205高考作文英语范文
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205高考作文英语范文篇一
高考英语作文优秀范文分类
高考英语作文优秀范文分类(背诵篇目)
1、表达观点类
在英语课堂上,你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语,还是英语、汉语兼用?某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题,参考所给要点,选择一种授课形式,写一篇英语短文。 授课形式一:只用英语
优点:有助于提高听说能力等
授课形式二:英语、汉语兼用
优点:易于理解等 缺憾:英语氛围不浓等 结论:……
注意:1.词数 100~120,短文开头已给出(不计词数)。
2.参考词汇:atmosphere 氛围
I prefer my English classes to be taught in...
满分文(一)
I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.
However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.
名师点评:
审题是作文的第一要素,本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。本文运用多种复杂句式,整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道,可以参看好句中的分析。
背诵内容:
好词1.advantage n.优点2.be familiar with,对某人熟悉3. atmosphere n.气氛
1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.
我更喜欢采用双语教学,其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。
2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
满分文(二)
I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.
缺憾:不易听懂等 结论:……
That’s why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.
名师点评:
本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用,将作者的意思表达得完整而准确,从而映衬了词汇的重要性;其次,本文的句式以复杂句为主,表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。
应背好词:1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解释3. make progress 取得进步
应背好句:1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.
2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.( 表语从句)
因此,我的观点是,用英文教授,同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行辅助讲解。
练习篇目:
请根据下列内容,在你校英语校刊上发表一篇稿件。
1、目前中国西南部发生严重干旱。
2、学生会将于5月6日中午12:30在餐厅门口举行用自己的零花钱为受灾地区孩子买水的活动。
3、希望全校同学从我做起,节约水资源。 参考词汇:干旱drought 注意:词数不少于60。
From the news we know that there is a severe drought in southwest China now. Most places are getting ,
2、演讲稿
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛,本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者,你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言,请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。(2009·天津)
1. 说明比赛的意义,如提高英语听说能力,养成读书的习惯等;
2. 说明比赛的注意事项,如每人演讲不超过5分钟,语言流利,发音准确等;
3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。
注意: 1. 词数:不少于100词;2. 可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯。
范文背诵:
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.
There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation. Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!
Thank you!
句型背诵
①In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition.
②I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading...
③...I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!
练习篇目:
假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,主要内容如下:
一、表示赞成。 二、提出你喜欢的栏目。 三、 简要说明理由。
注意: 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目:栏目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not
least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇满分作文。仔细分析了这篇文章,写的的确是好,很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,这么地道标准的英语,可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用,list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误,不管是书写还是语法。
3、利弊分析类
假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论,同学们观点有分歧,各自理由主要如下表所示,请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。
注意:1.词数:150左右 2.标题、开头已经写好,不计入词数。3. 要自拟结论。
参考词汇:故宫the Palace Museum; 颐和园the Summer Palace
Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?
Recently my
classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.
Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization(文明). And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history.
Those who disagree think it more reasonable(合情合理) to keep the garden like this. The ruins will
remind us of the past. We should never forget the history. Other buildings like Palace Museum and Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn’t necessary to rebuild this garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district.
Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city . What’s more , the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.
练习篇目:
205高考作文英语范文篇二
历年英语高考作文
高考英语开放性作文的典范 1999 1999—2011 ——1999 2011 年上海高考英语作文及范例 1999 年上海高考作文及范例 一些学生认为学英语很重要;一些学生则认为不必学英语;我认为……(观点、理由) Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”. Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden to them. In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I like English best. There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject. First, English is one of the most widely used languages of the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly , it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot. For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. (166words) 2000 年上海高考作文及范例 1、我最难忘的一课 2、具体说明为何难忘 3、感想
An Unforgettable Lesson In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident. One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us. While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced. But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her. She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of homework from her. A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a good teacher is. In my opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps liked best. (210 words)
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2001 年上海高考作文及范例 请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。 Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else, private cars have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows. First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to move comfortably and safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China will develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars. Secondly, if more people buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically. What’s more, the growth of the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as iron and steel production, energy and technological application. Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, too many cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more traffic accidents. In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available parking spaces.
Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged. (199 words) 2002 年上海高考作文及范例
简要描述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
Duo to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole world family. Both the parents and grandparents usually over indulge the child. We can see in the picture, When a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parent and the
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grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the child for fear that they should fall and hurt themselves. We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on their child. Under the parents’ protection, the child knows only comfort and ease. If they don’t learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet in the future For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent. The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century. (219 words) 2003 年上海高考作文及范例 你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信,谈谈你的看法和建议。 受信人:徐海青 寄信人:黄平 写信日期:2003 年六月八日 June 8, 2003 Dear Xu Haiqing, You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it. Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations. A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life. I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter. (205 words) 2004 年上海高考作文及范例 老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决 定并谈谈想法。
Version 1 : Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper of our class. I was so glad
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at that. But now I don’t know whether I should accept the task or not. Though I have been in Class 4 for nearly two years, I have hardly done anything for it. I think it will be a good opportunity to devote my efforts to class if I take the job. On the other hand, I’m good at drawing.
The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent. However, I know that taking the job means having less time to relax and study. Perhaps it will take me several days to complete an excellent wall newspaper. Perhaps it will affect my studies as well. Perhaps… No! No! No! I should believe my ability. I can get everything arranged well: relaxing, study, wall newspaper… It will be an hour for me to do something for my class. I want to be a person who is glad to challenge himself. Now, I’ve decided I’ll accept the job. I’ll tell my decision to Miss Wang tomorrow. (187) Version 2 It never occurred to me that my class teacher suggested me editing the wall paper of our class. He said that it is up to me to decide whether I would take it over or not. I have made up my mind to accept the mission. First of all, it is a challenge editing the wall paper for the class. By editing the paper I could learn a lot of things my books do not teach me, the things of practical use. Then, our class does need a place where we can talk about our problems, and then find out solutions to them. At present at least two problems are troubling us: too much homework and too many video games. Both serve as obstacles on our way to physical and mental growth. I’ll try my best to complete the task and make the paper student’s voice. (185) 2005 年上海高考作文及范例 古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent) 通过描述你 。 生活中一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。 There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years. From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society. When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them. To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood. From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent. The most important factor is your confidence. If you believe that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed. (200 words) 2006 年上海高考作文及范例 下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择,并结合个人情况说 明理由。
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南方大学 学费 招生人数 优惠政策 8000 元/年 20 人 无
北方大学 5000 元/年 10 人 加 20 分
I dream to become an astronaut. Two universities in China can make my dream become true. They are both very good, but I can only choose one. From the Internet, I learned that there are more advantages offered by the northern university than the ones by the southern one. For example, the fee charged by the northern one is lower. And it will add 20 marks while the southern university will not. In contrast, the southern university’s good point is that it enrolls more students. After comparing the above information, I think I will choose the northern university for the following reasons. Firstly, my parents may not be able to afford my study and living expenses. Secondly, an addition of twenty marks is certainly an irresistible attraction. More
importantly, four years of independent life in the north will obviously help develop my personality required as an astronaut. 2007 年上海高考作文及范例 2007 以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容: 1、 你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物; 2、 该礼物对他(她)可能产生的影响或带来的变化。 A Present for Father’s Day The Father’s Day will come soon. and I want to give my Dad a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher. During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour. From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort. There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart. And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him. Time flies and I’m 18 now. As I grow up, Father is getting older. He is now still diving into piles of books. With the health club membership, I hope that he will make time to do more exercises. I think that he will relax in the health club and make more friends. 2008 年上海高考作文及范例 2008 你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(group dancing cooipetition),班长希望大家积 极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。 你的文章必须包括以下内容: ·你是否会参加比赛 ·你做出该决定的具体理由 Version 1: A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to
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take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure. Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class. For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition. Version 2: Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate. There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates. For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.
