2017高三英语作文

2017高三英语作文篇一

2017高考英语作文绝佳材料

一学校生活

一、话题常用词汇必背

1．常用单词

(1)conflict n． 冲突

(2)harmony n. 和谐

(3)quarrel n. 争吵

(4)virtue n. 美德

(5)dormitory n.公寓

(6)relaxation n.放松

(7)board v. 寄宿

(8)beat v. 战胜

(9)exercise v. 锻炼

(10)strengthen v． 加强

(11)participate v. 参加

(12)exciting adj. 兴奋的

(13)first-class adj. 一流的

(14)compulsory adj. 强制的

(15)competitive adj. 竞争性强的

(16)self-centered adj. 以自我为中心的

(17)calmly adv. 平静地

(18)wisely adv. 明智地

2．常用短语

(1)the final exam 期末考试

(2)after-class activities 课外活动

(3)be accustomed to 习惯于

(4)make up one's mind 下决心

(5)distinguish oneself 展示自己

(6)build up one's body 增强体质

(7)be beneficial to 对……有益

(8)get into a bad habit 染上坏习惯

(9)live an ideal life 过着理想的生活

一、话题写作佳句必背

1．According to the rules and regulations of our school, it is

compulsory for us students to live in the dormitories of our school.

根据学校的规章制度，我们学生必须住在学校的公寓里。

2．For the sake of convenience, there are a large percentage of

students boarding with local families in and around the village.

为了方便，有很大比例的学生寄宿在这个村子及其周围地区的家庭中。

3．The English corner gives me a chance to distinguish

myself by speaking English fluently.

在英语角里说一口流利的英语给了我一个展现自我的机会。

4．The dream of going to the first-class university attracts us greatly and we have made up our minds to

achieve it despite great hardship.

上一流大学的梦想深深地吸引了我们，尽管有很多困难，我们下定决心要实现这个梦想。

You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.(2012·湖北高考短文写

作)

你不能选择你所被给予的东西，但是你可以选择如何利用它。

(江苏高考)生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张。请你结合

此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。

满分作文会仿写（按要求将文章补充完整并背诵）

范例一

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. Su Hua bumped into Li Jiang

(昨天下午在打篮球时，状语从句的省略). Then Li Jiang began to shout to Su Hua, (结果导致一场激烈的争吵，非限制性定语从句)． 他们吵架的原因是他们不够冷静，The reason why ... was that ...). Both

of them wanted to win, but it was not helpful to do so. When we meet such situation, we should try to keep

calm. (相互体谅是必要的，it作形式主语). It is also a virtue to

forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society.

Don't be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.

(只有这样我们的学校生活才能和谐，强调句式).

1.while playing basketball yesterday afternoon

2.which led to a horrible quarrel

3.The reason why they quarrelled to each other was that they were not calm enough

4.It is essential to be considerate to one another

5.It is by this means that we can lead a harmonious school life

范例二

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su 状语从句的省略)．Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.

插入语), it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame — they were not calm enough and 强调句式). As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.

(定语从句). It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others' place. Don„t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely. 倒装句式)．

二 网络与生活

1．常用单词

(1)virus n． 病毒

(2)credit n. 信用卡

(3)complaint n. 抱怨

(4)recreation n. 消遣

(5)advantage n. 优点

(6)email n. 电子邮件

(7)information n. 信息

(8)convenience n. 方便

(9)communication n. 交流

(10)cyberspace n. 网络空间

(11)chat v． 聊天

(12)explore v. 探索

(13)exchange v. 交换

(14)download v. 下载

(15)fictional adj. 虚幻的

(16)artificial adj. 人造的

(17)universal adj. 普遍的

(18)intelligent adj. 智能的

(19)technological adj. 科技的

(20)widely adv. 广泛地

(21)actually adv. 实际上

2．常用短语

(1)instead of 而不是

(2)shop online 网上购物

(3)click on sth. 用鼠标点击

(4)make good use of 充分利用

(5)surf the Internet 上网浏览信息

(6)broaden one's horizons 开阔视野

(7)a technological revolution 技术革命

(8)provide ... with ... 为……提供……

(9)download information from the Internet 从网络上下载信息

1. We are now living in an information age, in which the web is widely used.

2. Whenever necessary they can download all kinds of information from the Internet.

3. It is email instead of letter that makes communication easier.

4. People are worried about the safety of paying for goods using credit when shopping.

一、话题写作佳句必背

1．You can shop as you like as the online shops are open 24

hours a day.

