上海中考英语作文评分标准
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上海中考英语作文评分标准篇一
中考英语作文评分标准
作文
一、 评分标准
内容7分，语言8分，组织结构3分
1、 内容7分：内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整。
5~6分：基本
3~4分：不够
0~2分：文不对题，表达不清
2、 每少5个词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写
错误每2处扣0.5分
3、 内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得2~3分
内容和语言总分13~14分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1~2分
通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分 开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点
先划档次：A档 18~15分
B档 14.5~12分
C档 11.5~8分
D档 3.5~0分
然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分.
二、 理清结构，分三步写作（总分总）
1、 作文开头的有用句式
As we all know,
As is known to all,
It’s known to all that…
It’s common knowledge that…
It’scommonly accepted that…
There is no denying that…
How time flies !
In a blink of an eye,
Time flies like a speeding arrow,
Time goes like the the flowing water.
2、中间分层部分的有用结构:
分正反两面论述:On one hand, On the other hand
分两点：For one thing, For another,
分三点：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least
3、结尾部分
All in all,
In a word,
In conclusion,
In brief,
In short,
To put everything in a shell, 概括的说，简单的说
Last but not least
三、 组织语言
发表观点的
In my opinion,
From my point of view,
In my eyes,
As far as I am concerned,
Believe it or not,
表示递进的
In addition
Furthermore
More importantly
What’s more
Moreover
其他与“我”有关的写作材料
1、重点句型
It`s+a. for sb.to do sth.
So +a./ad. That such a +a.+n. that too…to do
Not….until
That`s why+句子 那是。。。的原因
It`s said that +句子
There`s no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问。。。
It goes without saying that+句子 毫无疑问。。。
There`s no need to do 没必要做。。。
There`s no point in doing 做某事毫无意义
2、 提建议
Had better do/not do
How/what about doing
Why not do/why don`t+句子
I think you should do
I suggest that you should do
If I were you,I would do 我要是你的话，我会做。。。
It`s best to do
3、表示喜欢，感兴趣
Like/love/enjoy doing
Be fond of/be keen on sth.
Prefer to do A rather than do B
Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in
4、努力做。。。
Try to do/strive to do
Make efforts to do=make every effort to do
Try one`s best/do one`s best to do
Do what/everything sb.can to do
5、打算做。。。/计划做。。。
Intend to do/plan to do
Be going to do
Decide to do
Determine to do=be determine to do
Make up one`s mind to do
6、表示想/希望
Want to do=would like to do
Hope to do
Expect to do
Wish to do
Consider doing
7、其他有用的短语
From now on/sooner or later/in the near future{上海中考英语作文评分标准}.
Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learn…by heart/
Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties
Play an important role/part in….
8、其他有用的句式
For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows,
People`s view on…vary from person to person
上海中考英语作文评分标准篇二
上海近几年中考英语作文范文
09上海中考英语作文题I want do sth for my school
I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean."But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?
10年上海中考英语作文I'm proud of myself
I am a boy of less confidence.I always hate running.But as we all know,The students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam.At that moment,I just wanted to give up.but my parents encouraged me:"impossible is nothing,""you could challenge yourself!"so with the encouragement of them,I tried my best to run and insisted on running.When I got to the finishing line,I felt proud of myself,though I didn't get the good mark,I knew,I won.I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!
11年上海中考英语作文I am a member of ...
In this world , every family has a mother.a father.a daughter or a son.For plenty of people ,families are very important .when you are very said ,you can found one or two persons to make you feel happiness ,this is you family .
I am very gold to become my family member,beacuse i have a pertty good parent and a fairly younger brother . when i come back,i always feel freedom and relaxed.My mother is a kind cook ,she has lots of experience in cooking ,so my brother and i are heathly.
As a daughter,l shouldn't make my parents worry .As a sister ,l should look after my brother .l want to be a great member of my family ,l would try my best to do what l should do in the family.
12年上海中考英语作文 a letter to
Knowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried. Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result. There are some effective ways to calm down. Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful. Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports. Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you. As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation.
