17年阐北一模英语作文中考

17年阐北一模英语作文中考篇一

201601初三英语一模部分范文

虹口区初三一模部分作文范文（一） 2016.1.15

范文1： My favourite way of communicating

My favourite way of communicating is to use Wechat. Wechat is popular among people of all ages. With it, we can talk to people all over the world at any time. For example, my brother now stays in America to further his study. Although we can’t meet each other, we can use Wechat to share our lives and talk about exciting stories which happen in our schools. That makes me feel happy. Wechat is so convenient and makes the world smaller. Besides, our life has become more colourful since Wechat appeared. In a

整体评价：

 文章结构清晰，选材合理；

 文章举例的事例与议论部分关联性与逻辑性较强；

 文章句式多变，简单句与复合句相结合，彰显出作者的英语写作功底；

 本文最后一句中划线部分Wechat改为it可避免重复。

范文2：My favourite way of communicating

With the development of the modern world, communicating with others by Wechat or e-mail becomes more and more popular. But I still prefer communicating by letters. It is no doubt that it is the best way to express our feelings and to learn about another person. When my brother went abroad, he kept in touch with me by letters. Then I found that waiting for a letter is also an enjoyable time. I’m convinced that communicating with others by letter can make people closer.

整体评价:

 文章观点新颖。开头部分道出了当今社会的普遍现象，当读者认为作者会选择Wechat或Email来展开全文的时候，作者话锋一转说出了自己喜欢写信的原因，且情感真实；  文章举例的事例与议论部分过渡自然，逻辑性较强。

范文3： My favourite way of communicating communicating are becoming increasingly various. However, I prefer writing letters. I can still remember that experience when I made a new friend. At that time we promised for my heath but also very interesting. So I am convinced that I will insist on my favourite way of communicating.

整体评价:

 文章观点新颖。与范文2 有异曲同工之妙；

 文章第一句话的划线部分删除会使文章的开头更简练；

 文章中划线部分receiving his letter 改为hearing from him。

范文4：My favourite way of communicating

As we all know, Wechat is one of the most popular ways of communicating in our lives. think that using mobile phone is more convenient and direct. It makes us use less time to finish more things. Also, it enables us to understand each other better. That’s my favourite way of communicating.

整体评价:

 文章情感真实，事例贴近实际生活，且议论部分与叙述部分关联性较高；

 划线部分using mobile phones不妥因为微信也是使用手机，此处改为making phone calls

更好；

 emergent thing 这个词才大了，改为urgent更为贴切；

 划线部分没有表达清楚，改为it was too complex to explain everything by typing many

words更好。

范文5：My favourite way of communicating

With the development of technology, we have different ways of communicating. I prefer to using E-mails. My sister went to Australia five years ago. At first, I didn’t know how to contact her and I was really upset. However, she told me that I could send an email to her. I like to use emails to communicate with others for many important reasons. First, it is convenient and fast. It enables me to communicate with my sister though we are miles away from each other. It makes me feel closer to my sister. In addition, It is free. I have to admit that sending emails is my favourite way of communicating.

整体评价:

 文章事例情感真实，表达恰当，句型富有变化。

范文6：My favourite way of communicating

There are many ways of communicating such as QQ, MSN and Wechat. Among them, I like Wechat best. I went to Beijing last month. It was so beautiful that I wanted to share the views with my friends. I took the photos and sent them to my friends What’s more, it is free. In a word, Wechat is my favourite way of communicating.

整体评价：

 文章结构清晰，选材合理，语言简练；

 划线句在议论部分显得有些突然，可以做如下修改：I can also speak to my parents and

friends easily through Wechat. 更突出convenient这一论点。

17年阐北一模英语作文中考篇二

2013年北京市各区一模英语作文范文

石景山一模

Dear Li Wen,

You are not only the friendliest but also the most helpful friend I have ever met.

I will always remember the sweet smile you gave to me on the first day. You are the one who offered to help me out when I was in trouble and the one who cheered me up when I was down. Do you still remember my 15th birthday? We really had a great time in the park, didn’t we?

Finally, I hope your dream will come true and our friendship will last forever.

Yours,

Tony 丰台一模

In our life, we communicate with others every day. It’s important to get on well with each other. However, it’s not an easy thing.

