五、进行作文修改:应该说,修改作文有一定的难度,所以中考中的此类试题一般都有具体的题目。考生按照题目的提示进行思考,逐项答题即可。
典型例题:
例1.材料:中考结束了,李鸣、王强、徐帆到校外散步,望见前面一片如茵碧草,他们高兴极了,想在上面好好躺一会儿,以消除几天来的疲劳。走近草坪时,见旁边立着一块牌子,上面写着:小草正在工作,请勿打扰。要求:假如你就是他们三人中的一个,请将你看到这块牌子的心情、行动描写出来。字数不超过200字。
分析:此题要求结合生活积累,运用大胆想象,写出人物的心理和行动,实际也是通过考试对学生进行环境保护意识的培养。
参考例文:
这块牌子
望着这块牌子,我下意识地瞅了瞅身边的小草。它们斜卧着娇嫩的身子,正在这春的召唤中积极孕育、勃勃拔节。蓦然,一股羞愧之情涌上心头:“小草正在蓬勃地生长,它们要用旺盛的生命力迎接阳春三月的来临,做春的使者。我又怎能为了消除一时的疲惫,去抑制它生命的勃发,阻碍它迎春的壮举?”想到这里,我的脚不禁朝后挪去,怀着一种怜惜而崇敬的目光望着这如茵碧草。小草,你尽情地生长吧,去吟唱春的生命赞歌!
评语:这是一篇非常优秀的小作文。作者在很短的时间内构思成文,把小草喻为春的使者,并由此联想到自己不能“为了消除一时的疲惫,去抑制它生命的勃发,阻碍它迎春的壮举”,表示应保护绿色。心理活动细腻、动人。
例2.阅读下面的材料,按要求作文:
某国一位女士来到中国一所小学,找了五位小朋友,要求他们配合做一件事情。这位女士拿出一只瓶子,里面有五个小球,每个小球有一根线牵着。女士对五位小朋友说:“你们每人拽住一只小球,在7秒钟内必须全部从瓶中拽出,否则就会被瓶中的水淹死。记住,瓶口只容得下一只小球,谁的小球出得慢,谁就有被淹死的危险。”五个小朋友中最大的一位想了想,然后和其他四个小朋友耳语了几句,之后示意女士可以下令了。女士说:“开始!”只见年龄最小的小朋友最先将小球拽出,第二、三、四个小球随后出来,最后拽出来的是那位年龄最大的小朋友。7秒钟内5只小球全部拽出。这位女士被眼前中国小朋友的举动惊呆了,接着便流出感动的泪水。她说:“这个试验我在其他国家做过好几次了,那些小朋友都争着往外拽,结果挤在瓶口谁也出不来,全淹死在里面了。中国的小朋友了不起!”
要求:①根据这则材料,确立一个观点,写一篇议论文;②题目自拟,不少于200字。 分析:这是一道给材料的小作文,要求就所给材料确立观点,写一篇小议论文。
动手写作之前,先要分析所给材料,看从哪一个角度人手更好。比如这则材料就可以从以下几个角度确立观点:①要有合作精神;②团结就是力量;③要有秩序;④欲速则不达;⑤不能低估组织者的作用;⑥要临危不乱(镇定、冷静)等。
参考例文:
合作精神
一个人要想成功,除了自身要有较高的素质,还必须要有能够同别人合作的精神。如同上面例子中的五位小朋友,若都为自己的利益着想,不团结合作,那么一个也活不了;相反,若团结起来,则全部可以生还。由此引申到一个民族,若想在世界民族之林中占有一席之地,那么这个民族必须有极强的凝聚力。以前的中国人曾被称为“一个人是一条龙,三个人是一条虫”,就是因为“窝里斗”,团结精神不强,这样怎能不衰落呢?我们一定要虚心向这五位小朋友学习合作精神,因为“团结就是力量”。
评语:观点明确,论述由小到大,语言精练。
巩固练习:
1、为学校团委拟一则纪念“五·四”座谈会的通知。主题是:立志成才,报效祖国。与会人员:校团委委员、各班团支部书记及团员代表1人。开会时间:“五·四”前一天下午3时。地点:团委活动室。出通知时间:开会前一天。要求格式正确,表达准确、流畅,条理清楚。
2、新风小区附近的新风中学的初二⑴班学生,在班委会的组织和带领下,经常到小区参加社区服务活动,如打扫环境卫生,帮助孤寡老人买米买菜,受到小区居民的高度赞扬。请你以新风小区居委会的名义,给新风中学写一封感谢信。
要求:①符合感谢信的基本格式;
②写清感谢的原因;
③用得体的语言写出感激之情;
④正文150字左右。
3、请你根据下面提供的内容,代刘欢同学写一则启事。
①拾物者:刘欢,建平中学初三⑴班学生。
②拾物:黑色小包一个。(已交班主任李老师)
③时间:2001年5月15日下午第三节课。
④包内物品:钥匙一串,电话卡一张,人民币50元(其中拾元币4张,伍元币2张)。 ⑤拾物地点:校内篮球场边。
4、育才中学团委会决定今年暑假组织一次丰富多彩的“中学生科技夏令营”活动。初三⑵班的李明同学是班上有名的科技爱好者,他想参加此次活动,请你代他写一份申请书。 要求:①格式正确;②说明认识和理由;③不超过加0字。
5、下面文字选自一位同学的讲演稿,请指出错误并写明修改办法。
①同学们,我们不能忘记,曾有多少志士仁人不惜抛头颅,洒热血,为祖国的兴亡而英勇奋斗;②我们也不能总沉醉于我国有世界上所没有的万里长城和四大发明。③作为祖国二十一世纪的建设者,我们将要担负的责任并不轻快,④我们更不能不忘记,当年少先队员的誓词——准备着,时刻准备着……
①中“ ”,应 。
②中“ ”,应 。
③中“ ”,应 。
④中“ ”,应 。
6、对对联:
⑴上联:读好书乐趣无穷
下联:
⑵上联:
下联:学子论古今
7、下面是芳草文学社给春泥文学社的贺信草稿,请根据有关提示修改完善: 贺信
春泥文学社:
欣闻贵社成立十周年庆典活动即将举行,谨向贵社致以热烈的祝贺!
校园文学社是文学的春泥,春泥滋养着文学的幼苗;社员的作品是烂漫的山花,山花装点出多彩的春天。贵社成立以来,活跃了校园文化生活,为全面推进素质教育作出了很大贡献。那几十期自编自印的社刊,那数百篇发表于省市报刊的美文,那一批批蜚声校园的文学栋梁,都令人钦佩和羡慕。
太阳每天都是新的,春天的脚步不会停止。我们要互相学习,共同进步。我们深信,贵社十周年庆典活动的举行,必将为我市中学生文学社团的蓬勃发展作出新的、更大的贡献。
2004年3月20日
①格式方面有两处错误,请在原文上改正。
②贺信中有语句对春泥文学社的评价不是恰如其分,请找出并改正。
A.将评价不当的语句画上横线;
B.改正为: 。
③有一个句子不得体,且与祝贺的中心关系不密切,请在原文上删除。
④漏写了贺信必要的祝愿语,请补写在横线上。
8、原本蔚蓝明净的万里长空,被沙尘暴搅得乌烟瘴气;原本洁白无暇的故宫汉白玉雕栏,被酸雨腐蚀得伤痕累累;原本“桃花流水鳜鱼肥”的母亲河,被废水污染得浊流恶臭、痛苦呻吟……
你能为保护地球母亲做些什么?你所在的地方存在什么样的环保问题急待解决?请你以“新兴市光明中学”的名义写一份倡议书,针对当地的环保问题提出切实可行的措施。注意:不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名。
中考学生作文篇六
写给即将面临中考学生的一封信
写给1306班全体学生的一封信