上海中考英语作文评分标准篇三
上海中考英语作文专题指导
上海中考英语作文专题指导
一、中考英语作文写作模式——“四审四注意”写作法
“四审”：
一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作，如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础； 二审人称。如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you 或第三人称she, he, it或they为主；
三审时态。一般而言，写作时文章应多以现在时（包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时）或过去时（一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时）为主，切忌时态混乱； 四审内容。如有提示，应尽量按照所给提示来写，不可偏题乱发挥，可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述，不可遗漏，这是很重要的一点，一般文章按who，when，where，what，how，why等要素展开。
“四注意”：
一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾，一定要写开头结尾。当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意；
二注意句式要富于变化，不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调，否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分，如可适当运用if, when, although等状语从句，I think / I hope / I believe that 等宾语从句，如用定语从句必须有绝对把握；
三注意适当运用连接词，如on one hand, on the other hand; what’s more; however等，这样使文章更有层次、更富逻辑性，若语言和内容没问题, 做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿组织结构分。
四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型，尽量运用课本所学词句，坚决避免不正确的“中国式英语”，更不能乱“发明”, 一般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。
最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分,词数不能太少也不能太多,笔者觉得, 以80词左右为宜。另外，书写一定要认真、工整，以免造成不必要的失分。
二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析
1. 时态错误
2. 时间状语错误
3. 名词单复数错误
4. 动词误用
5. 语态错误
6．词性误用
7. 介词误用
8．某些搭配和惯用法误用
中考英语总复习专项训练题
写作专项训练
A. 中考英语热门写作话题
1. 关于学习
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “How to learn English well”. （以“怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● When did you start learning English? (in ... / ... years ago)
●How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day ...) ● What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar ...)
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2. 关于兴趣
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My interest”. （以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What is your interest?
● Why do you like it so much?
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3. 关于写事
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Unforgettable memories”. （以“难忘的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What is your unforgettable memory?
● Why do you think it is unforgettable?
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上海中考英语作文评分标准篇四
中考英语作文评分标准
中考英语作文对很多考生来说是感到头痛的，有正确的写作方法，能够帮助考生把作文写好，并且得到较高分数。写好英语作文要注意十字原则：
“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点!”
1 结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一 目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!
2 要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个思路
3 语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。
4 亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老 师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了 beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分 的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。只要把这十个字都文。
评分标准
1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给12-15分;
2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给9-11分;{上海中考英语作文评分标准}.
3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给5-8分;
4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-3分
上海中考英语作文评分标准篇五
英语作文评分标准
英语作文评分标准：
1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分;
2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分;
3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分;
4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。
对考生的作文要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。所以，在写作文的时候，大家要牢记这些要求。
要做到内容完整，我们首先要认清看好题目的要求，抓住要点，注意文体。我们可以在写作之前好好构思一下，自己将从几个方面来写。是否能将所有内容都包含在内。在写完之后，再检查一遍。看看有没有内容的缺失。
要做到语句的流畅，这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的积累上，注意一些语义的表达方法。要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句子之间的连贯性。这不仅仅指从语法上，也指句意上的连贯。
在初中阶段，考生应注意语法点有：动词单三形式，时态(包括：现在进行时，一般过去时，将来时)，定语从句(此项语法建议考生尽量不要使用)，语态，单复数，主谓一致，冠词等还有一些表达方式。比如，我非常喜欢足球。考生经常会写成I very like football.这样的错误一定要避免。
书写一定要规范。要了解英语作文的书写规则。同时，要知道应用文的写作方法。 除了以上的四个方面，还建议考生们要检查：单词的拼写、大小写和标点符号。
考试的时候，要尽量留出充足的时间给作文。这样，我们才能有足够的时间去构思，去打草稿。在评卷的时候，第一印象很重要，所以考生们一定要让自己的作文看起来舒服，干净，整齐。
中考英语中，很多学生自感基础很差，主动放弃了作文的15分。即便学生表达能力很差，但只要所写文章中包括题目要点中的部分信息，依然能得1-3分的最低档分数;如能完整表达题目给出的要点和要求，同时文章通顺，无严重语法和拼写错误，一般能得到4-11分的中档分。
上海中考英语作文评分标准篇六
上海中考英语作文指导范文
作文目录
1. A good way to study English 学习英语的方法
2. A good way to study well 努力学习的方法
3. Travelling (7篇) 旅行
4. Haze weather in Shanghai（3篇） 上海的雾霾天气
5. My view on comic strips 漫画之我见
6. My way to school （2篇） 上学路上
7. My views on an English Festival （2篇） 英语节之我见
8. Using the Internet makes our life convenient 运用网络使生活更便利
9. Let’s learn to smile 学会微笑
10. Growing up with good books （2篇） 好书伴我成长
11. The best gift I’ve received （3篇） 我收到的最好的礼物
12. Encouragement brings me power（5篇） 鼓励带给我能量
13. Being a polite person 做一个有礼貌的人
14. How to protect myself 2013上海中考满分作文
15. Write a letter 写一封信
16. This time next year 明年此时
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My way of studying English is to read lots of English books. It is very efficient.