你可以随心所欲地每天24小时在网上购物。

2．It is easy to find what you are looking for on the Internet.

在网上找你正在寻找的东西是容易的。

3．Some people are worried about the safety of paying for goods using credit cards when shopping on the Internet.

一些人担心在网上购物时用信用卡为商品付钱的安全性。

4．Once cheated online, you may find it difficult to make a complaint.

一旦你在网上受到欺骗，你会发现很难起诉。

5．We must think twice before we decide to purchase goods sold on the Internet.

我们在网上购物时，必须三思而后行。

二、连句成篇并背诵(选用“what's worse, in my opinion, finally, for one thing, for another, secondly, firstly”过渡词衔接成文)

Online shopping is a new way of shopping. It offers a number of benefits for the shoppers. , the most important advantage is convenience. You can shop as you like as the online shops are open 24 hours a day, and do not have to queue with other shoppers. easy to find what you are looking for on the Internet. goods through the Internet.

Every coin has two sides, online shopping has its disadvantages, too. , you can't people are worried about the safety of paying for goods using credit cards when shopping on the Internet. What's worse, once cheated online, you may find it difficult to make a complaint.

(安徽皖南八校第一次联考)如今网络已经对人们产生了很大影响，对中学生影响尤其之深。有人认为网络的利大于弊，有人认为网络的弊大于利。请以“Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet”为题，用英语写一篇文章，结合实际情况谈谈你的看法。

范例一

Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet

People, old and young, are using it, and we students are no exception.

However, our parents are worried about our surfing the Net, (现在分词作伴随状语). In fact, the Internet can do us more good than harm. For instance we students can seek help online when we are faced with difficulties in our studies or when we want to find some useful materials to complete a task. The Internet also provides us with a cheap alternative to communicate with others.

定语从句); but that's not the fault of the Internet. We should have control over ourselves to make good use of the Internet.

范例二

Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet

在日常生活中，我们通过因特网受益颇多，同位语从句). We can read news, watch films, keep in touch with our relatives, make friends, or play games to get relaxed on the Internet.

But every coin has two sides. The Internet also has bad effects on people, especially on teenagers. Things such as violence and cheating, often appear on the Internet seriously polluting their hearts and soul. Consequently, children will gradually lose interest in their studies.

到了政府该采取有效措施的时候了，it's high time ... 句型). Some websites that disobey the rules(不遵守规章的，定语从句) should be made public and closed up. As students, we should protect ourselves by keeping on guard against the bad effects of the Internet. I'm sure we will have a better online environment soon so that the Internet can serve us better(目的是因特网能够更好地为我们服务，so that引导目的状语从句).

世界与环境

一、话题常用词汇必背

1．常用单词

(1)action n． 行为

(2)desire n. 渴望

(3)harmony n. 和谐

(4)environment n. 环境

(5)existence n. 生存

(6)energy n. 能量； 精力

(7)consider v. 考虑

2017高三英语作文篇二

2017届高三英语循序写作(每周一卷,步步登高)

第一步从写对句子开始(用时3周)

写作中写对句子是最基本的要求，其中最重要的一点是句子结构要完整。所以，同学们在平时训练时一定要从掌握最基本的句子成分和基本句式做起，通过观摩、背诵、仿写，最终写出准确无误的句子。在高考中即使你的作文不能写得漂漂亮亮、洋气十足，也一定要写得像模像样，硬伤不多！所以学写作，要先从最基本的句子抓起。

第一周 各司其职的8大句子成分

句子由各个组成部分构成，这些组成部分叫做句子成分。句子成分可分为主语、谓语、宾语、定语、状语、补语、表语和同位语等。

一、主语——句子的主体

主语是句子的主体，是句子所要说明的人或事物，表示句子描述的是谁或什么。更确切地说，主语是说明谓语所表示的动作或状态的执行者。主语通常由名词(短语)、代词、数词、动词不定式(短语)、动名词(短语)或从句等充当。

The most obvious problem in our class is lack of interaction and teamwork.(2015·广东高考读写任务)

我们班最明显的问题是缺少互动和协作。(名词短语作主语)

[即时演练] 根据括号内的提示完成句子

1．有时放弃一些东西可能意味着得到的更多。(动名词短语作主语) 浙江高考书面表达)