2009 年上海高考作文及范例 某海外学校举办英语夏令营,开设了如下课程:园艺(gardening) 、烹饪(cooking) 、 防身术(self-defence) 、护理(nursing) 。假如你是王跃华(不可以用自己的真实姓名) ,写 一封申请信,报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括: l 你感兴趣的课程 l 你期望从这门课程中学到什么 l 为什么想学这些内容 It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from. I am interested in gardening, in that I believe it features my character and personal benefits. During the learning period, I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge. A radical technique I’d like to obtain is to know how to tell difference species of plants and flowers apart. This helps me to have a clearer outlook of those in my garden. Furthermore, the proper
cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn. A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or reasonable positions will also be a good choice. The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden. In addition, I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening, missing a chance to have a word with nature, so that knowing the surroundings is
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imperative. Last but not least, by attending the courses, I will have a meaningful summer vacation, and drowning myself between plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life. 2010 年高考作文及范例 下图是小学新生的课堂一脚,对照你当时的上课情况,作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文 必须包括: ●描述图片里学生上课的场景 ●比较你同时期的上课情况 ●简单谈谈你的感受
Version 1: As is demonstrated from the picture, all the students are eager to answer the question asked by their teacher with their faces lighting up. It seems that there is just another game instead of a serious academic discussion. We fail to find any shy or embarrassed expression on these kids’ faces. It reminds me of the similar phenomena when I was in junior high school. I was so fortunate that I encountered a very nice English teacher who always encouraged us to propose new ideas by using enlightening words, which led to the active learning atmosphere. Therefore, I strongly prefer the practice because it cannot only benefit the students who can enjoy their study finding it not really boring as what they have thought, but the teachers too as it will definitely help his or her teaching conduct more smoothly. Version 2:
Grasping the knowledge of those youngsters with nave faces raising their hands high and expecting to inform their teachers of their novel answers from the picture, I could not help envying them, since our childhood was considerably different from
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theirs. Once we entered the primary school, we were instructed by teachers to keep both our hands on our backs and were forbidden to talk or move hands freely when they were speaking, which led to our uneasiness in class and deprived us of similar smiles on the picture. The divergence I believe, should be attributed to the different educational divergence, system and concept between China and western countries. While they are encouraged to give full play to their creativity and curiosity, not willing to learn and be instilled with a large amount of knowledge in order to obtain the admission letters from established universities and companies. Thus we are cultivated into identical “top-students” instead of creative individuals. Therefore, I eventually conclude that the next generation of our nation should be granted with more freedom to fully tap their potential and become all-round people.
Version 3
As we all can see, the lovely students in the picture are so active that they all put their hands high, hoping to express their own opinions. It is obvious that the atmosphere is relaxing and everyone enjoys it. That’s great, isn’t it The picture also reminds me of the time when I was a fresh student who was too shy to speak in public. Just like me, during my class, our classmates just listened to
205高考作文英语范文篇三
2013-1999年上海高考英语作文范文欣赏
高考英语开放性作文的典范
——1999—2013年上海高考英语作文及范例
1999年上海高考作文及范例
一些学生认为学英语很重要;一些学生则认为不必学英语;我认为……(观点、理由)
Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the
struggle of life”. Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden to them.
In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I like English best.
There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject. First, English is one of the most widely used languages
of the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly,it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot.
For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. (166words)
2000年上海高考作文及范例
1、我最难忘的一课 2、具体说明为何难忘 3、感想
An Unforgettable Lesson
In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident.
One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us. While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced. But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her.
She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of homework from her.
A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a good teacher is. In my
opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps liked best. (210 words)
2001年上海高考作文及范例
请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。
Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else, private cars have both
favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows.
First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to move comfortably and
safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China will develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars. Secondly, if more people buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically. What’s more, the growth of the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as iron and steel production, energy and technological application.
Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, too many cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more traffic accidents. In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available parking spaces.
Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged. (199 words)
2002年上海高考作文及范例
简要描述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
Duo to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the
treasure of the whole world family. Both the parents and grandparents usually over indulge the child.
We can see in the picture, When a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parent and the grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the child for fear that they should fall and hurt themselves.
We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on their child. Under the parents’ protection, the child knows only comfort and ease. If they don’t learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet in the future?
For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent.
The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century. (219
words)
2003年上海高考作文及范例
你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信,谈谈你的看法和建议。
受信人:徐海青 寄信人:黄平 写信日期:2003年六月八日
June 8, 2003
Dear Xu Haiqing,
You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it.
Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.
A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.
I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter. (205 words)
2004年上海高考作文及范例
老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。
Today Miss Wang asked me to be in charge of the wall newspaper of our class. I was so glad at that. But now I don’t know whether I should accept the task or not.