Once, two of my classmates and I were working on a wall

newspaper. I thought I had a great idea but they didn’t use it. I was sad and decided never to talk to them. But after giving it a second thought, I talked to them, telling them about my feelings and how I wished they could use my idea. They apologized to me sincerely and explained to me the reason. We got to understand each other and came up with a better idea which made the wall newspaper eye-catching.

From the experience, I know how important it is to have a

heart-to-heart talk, especially when having problems. If we try to understand each other more, we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness.

朝阳一模

We often have moving experiences in our daily life. They help us walk along the right road. I still remember that day. I was taking the final exam when I found I didn’t have my eraser with me. I was so worried that I almost cried. Just then, Mike, a boy next to me, understood what was happening. He quickly cut his eraser in half and handed me one part. With tears in my eyes, I finished the exam.

I’m deeply moved by what Mike did. He is a real friend. He cares others a lot. I want to learn from him to be the person in need.

东城一模

Hi! Peter,

I’m glad to know you are having a good time in Chengdu.

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. Giving lucky money to children is a custom. I get lucky money every year. I will put most of it in the bank, and spend the rest on some books. This year, I also got lucky money. With it, I bought some school things for several poor students in Ningxia.

For you, I think it’s a good idea to buy a gift with the lucky money for your host family before you leave China. You can also buy some Chinese gifts for your parents and friends in England. Or, just keep it as good memories.

I hope what I said can help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

西城一模

Praise is like sunlight to our spirit. It gives us confidence and hope. However, this heavenly gift usually shows up unexpectedly.

In junior high, it seemed fashion was never my cup of tea, for I had neither a lovely face nor an attractive figure. I found it boring and even heart-breaking to go shopping.

The time came when we had to dress up for the prom. Unwillingly, I joined my friends on the trip to Macy’s. Unsurely, I tried on a bright violet flowered dress and stepped out of the dressing room. A good-looking lady was standing there. She glanced at me, smiled and said, “I love your dress.” She had no idea how much her praise meant to me. These magic words touched my heart and I started to love my imperfect appearance.

I appreciated that stranger’s words of praise, which are not often heard. Now I keep reminding myself of the power of praise, even strangers, because we never know where it might lead…

17年阐北一模英语作文中考篇三

上海初三2014一模英语作文题目

Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一

篇不少于60词的短文)

Suppose there is an English Festival in your school every year. Some students think it is

helpful, but others don‘t think so. What do you think, and why? （假设你们学校每年开展英语文化节活动，有些学生认为活动对自己有帮助，有些则不这么认为，你的观点是什么？并说明理由。）

Complete the poster of at least 60 words on the topic “A little more fresh air, please”. (以“多

一点新鲜空气”为题完成一篇不少于60个词的海报，标点符号不占格。

Write a letter at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一封不少于

60词的信，标点符号不占格。)

假如你是Zhang Lin，你的笔友Li Hua来信询问你学英语的方法。请你给他写一封回信，

并给他提一些学好英语的建议(至少两条建议)。回信的开头已给出，不计入总字数。 Dear Li Hua,

Thanks for your letter. You asked me __________________________________

Yours sincerely, Zhang Lin

Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一篇不少于60词的

短文，

标点符号不占格。)

Situation: Nowadays many students go to school by bike, by car, by underground„ How do

you go to school? What do you think of it? 眼下不少学生骑自行车、乘私家车、乘地铁等方式上学。你是怎么去学校的？你觉得你的方式如何？谈谈你的想法并简述其理由。

Words and patterns for reference (以下单词或词组可供选用):

choice, convenient, save time, stop…from

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic „let‟s learn to smile.‟ 以“让我们学会微笑”

为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。

Suggestion points:

1 do you often smile in your daily life?

2 why should we learn to smile? (Give one or two examples)

3 what changes will we see if we smile more often?

Write at least 60 words on the topic “When I see an old person fall down in the street, I „.