2．如何与别人友好相处是你应该学会的第二件事。(不定式短语作主语) 江西高考满分作文)

3．我打算告诉你的是关于我们学校向你们中文班赠书之事。(从句作主语) is about the book donation from our school to your Chinese class.(2015·天津高考满分作文)

二、谓语——主语的行为

谓语用来描述主语的行为动作、状态或特征。实义动词(短语)可以单独作谓语，有时态、人称和数的变化；系动词不能单独作谓语，系表结构才可以作谓语；助动词和情态动词也不能单独作谓语，“助动词/情态动词＋实义动词”可以作谓语。

Half an hour later, I managed to find the right answer.(2015·湖北高考短文写作)

半小时后，我设法找到了正确答案。(实义动词作谓语)

[即时演练] 根据括号内的提示完成句子

1．我认为今天的孩子应当学着尊敬长辈。(“情态动词＋定义动词”作谓语)

I think today'2．手表在我们日常生活中是必要的，但它的功能太简单呆板了。(系表结构作谓语) The watch in our daily life, but its function 湖南高考满分作文)

三、宾语——动作的对象

宾语是动作的对象或承受者，一般位于及物动词和介词的后面。可以用作宾语的有：名词、代词、数词、不定式、动名词和从句等。

I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea.(2015·浙江高考书面表达) 我设法说服我的同学们接受我的想法。(不定式作宾语)

[即时演练] 根据括号内的提示完成句子

1．我真的希望你能给我一些如何学习英语的好的建议。(从句作宾语)

I really hope on how to study English.(2015·四川高考书面表达)

2．他突然想在启程之前再看看这座城市的美景。(动名词作宾语)

Suddenly he thought of before setting out.

四、表语——主语的特征

表语与前面的系动词一起构成复合谓语(系表结构)，用来说明主语的特征、类属、状态、身份等。可以用作表语的有：名词(短语)、代词、数词、形容词、副词、不定式(短语)、动名词、分词、介词短语和从句等。

Although the answer seemed a little strange, nobody but I doubted it.(2015·湖北高考短文写作)

尽管答案有些奇怪，但只有我对此产生了怀疑。(形容词作表语)

[即时演练] 根据括号内的提示完成句子

几分钟过去了，但是整个班级一片寂静。(介词短语作表语) 湖南高考书面表达)

五、定语——名词的修饰语

定语是用来描述名词的品质与特征的修饰语，它常和名词构成名词短语。可以用作定语的有：形容词、名词、代词、数词、副词、不定式、动名词、分词、介词短语和从句等。

Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.(2015·安徽高考书面表达)

最后，我要问一些关于他个人生活的问题，这一定很有趣。(从句作定语)

[即时演练] 根据括号内的提示完成句子

彼此坦诚相待是交友的最好方法。(不定式短语作定语) 六、状语——动词、形容词、副词或句子的修饰语

状语是用于修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子的一种成分。可以用作状语的有：副词、名词、数词、形容词、不定式、分词、介词短语、独立主格结构和从句等。

Time permitting, I expect to have more spare time to spend with my friends so that we can have a better relationship.(2014·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)

时间允许的话，我希望有更多的业余时间和朋友一起度过，这样我们就会有更加良好的关系。 (独立主格结构和从句作状语)

[即时演练] 根据括号内的提示完成句子

1．旅行了一周后，他回到了家，感到很累但很高兴。(形容词作状语)

After a week'2．为了解决这个问题，我和同学们进行了讨论，想出了一个建议并汇报给了校长。(不定式短语作状语) suggestion and later reported to the headmaster.(2014·北京高考满分作文)

七、补足语——宾语或主语的补充说明

补足语是用来补充说明宾语或主语的性质、状态等的一种句子成分。补充说明主语意义的句子成分叫做主语补足语；补充说明宾语意义的句子成分叫做宾语补足语。可以用作补足语的有：形容词、名词、不定式、分词和介词短语等。

①Hopefully, these books will help the students to know and learn Chinese better.(2015·天津高考书面表达)

这些书籍有望帮助同学们更好地认识和理解汉语。(不定式短语作宾补)

②Our country will be made more and more beautiful if we try our best.