Though I have been in Class 4 for nearly two years, I have hardly done anything for it. I think it will be a good opportunity to devote my efforts to class if I take the job. On the other hand, I’m good at drawing. The job will also provide me with a good chance to show my talent.
However, I know that taking the job means having less time to relax and study. Perhaps it will take me several days to complete an excellent wall newspaper. Perhaps it will affect my studies as well. Perhaps…
No! No! No! I should believe my ability. I can get everything arranged well: relaxing, study, wall newspaper… It will be an hour for me to do something for my class. I want to be a person who is glad to challenge himself.
Now, I’ve decided I’ll accept the job. I’ll tell my decision to Miss Wang tomorrow. (187)
2005年上海高考作文及范例
古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent)。 通过描述你
生活中一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。
There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years.
From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.
When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.
To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.
From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent. The most important factor is your confidence. If you believe that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed. (200 words)
2006年上海高考作文及范例
下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择,并结合个人情况说明理由。
I dream to become an astronaut. Two universities in China can make my dream become true. They are both very good, but I can only choose one.
From the Internet, I learned that there are more advantages offered by the northern university than the ones by the southern one. For example, the fee charged by the northern one is lower. And it will add 20 marks while the southern university will not. In contrast, the southern university’s good point is that it enrolls more students.
After comparing the above information, I think I will choose the northern university for the following reasons. Firstly, my parents may not be able to afford my study and living expenses. Secondly, an addition of twenty marks is certainly an irresistible attraction. More importantly, four years of independent life in the north will obviously help develop my personality required as an astronaut.
2007年上海高考作文及范例
以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容:
1、 你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物;
2、 该礼物对他(她)可能产生的影响或带来的变化。
A Present for Father’s Day
The Father’s Day will come soon. and I want to give my Dad a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher. During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour. From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort. There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart. And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him.
Time flies and I’m 18 now. As I grow up, Father is getting older. He is now still diving into piles of books. With the health club membership, I hope that he will make time to do more exercises. I think that he will relax in the health club
and make more friends.
2008年上海高考作文及范例
你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(group dancing cooipetition),班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。{205高考作文英语范文}.
你的文章必须包括以下内容:
·你是否会参加比赛
·你做出该决定的具体理由
Version 1:
A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.
Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.
For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.
Version 2:
Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.
There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.
For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.
2009年:
Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
某海外学校举办英语夏令营,开设了如下课程:园艺(gardening)、烹饪(cooking)、防身术(self-defence)、护理(nursing)。假如你是王跃华(不可以用自己的真实姓名),写一封申请信,报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信地内容必须包括:
你感兴趣的课程
你期望从这门课程中学到什么
为什么想学这些内容
It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from. I am
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1999年上海高考作文及范例
一些学生认为学英语很重要;一些学生则认为不必学英语;我认为……(观点、理由)
Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the
struggle of life”. Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden to them.
In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I like English best.
There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject. First, English is one of the most widely used languages
of the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly,it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot.
For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. (166words)
2000年上海高考作文及范例
1、我最难忘的一课 2、具体说明为何难忘 3、感想
An Unforgettable Lesson
In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident.
One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us. While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced. But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her.
She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of homework from her.
A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a good teacher is. In my
opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps liked best. (210 words)
2001年上海高考作文及范例
请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。
Nowadays the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Like everything else, private cars have both
favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows.
First, private cars can bring convenience and mobility to owners. A car allows a person to move comfortably and
safely as well as quickly and freely. Because my family owns a car, we are able to make extensive journeys every year. Therefore, I believe the tourist industry in China will develop more quickly with the increase in the number of private cars. Secondly, if more people buy cars, the automobiles industry will develop dramatically. What’s more, the growth of the automobile industry can trigger the boom of other important and related industries such as iron and steel production, energy and technological application.
Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, too many cars will give rise to a series of problems, such as serious environmental pollution and more traffic accidents. In addition, the driver may have drive around and around looking for available parking spaces.
Through above analysis, we can see that private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged. (199 words)
2002年上海高考作文及范例
简要描述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
Duo to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the
treasure of the whole world family. Both the parents and grandparents usually over indulge the child.
We can see in the picture, When a child is learning to ride a bicycle, the parent and the grandparent are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protect the child for fear that they should fall and hurt themselves.
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