以《当我看到老人在街上摔倒，我......》为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 Reference words (Use at least two of them):

a traditional virtue (美德)； in favor of /against; calm; get along with; care for;

Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一封

不少于60词的信)

假如你是Linda, 你收到英国笔友Mark的来信，他现住在北京姑妈家，春节期间他收到

一些长辈给的压岁钱，请写一封回信，对有关“如何使用压岁钱”提出一些建议。）

Write at least 60 words with the topic “A heavy smog day ”. （以“大雾霾天”为题，写

一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：去年12月上旬，申城笼罩在茫茫的雾霾（was shrouded in heavy smog）中，陷于

重度污染（severe pollution）。人们戴口罩（wear masks）出行，雾霾天给人们的健康带来危害，给生活和工作带来不便（inconvenience）。请你就其中某一天，描述你的经历和感受。

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A suggestion to my dear school!” (以“给

学校的一个建议！”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

What aren‟t you satisfied with in your school? Your reasons?

What is your suggestion?

Would you give your possible solution(s)?

Suppose you are a fan of “Where are we going, Dad”. Please write a letter to the

programme and recommend a place for them to spend a 3-day trip. 提示：近来“爸爸去哪

儿”节目轰动了全国。如果你是这个节目的忠实粉丝，请给栏目组写

一封推荐信，推荐一个地方适合父亲与孩子一起共同度过一个三天两夜的旅行，并请至

少给出两个理由。 Phrases for reference （以下短语仅供参考） be located in/on/at famous for share„with have interest in

（ 注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。）

Dear Editor,

____________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Xxx

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Haze weather in Shanghai”.(以“上海 的

雾霾天“为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：近来人们深受雾霾天气的困扰，学习、工作、出行等都受到了不同程度的影响。

请简单描述一下雾霾天气给你带来的烦恼或不便，并谈谈你的建议或希望：

The following are for reference.（以下词语仅供参考） outdoor activities, air quality. road

safety. mask (口罩) improve, cancel. allow, control, prevent

(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予给分。)

Write a passage on “A happy memory in my Junior High School” in at least 60 words

according to the given situation（以“我初中时期的一次快乐回忆”为题，谢一篇不少于60词的文章。）

提示：初中时期留给我们很多快乐的回忆，你可以结合学习或生活中的某一个情景或具

体事例，例如：一次约会、一次活动等等，谈谈初中时期曾经留给你的一次快乐的回忆。 Phrases for reference（以下短语仅供参考）： a spring outing a class meeting a party take part in play with be happy

write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation.

1.提示：假设你是张翔，你的朋友孙磊上周来信说，他的同桌上课经常找借口跟他说话，{17年阐北一模英语作文中考}.

这使他非常苦恼，不知道如何处理这件事。请你给他写封信，提出一些建议并帮助他。

2.要求：建议不得少于两条。

3.Phrases for reference

In trouble; be bad for; talk with; heart to heart; try one‟s best; after all; get on well

with;

Write at least 60 words about the topic “ I believe I can _______________ ”. (“以我相信我能_______________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested points:

Why do think you can do that

How will you do that?

Write at least 60 words about the topic “A good way to ________”（在生活中，在学习技能等各方面，每个人都会有做某件事独特的非常有效的好方法，请以“一个______的好方法”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

17年阐北一模英语作文中考篇四

2012年北京中考英语一模各区县作文题及范文

2012年北京中考英语一模各区县作文题及范文

昌平

74. 请阅读小明的英国笔友Mike发来的电子邮件，以小明的身份，写一封不少于60词的回信。请不要使用真实姓名。信的开头和结尾已经给出（开头和结尾不计词数）。

Attachment:

Picture A Picture B

Hi Mike,

Thanks for your email and sending me the pictures.

Best wishes,

Xiaoming

范文：

The drawing competition sounds very interesting to me. There must be many smart pictures and ideas about the near future.

What I believe will happen in 2050 is still a question to myself at present. But I guess picture A

explains the cities in 2050 better, because almost everyone in the whole world have been trying to do their best to protect the environment for long, such as, driving less, or recycling water. What’s more, our government is working hard for improving our living conditions.

As a result, there will be cleaner streets, easier traffic and life in 2050.

Do you agree with me?

B.

The drawing competition sounds very interesting to me. There must be many smart pictures and ideas about the near future.

What I believe will happen in 2050 is still a question to myself at present. But I guess picture B

describes the cities in 2050 well. Although some people are trying to save the environment now,

there’re still many others having no ideas about the environment protection. For example, I could see a lot of bottles or cans thrown on the way and many fish dying in the dirty rivers.

As a result, there won’t be great changes but dirtier in 2050.