如果我们竭尽全力，我们的国家将会变得越来越美丽。(形容词作主补)

[即时演练] 根据括号内的提示完成句子

科普书能帮助我们学生对科学和自然更感兴趣。(不定式作宾补) 浙江高考满分作文)

八、同位语——同等重要的修饰语

对句子中的某一成分作进一步解释、说明，与前面的成分在语法上处于同等地位的句子成分叫做同位语。可以用作同位语的有：名词、代词、数词、介词短语、不定式、动名

词和从句等。

We are going to the local nursing home for the coming Double Ninth Festival, a holiday for us to show our respect for the elderly.(2015·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)

我们打算去当地一家敬老院过即将到来的重阳节，该节日显示了我们对老年人的尊重。(名词作同位语)

[即时演练] 根据括号内的提示完成句子

一方面，我非常自信能在考试中做好；另一方面，我感觉有点紧张，尽管考试并不难。(从句作同位语)

On the one hand, I have strong belief hand, I feel a bit nervous, though it's not difficult.(2014·四川高考书面表达)

[综合演练提能]

Ⅰ.分析句子成分

1.RecentlyIhave carried outa surveyamong the students ①②③④

in our class. ⑤

①状语 ②主语 ③谓语 ④宾语 ⑤状语

2.

One daysome of my studentswere talking aboutwhat we ①②③would like to be in the future. ④

①状语 ②主语 ③谓语 ④宾语

3.Musiccan makeour mindin a peaceful stateafter a whole ①②③④

day of tiring work. ⑤

①主语 ②谓语 ③宾语 ④宾补 ⑤状语

4.The meetingheld yesterdaywas important. ①②③

①主语 ②定语 ③谓语(系动词＋表语)

5.Every dayhewas forcedto work from morning till night. ①②③④

①状语 ②主语 ③谓语 ④主补

6.Wordcamethat the mayor would pay a visit to our school ①②

next week. ③

①主语 ②谓语 ③同位语

Ⅱ.按要求完成小作文

(2016·东北三校高三联考)Good morning, everyone！It's my honor ①在这里作一个简短的报告，用不定式短语作真正主语和状语)．

Recently I have found ②我们一些同学不能有效地学习，用宾语从句)．Some can't help falling asleep in class, ③because_they_often_study_too_late_into_the_night (因为他们经常学习到深夜，用状语从句). Others seldom have sports, ④which_surely_does_harm_to_their_health (这确实对他们的健康有害，用定语从句)．

As we know, enough sleep is ⑤非常重要，用介词短语作表语) for us Senior 3 students. We can concentrate our mind in class with sufficient sleep, so we should try to make wise use of our time, ⑥在学习和休息上取得平衡，用现在分词作状语). Besides, ⑦doing_proper_exercise_every_day (每天适当地锻炼，用动名词作主语) can benefit us a lot, keeping fit, reducing stress and so on. Let's spare some time ⑧(做各种运动，用不定式短语作状语). And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well.

That's all. Thank you for listening!

第二周 万变不离其宗的5种基本句式

句子成分构成了英语中各种各样的句子，其实英语中最基本的句式只有五种，其他各种句式都是由这五种基本句式演变而来。五种基本句式如下： 主语＋谓语不及物动词

主语＋谓语及物动词＋宾语

主语＋系动词＋表语

主语＋谓语及物动词＋间接宾语＋直接宾语

主语＋谓语及物动词＋宾语＋宾语补足语

一、主语＋谓语(不及物动词)

该句式常用来表示主语的动作或状态。其特点为：句子的谓语动词都能表达完整的意思，这类动词叫做不及物动词，后面可以跟副词、介词短语、状语从句等。

①北京高考书面表达)

训练营将于7月20号开始。

②江西高考书面表达) 沐浴在阳光中，我们高兴得欢呼雀跃。

[即时演练] 完成句子

1．为了保持健康，我们应该定期锻炼。

2．因此，这种新鞋最近才问世。

2017高三英语作文篇三

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1. 感谢信

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Dear Professor Liang,

I am writing to extend my gratitude to youbecause with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of SydneyUniversity.{2017高三英语作文}.

Last June, when I applied to become agraduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuablehelp. You not only wrote a

recommendation（推荐） for me to Professor Wells who worksin the Sydney University but also gave me careful and patient instructions onhow to fill the application forms and write the application letters.