When I read English books, I can learn lots of extra-curricular words （which enable me to write better sentences as well as understand articles better.）Besides, it can set examples of writing articles for me. So I think reading books is a good way. It enables me to learn better with less time. However, there is no doubt that there are still some better ways. But no matter how we learn, the idea of using good methods never changes. A good method can always improve the quantity and quality of what we do, not only for studying English.
A good way to study well
In my opinion, reading widely is a good way to study well.
On one hand, reading widely can bring us lots of powerful knowledge which we can’t learn in class as well as give us much fun. Reading is like stairs of a high mountain. The more you read, the higher you will go and the better you will learn. On the other hand, reading can also open your mind, which will help you easily solve the problems which are so difficult that few people can work out. How useful the way is!
To sum up, if you read a book every day, you will study better and better.
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As tourists, we ought to pay attention to our behaviors. First, respecting local customs is of great importance. We should learn some traditions of the place before we travel so that we won’t do things that make local people unhappy. Also, wearing a smile is a good way to show our politeness. Wherever we go and whatever we do, smile is a great passport that shows kindness and friendliness. When we are abroad or in other cities, we should always be friendly and kind to local people. In a nutshell, l hope you can follow my tips when you travel.
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. Many students plan to travel with their parents on holidays. But when we are travelling, we should pay attention to our behaviors and travel politely. Firstly, we should keep quiet when we’re travelling. Secondly, it will be terrible to draw some pictures on famous buildings.
I think that if we do these things well, we’ll have a good time when we are travelling.
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Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As a tourist, we must pay attention to our behaviors. First of all, we must obey the rules. Next, we must keep the environment clean. For example, we should leave rubbish in rubbish bins. A clean environment can make us feel happy . we must respect local customs so that we can give them a good impression. More importantly, it will be very bad to hurt the ancient buildings because they are very precious and they should be protected . in a word, it is important for us to control ourselves when we are going for a trip.
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. Quite a few people go abroad to spend their holidays. We should pay attention to our behaviors. First, we should put rubbish into rubbish bins instead of leaving it everywhere. Second, when we have a walk along the lakes, we shouldn’t throw stones into the lake. What’s more, we shouldn’t shout or smoke in public places. We should give others a helping hand when they are in trouble. Last but not least, it will be necessary not to draw here and there. I think if we do these,our travelling will be better.
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. While travelling, we should pay attention to our behaviors. It is as important as enjoying the views. First, when we travel to another country, we should respect local customs. If we don’t, we may be not popular among the people in that country. Second , it will be terrible to leave rubbish in the river or on the road. It may make the view less beautiful. Finally, we should be quiet in public p places. If we are noisy, we may make others unhappy. As a result, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors while travelling .
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. When we travel to other places, we should pay attention to our behaviors. Firstly, we must respect local customs. We shouldn’t draw or write on the wall. What’s more, it will be terrible to leave rubbish. Instead, we ought to put it into rubbish bins. Last but not least, we mustn’t take photos if it isn’t allowed.
I hope that everyone can behave well during the trip. In this way, our life will be better.
Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As students, it is common that we go travelling with our parents when we are free. But we must pay attention to our behaviors when we travel to other countries and local places.
Firstly, we should respect the local culture. Every country has its own culture and it’s precious. So we can’t be rude to their culture. What’s more, when we ave arrive at a famous scenery spot, wee can take photos with it so that we can have a nice memory about it . but we can’t destroy any of it. Instead, we
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