亲爱的1306班全体美男靓女们:
今天以一封信的方式和你们进行一次谈话,或许这样更能让你们在老师的字里行间用心去静静的感受老师的殷切期望和对你们的鼓励。在人生的最关键时刻,本不想再多说什么,怕无形之中给你增加压力,但老师还是忍不住在这里对你们说出心里的话,希望你能正确理解。现在是你学习的最关键时期,已进入了中考的冲刺阶段。我理解你们在这个时期既紧张又困倦疲惫的心理。每天在题海中搏来搏去,被你称之为苦难的延时课,放假回家,别人休息游玩的时候,你们还要继续在努力学习。。。
学生们,这是人生必修的一课,我们不是背那段”天将降大任于斯人…必先…。”要知道,人生的青少年时期就是求学奋斗的阶段,在积累你的知识财富。人生就好比登山,每迈出一步,就跨上了另一个高度的台阶,你感觉累了、倦了,放慢了前进的脚步,那么这场比赛的结果就是你站在了对手的脚下,下一场比赛时,你们就分别站在了不同的起跑线上。
人生的每一个高度,所看到的和领略的风光是不一样的,当成功的人在领略一览众山小的时候,你却在望着前面的大山,有的只是无限的追悔。 时光已逝,你已经没有重新再来的机会了。人生就像只能有一次翻阅机会的书,如果你草草的翻过,你的一生便什么也领略不到。
临近中考,我知道你们现在很希望能够把自己的状态调整到最佳,能按自己的意愿去上一所高中。那就让我来告诉你们,最好的状态就是保持镇定,按复习计划进行。考进最好的学校,接受最好的教育,是每一个父母的心愿。因为一所好的学校,能够有
一个良好的学习气氛! 自我提升比较快,是人生的一转折点!学问是你人生最好的财富,真正陪你走过一生的是只有你自己的思想,属于你的才华。中考是个台阶,是一块界碑。不论你是站在台上,还是站在台下,这都是你今天努力的结果,而你此时此刻正在铺就着这条通向成功彼岸的路。我能感受到近段时间,你们体验到考试焦虑带来的紧张感,现在老师用一组最新的数据告诉你,这种感觉对于考前的孩子有多正常。
北京大学心理学专家团队对中考的考生进行了一次大规模详尽的问卷调查发现:具有紧张不安情绪反应的学生占90%以上,具有严重反应的占30%---40%以上,这说明,在考试期间,由于考试压力引发担心紧张的情绪体验是很普遍的,不是你一个人有,大家都有。因此老师告诉你中考之前有焦虑是正常的,没有焦虑才是不正常的。所以我们不能走极端:要么颓废,或者太焦虑。老师希望你们记住:你们是自己情绪的主人,你们一定要相信自己,你能够管理好它!
亲,你们是自己最忠实的朋友。因此在任何时候自己都要支持自己,鼓励自己,所以你要学会和自己对话。这不是心理暗示,这是支持。因此老师建议你们现在就想一些鼓励自己的话并把它写出来,贴在书桌或者家里醒目处,经常读一读。
对待好每堂课,每一个问题,珍惜好现在拥有的每一分每一秒,能够在最后的关头战胜自己,战胜自己的懒惰、战胜自己的消极、战胜自己的自卑、战胜自己的马虎,发挥出最大的潜能,最后战胜自己的对手。
老师写了这么多,只是想让你知道,你们并不是孤军奋战,我和你们在一起,我永远爱你们。这爱决不会以你是否考上某校来衡量。
老师最后讲一句:就算脚下的路再难走,只有自己走过才懂得行路的艰辛。中考是一次体验的过程,结果不重要,就算万一考不好,我们相信你进入其它学校后还可以重新来过。放下不必要的思想包袱,展开你的手脚,勇敢地去迎接中考的洗礼,现在和老师和你们一同大声的喊出来:让暴风雨来得更猛烈些吧!!
王战军
2016.4