It is your unreserved(无保留的） help thatenables me to obtain this splendid（极好的）opportunity of further education. For thefollowing two years I will study hard to reciprocate（回报） your sincere help andexpectations with excellent grades.

Yours truly,

Zhang Ying

2. 道歉信

假设你是李华，你上星期参观伦敦，当时你爸的一个朋友Rogers先生对你照顾有加，请写封信表达你对他的感谢。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Sarah,

I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable toattend your birthday

party next Thursday evening. That is owing to（因为） the fact that （同位语从句）my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital thismorning. I have to go there immediately and take care of him. As told by thedoctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and I haveasked my boss for a leave.

I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate yourbirthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself withall our old friends. I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to youtomorrow to show my best wishes. Besides, please give my regards to our friendswhen you meet them at the party.

Cordially, （sincerely）

Li Hua

3. 申请信

假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B & B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣，要写一封求职信，包括下列要点：

1．年龄：182．

2. 学习情况：班级前5，英语口语好

3．兴趣和特长：打字快，喜欢阅读，听音乐

4．性格特点：积极向上

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行为连贯；

3．开头语和结束语己为你写好。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I’m really interested in this position so I am writing to apply for it.

I’m18 years old and will graduate from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July.I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English, especially spoken English. I often use

the computer and I type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.

I hope I may be granted（授予） an interview,when I can explain my qualifications（资格，条件） more fully. I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely/Yours,

LiHua

4. 通知

假如你是校学生会主席。新年即将到来，为了帮助你校的外国留学生更好地了解中国文化，学生会将为他们举办一个新年晚会。请你根据以下提示，用英语向他们发出口头通知。

时间：下周五6：00—8：00

地点：教学楼101室

内容：1．唱中国歌 2．比赛用筷子 3．学习包饺子

注意：1．词数不少于50；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

【优秀满分范文】

Good afternoon, everyone. May I have your attention, please?

I’m the chairman of the Students’ Union. As the New Year is around the corner（即将到来）, weare going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you tohave a better understanding of Chinese culture.

During the party, not only canyou sing a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see howskilled you are at using chopsticks. What’s more, you’ll learn at the party howto make dumplings. Sounds great. doesn’t it? The party is scheduled（计划于） in Room 101of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday.

Please make sure you won’t miss it. Thank you for your attention.

5. 邀请信

你们班同学打算周六去爬香山。请给外教Chris写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下：

1. 时间：8am—5 pm；

2. 集合地点：校门口；

3. 交通工具：公交车；

4. 携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Chris，

I’m writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class.

We are supposed togather at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am sharp. The bus will serve asour transportation. We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picniclunch there, so please take some food with you as lunch. At about 2:00 pm. wewill go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about5.00pm. You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful sceneryand an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in arain. Please spare some time to join us.

Your participation can surely addcolor to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement.

Yours,

Joe

6. 建议信

假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见．请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1．说明你是该报的忠实读者

2．说明该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事

3．提出建议： 刊登指导英语学习的文章

注意：1．词数100左右，开头语己为你写好；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.

There are many advantages of Global Mirror. Firstly, Global

Mirror covers both national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.

As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.

Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

7. 求助信

假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：

1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；

2017高三英语作文篇四

2017年高考英语作文要点串讲复习-版面恰好直接A4打印

2017高考英语作文考前复习串讲

Ⅰ. NMET书面表达第五项要求

1. 覆盖所有的语言要点。 内容要点可用不同方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。

2. 值得注意的是语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 或较高级词汇所致; 具备较强的语言运用能力。

3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。

Ⅱ. 常见的不足

1.汉语式英语 2.无过渡语 3.句式单一,平铺直叙

Ⅲ. 如何增强书面表达效果

1.使用较高级的词汇

2.使用恰当的连接词

3.使用较丰富的句式{2017高三英语作文}.