Do you agree with me?

大兴

74. 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给的英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

某英文报纸就“绿色出行”话题开展征文活动，请你投稿。

环境保护，从我做起。目前越来越多的人提倡骑自行车出行。你对此有何认识？你对骑自行车上学有哪些感受？对未来环境你有哪些好的愿望？

提示词语：duty, protect, environment, ride bikes, go out, helpful, air, clean, do exercise, traffic jam, hope, believe

范文：

It’s our duty to protect our environment. More and more people ride bikes when they go out nowadays. It’s helpful to keep the air clean. I usually ride to school. I only take a bus on a rainy day. On my bicycle I can breathe the fresh air and do some exercise to keep healthy. On the other hand, I can keep away from the traffic jam

and make sure I can arrive at school on time. To my joy, I can also do a bit for keep the air clean by riding a bicycle.

I hope everybody will join us and take care of our environment in this way. I believe the air around us will be cleaner with the help of us all.

西城

某英文报纸就他/她的微笑（His/ Her Smile）话题征文，请你投稿。

微笑，是对他人表示友善和关爱。微笑可以给人激励，可以使人奋进。请你结合自己的经历谈谈在你的

生活中谁的微笑打动了你，为什么他/她的微笑会打动你，你有什么体会。

提示词语：show, encourage, difficult, brave, learn to do, feel good, cheer up, try one’s best

范文：

Smiles are beautiful and important. A smile given to the right person at the right time can brighten that

person’s day.

I was once moved by a smile from my friend. Three years ago, when I made a speech on my first day of

class, I was so nervous that I couldn’t say a word. Tony, one of my classmates, sitting in the front row, smiled at me and spoke in a low voice, “Yes, you can.” I was greatly encouraged by his smile. His smile was important because it gave me self-confidence.

I will never forget my friend’s smile because I’ve learned that something so simple can make a big

difference.

房山

成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你是李晶，你收到笔友Lily的电子邮件。请给Lily写一封回信，回答她的问题，谈谈你的看法，提出你的建议。

Hi! Lily

I’m glad to hear from you.

Yes, I have the same problem as you. I think it common that boys make friends with girls.

First, you’d better have a talk with your parents and tell them that Jack and you study together and learn from each other. Second, it’s necessary to introduce Jack to your parents and let them know what kind of person he is. What’s more, since you have many friends, you can also study and play with them and your parents will understand

you.

I hope what I said will help you.

Yours

Li Jing

丰台

21世纪英文报初三版开展题为“My Best Friend in Middle School Life”的征文，作为初三学

生，你应征写文，内容包括：他/她是谁? 突出特点是什么？他/她留给你深刻印象的一件事

(如初识、一件难忘的事等)，以及你对你们友谊的展望或期待。（好友的名字用Mary或 Jack

代替）

提示词语：kind, friendly, help, hope

范文

My best friend in my middle school is Jack White. He impressed me deeply with his kindness when we met for the first time. I had a fall when we new students lined up on the playground. Jack came over then and helped me. Since then, we have become good friends. 51 w

Tom is not only kind, but also smart. He does well in his studies, although not at the top level, and have time for relaxing activities. He always looks happy. I’ve learned a lot from him. 36 w

I hope to keep this friendship with him as long as I can, because our life needs friendship. 18 w (105 w )

Version 2

My best friend in my middle school life is Tom White. I still remember the time when we met for the first time. It was on the school playground. I had a fall when all the new students lined up. At the moment, a boy at my side helped me. It was Tom, my classmate. Since then, we have become good friends.

Tom is very kind and often helps other people. Besides, he is smart. He does well in his studies and have time for relaxing activities. He looks happy all the time. When we stay together, we always enjoy our time.

I hope to keep this friendship with him as long as I can, because I believe our friendship will still be good for my future life. (128)

平谷

75. 《二十一世纪英语报》针对如何提高英语口语技能进行专题征文。请你向该报投稿，稿件内容包括：

你对英语口语(spoken English)的认识、你是如何练习的以及你今后的打算。

提示词语：important, talk, an Englishman/ Englishwoman, by, speak, pronunciation

范文

Spoken English is very important.We often talk with an Englishman by spoken English. It is one way to express our ideas.

I like to speak English as much as possible. I often talk in English with people around me . I have recited most of the texts in our English books. Besides, in the morning I read English aloud to practice my pronunciation/ sound or listen to radio to improve my pronunciation. I’m happy that the teacher says my pronunciation is good.

In the future, I’ll listen to more tapes and do more speaking. If I have a chance, I’ll go to England to learn spoken English. (110 words)

延庆

成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫张华，是美国中学生琳达的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。

范文

Dear Linda,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Yes, I sometimes have the same problem. First of all, I think you should have a talk with your parents. Maybe they will say you don’t understand them. But at least they will know what you are thinking. Then you can invite your teacher to your home to talk with your parents. Maybe this can change your parents’ ideas. Finally, I think you should let them know that your friends are not so bad as they think.

In my opinion, all parents love their children. So try to communicate with them and I’m sure they will understand you.

I hope what I said can help you.

燕山

某英文报纸就中学生带手机（cell phones）上学话题征文，请你投稿。

手机在人们生活中扮演着重要角色，许多同学带手机上学。请你谈谈同学们经常用手机做什么，你有什么体会，你对正确使用手机有哪些建议。

daily life，convenient， keep in touch， pass notes, during the class， affect{17年阐北一模英语作文中考}.

Cell phones are very important in our daily life. More and more children bring their phones to school. At school, students use cell phones to pass notes, read novels and listen to music. Sometimes cell phones ring during the class. Some people think it’s convenient for students to keep in touch with their parents, so schools should allow students to take cell phones to school. In my opinion, with a cell phone to school will affect the student’s attention, students shouldn’t bring cell phones to school. They should focus on the lessons and other activities in the school. ( 98 words )

17年阐北一模英语作文中考篇五

2014北京中考一模英语作文he范文汇总

2013北京各区中考一模英语作文及范文汇总

74. 根据中文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的英文短文。

临近中考, 同学们学习时间长、压力大。有人害怕压力，有人认为有压力并不是一件坏事。某学校最近开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你是否也有压力和你对压力的看法，并提供一些缓解压力的好办法, 与同学们分享。

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Friends，although pressure is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. What we can do is to face it bravely and try to make “Less Pressure, Better Life”.

That’s all. Thank you!{17年阐北一模英语作文中考}.

十、文段表达。（共15分）

Some students are afraid of it, but some of them think we also need pressure. I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student. So they send me to all kinds of weekend classs. I really felt tired. So I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy and I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. What’s more, in my opinion, listening to music and playing sports are good ways because they are really helpful to both my health and my study.

74. 生活中会有很多经历令我们感动, 它们源于亲人、源于老师、源于同学、源于陌生人……, 它们冲刷着我们的心灵，激励我们向上。

现在，某英文报纸就“感动”话题征文，请你投稿。发表你的观点，叙述一次让你

感动的经历， 并谈谈你的体会。

提示词语：moving experiences；in our daily life；help；remember；be deeply moved；

learn from

十、文段表达 (15分)

74. One possible version:

We often have moving experiences in our daily life. They help us walk along the right road.

I still remember that day. I was taking the final exam when I found I didn’t have my eraser with me. I was so worried that I almost cried. Just then, Mike, a boy next to me, understood what was happening. He quickly cut his eraser in half and handed me one part. With tears in my eyes, I finished the exam.

I’m deeply moved by what Mike did. He is a real friend. He cares others a lot. I want to learn from him to be the person in need.

十、文段表达（15分）

74．假设你是Shirley。你的笔友李华和父母情有一点小矛盾，想要向你倾述。下面是他给你的电子邮件。

请你根据他的邮件内容写一封回信,谈谈你对这件事的看法和理由，同时提出一些帮助他解决问题的建议。

十、文段表达（15分）Possible version one: (128 words)

Dear Li Hua,

I’m sorry to learn about your trouble.

I don’t think you need to be so upset, nor should you be unhappy with your parents. Don’t feel strange if I say your parents are right about the matter. As a teenager you should learn to take some responsibility about your own future. I think the most important thing you are doing now is to get prepared for the future by working better on your lessons. Computer is just a tool for both education and entertainment，while mid-term exam is an important stage to test your learning.

So, I think, for the time being, you should put the exam before the QQ pet. I suggest you have a good talk with your parents and ask them to feed the QQ pet for you for a time.