一、怎样使用较高级的词汇 4. 二、怎样使用恰当的连接词

连接词使文章语意通顺，前后衔接紧密，可采用以下方法：

提示1：恰当使用关联词，如when，so，if，because，so that等。

提示2：巧妙使用意思有联系的词或短语，如First, Second, Third, Soon, What’s more, As a result等。

提示3：适当使用过渡性语句，如The reasons are as follows./Every coin has two sides./On the other hand,/On the contrary, Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. ( 2007全国I)

First, she can make some pocket money to meet pet daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Second, she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace. Third, she can build up new friendships and improve bet social skills. (2007陕西)

In my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step process. (2007浙江)

连接词、句型的选择

1、递进关系

（肯定）Besides / What’s more / Also /In addition/Furthermore

（否定）What’s worse / Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worse

2、时间

一…就…：The moment / On doing / as soon as /immediately / directly

不久：It was not long before … / After a while / Soon

然后：After that / Then / So / Next

同时： At the same time / Meanwhile

3、转折：however , / but / on the contrary / On the other hand / yet / although

4、顺序：First / Second / Third / Last / Next/Then

5、条件：If / As long as / So long as /on condition that / unless

6、强调：It was …that / who … / So she did . /I do hope … / She did help me. /It really worked./ besides/

furthermore/moreover/what’s more/ certainly/ actually/ in fact

7、其它：

不得不做某事：have to do sth./have no choice but to do sth./have nothing to do but do sth.

有必要做某事：There is no need (for sb.) to do sth./It is necessary (for sb.)to do …

最好 做某 事：You’d better do sth. / It’s better to do sth.

做某事没困难：have no difficulty in doing sth. / have no trouble in doing sth.

感 谢 某 人：thank sb. / be thankful to sb./ express one’s thanks to sb. /be grateful to sb. / Thanks to …

求 助 某 人：turn to sb. for help / ask sb. for help / with the help of / with one’s help

惊 奇：To one’s surprise / In surprise / Surprisingly / only +不定式（表意外结果）

结 果：As a result / Therefore / Thus / So

总 结：In a word / In short / Above all / After all/ generally speaking/ to sum up/ in all/altogether / as is known to all 表 达 观 点：In my opinion / I think / I believe / I’m sure / I guess

原因如下（很多）：he reasons are as follows. /here are many reasons for it.

浪费金钱（时间）：It’s a waste of money / time …

Task: 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。

1、 Yao Ming was walking in the street___________ he heard someone cry for help.

2、 He advised that I hire a car ___________ I could travel around in the west .

3、 It was not long___________the police came.

4、 ___________he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.

5、 Do you agree with my arrangement ? ___________,do write to me soon.

6、 We can go downtown and do some shopping.___________ , we can pay a visit to some places of interest.

7、I shared the cost of the gas with my friends . ___________ , I saved $80.

8、Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. ___________ , it may make us fat.

Task: Writing Practice

请你给《中国日报》写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。 原因：

1、家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。

2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。

3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。 看法：

1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。

2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。

要求：

1、不要逐字逐句翻译。 2、语句要连贯通顺。 3、字数100个左右。

Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. Most families are poor and can’t afford their education. They don’t let them go to school. Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldn’t like to go to school.

All the children including girls should be educated. The whole society should pay attention to it. They’ll play an important part in the future of our country.

诊断：

[优点] 1、词能达意；

2、语句表达基本正确。

[缺点] 语句不够连贯

[药方] 1、使用常见句型；

2、每两个句子之间使用关联词或过渡词。

Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school.▁▁▁▁▁▁▁▁。▁▁▁，most families are too poor to send their children to school . ▁▁▁▁▁▁▁▁▁▁▁,they don’t let them go to school. ▁▁▁,some children are not interested in their studies. ▁▁▁▁▁▁,some wouldn’t like to go to school.

▁▁▁▁▁▁,all the children including girls should be educated . ▁▁▁▁▁▁,the whole society should pay attention to it ▁▁▁they’ll play an important part in the future of our country one day.

三、怎样使用较丰富的句式

方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档

Rewrite the sentences

1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere.

2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed.

3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard.

4 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.

Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动词)

5. 听到这个消息, 他们变的很激动。

_________the news, they got excited.

6. 尽管被告知许多遍, 他仍然重复这个错。

__________________many times, he still repeated the mistake.

7. 除非被邀请发言, 你应该在会议上保持沉默。

Unless ________to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.

Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非谓语动词)

8. 面对困难时，他从不放弃。

9. 引入市场后，该产品大获成功。

10. 做完作业后，他回家了。

方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力

Complete the sentences

1. He didn’t realize his foolishness until he returned home.

Not until____________________________________.

2. We can save the earth by changing the way we live.

Only ____________________________________ .

3. He is clever but he does not work hard.

_________________as / though ____________________________________.

4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street.

On the other side of the street ____________________________________.

Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒装句)