I hope what I said can be of some help to you.

Yours, Peter

Possible version two: (107 words)

Dear Li Hua,

I’m sorry to learn about your trouble.

First I want you to comfort yourself by having a nice walk outside. To keep calm is important for you to deal with these matters. In fact, I disagree with your parents’ idea. It’s true that students should work hard on their study especially when the mid-term exam is coming. However, to feed a QQ pet doesn’t harm your study. It is a good way to relax yourself. We all know that we can study better after proper relaxing.

I think you should have a good talk with your parents. Tell them your ideas and your study plan. I think they will understand and support you finally.

I hope what I said can be of some help to you.

Yours, Peter

十、文段表达（15分）

74. 生活中我们每天都在与人交往，也许你曾经遇到过这样的困境：你想在聚会上穿的衣服

脏了让妈妈帮你洗，然而妈妈因为工作太忙没有时间洗；与同学共同完成墙报(a wall

newspaper)时，你有一个自认为很好的想法没有被采纳；你最近学习很忙，但是向你请教问

题的同学很执着；…… 你是怎样做的？

现在，请你就与人交往(communicating with others)的话题向《21世纪英语报》投稿。 描

述一次你解决与他人交往困境的经历，并谈谈你的感受。

提示词语：experience; get on well; help; talk; by oneself; understand; respect; share; enjoy

One possible version:

In our life, we communicate with others every day. It’s important to get on well with each other. However, it’s not an easy thing.{17年阐北一模英语作文中考}.

Once, two of my classmates and I were working on a wall

newspaper. I thought I had a great idea but they didn’t use it. I was sad and decided never to talk to them. But after giving it a second thought, I talked to them, telling them about my feelings and how I wished they could use my idea. They apologized to me sincerely and explained to me the reason. We got to understand each other and came up with a better idea which made the wall newspaper eye-catching.

From the experience, I know how important it is to have a

heart-to-heart talk, especially when having problems. If we try to understand each other more, we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness.

十、文段表达（15分）

74. 还记得去年7月21日那场大雨吗？向阳派出所所长李方洪为救凤凰亭村村民，献出了自己宝贵的生命。请你以“Learn from him!”为题，发一篇微博。说说李所长，谈谈你的感受以及我们应该学习他什么。

提示词语：a police officer, the flood of July 21st , villagers, safety, be deeply moved, brave

十、文段表达。(共15分)

74. It was last July 21st. It rained so hard in Beijing that some villages were watered by the flood. At about 1:00 o’clock, Li Fanghong, the police officer of our district, went to see the villagers. When he saw rainwater coming into one of the houses, he organized them to leave to safety. However, while he was carrying an old man, he was killed by electricity.

I was deeply moved by his story. I think he is not only a good officer but also a brave hero of us. He did his best when he faced great danger. I should learn from him. I will think of others first and help them as much as possible when facing difficulties.

十、文段表达（共15分）

74. One possible version:

There’s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.

Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.

I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this more often.

十、文段表达 （15分）

74. 初中生活即将结束，我们有很多不能忘记的美好记忆。与同学之间的友好交往，与老师之间的坦诚沟通。与家长之间的倾心交流……你校校报English Club正在开展以“难忘的回忆”为主题的征文活动。 假设你叫魏东，请你参加投稿,写一件你与同学（或朋友、老师、家长）等曾经经历过的美好事情，并谈谈你的感受。

提示词语：experience; interest; learn; change; thankful; encourage; confident

十、文段表达（15分）

74.One possible version:

My life in middle school will come to the end soon. During the past three years, my English teacher gave me so much help that I will never forget her.

I was not good at English, I tried my best to learn it but I couldn’t get good grades, so I decided to give it up. My English teacher knew that, she not only encouraged me to go on learning but also helped me with my English after class. With her help, I made great progress.

I was moved by her and I was really thankful to her. Now I feel more confident than before. I’m sure I can learn English very well in the future.

74. 每个人都有梦想，有的人想成为医生；有的人想成为警察；有的人想成为作家。请以My dream为题写一篇短文，和大家分享一下你的梦想，内容包括：你的梦想是什么，为了梦想你做了哪些努力，还将做哪些努力。

提示词语：everyone, dream, become, enjoy, hard, in order to, come true

My Dream

十、文段表达（共15分）

74. One possible version:

Everyone has a dream. Some people want to be doctors, others want to be policemen or writers. I have a dream, too. My dream is to become a teacher in the future because I enjoy staying with children. So I study very hard at school and read a lot of books after school to get more knowledge. I must study harder and harder in order to go to a good high school, then when we finish our school, we can go to a good university. I’m sure my dream will come true.

17年阐北一模英语作文中考篇六

2014年初三一模英语作文分类及例文赏析

2014年初三一模英语作文分类及例文赏析

【环保类】

1、杨浦、徐汇：“Haze weather in shanghai”

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Haze weather in Shanghai” (以“上海的雾霾天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：近来人们深受雾霾天气的困扰，学习、工作、生活等都受到了不同程度的影响。请简单描述一下雾霾天气给你带来的烦恼或不便，并谈谈你的建议或希望。

The following are for reference(以下词语仅供参考)

outdoor activities, air quality, road safety, mask(口罩), improve, cancel, allow, control, prevent.

2、金山：”A little more fresh air,please”

Complete the poster of at least 60 words on the topic “A little more fresh air, please”.

(以“多一点新鲜空气”为题完成一篇不少于60个词的海报，标点符号不占格。） (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） Expressions for reference (以下短语仅供参考) plant trees, drive cars, walk more, pollute, haze (霾）

3、黄埔：“A heavy smog today”

Write at least 60 words with the topic “A heavy smog day” .（以“大雾霾天”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

提示：去年12月上旬，申城笼罩在茫茫的雾霾（was shrouded in heavy smog）中，陷于重度污染（severe pollution）。人们戴口罩（wear masks）出行，雾霾天给人们的健康带来危害，给生活和工作带来不便（inconvenience）。请你就其中某一天，描述你的经历和感受。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

【建议类】

1、静安：“A suggestion to my dear school”

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A suggestion to my dear school!” (以“给学校的一个建议！”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Questions for reference only(以下问题仅供参考)

What aren’t you satisfied with in your school? Your reasons?

What is your suggestion?

Would you give your possible solution(s)?

2、嘉定：“How to use red envelope?”

Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信) 假如你是Linda，你收到英国笔友Mark的来信，他现在住在北京姑妈家，春节期间他收到一些长辈给的压岁钱，请写一封回信，对有关“如何使用压岁钱”提一些建议。）{17年阐北一模英语作文中考}.

3、崇明：“How to communicate with your desk mate?”

write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation.

1.提示：假设你是张翔，你的朋友孙磊上周来信说，他的同桌上课经常找借口跟他说话，这使他非常苦恼，不知道如何处理这件事。请你给他写封信，提出一些建议并帮助他。

2.要求：建议不得少于两条。

3.Phrases for reference

In trouble; be bad for; talk with; heart to heart; try one’s best; after all; get on well with;

4、宝山：“How to be a good learner?”

Write a short passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How to be a good learner?”. (以“怎样成为一个好的

【推荐信】

长宁、闸北：

Suppose you are a fan of “Where are we going, Dad”. Please write a letter to the programme and recommend a place for them to spend a 3-day trip.

提示：近来“爸爸去哪儿”节目轰动了全国。如果你是这个节目的忠实粉丝，请给栏目组写一封推荐信，推荐一个地方适合父亲与孩子共同度过一个三天两夜的旅行，并请至少给出两个理由。

Phrases for reference (以下短语仅供参考)

be located in/on/at famous for

share…with have interest in

【观点类】

1、普陀：

Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60词的短文)

Suppose there is an English Festival in your school every year. Some students think it is helpful, but others don’t think so. What do you think, and why? （假设你们学校每年开展英语文化节活动，有些学生认为活动对自己有帮助，有些则不这么认为，你的观点是什么？并说明理由）

（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

2、浦东新区：

Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Situation: Nowadays many students go to school by bike, by car, by underground ... How do you go to school? What do you think of it? 眼下不少学生骑自行车、乘私家车、乘地铁等方式上学。你是怎么去学校的？你觉得你的方式如何？谈谈你的想法并简述其理由。

Words and patterns for reference（以下单词或词组可供选用）

choice, convenient, save time, stop ... from

（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

【其他类】

1、闵行：“A happy memory in my Junior High School”