2017广东高考作文预测

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2017广东高考作文预测篇一

广东专用-2017高考英语作文范文背诵

2017高考英语作文范文背诵

一、如何提建议—— 给交友有困难的同学提建议

I am sorry you are having trouble in making friends.

【引出建议】Here are some tips to help you.

【列举建议】First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own. I agree this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you will soon have a new friend. Second, you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,【理由】which will make you find people with the same interests. Finally, you should try to join in a discussion, 【理由】letting people know how friendly you are. I hope you will find these ideas useful.

二、列举个例 —— 良好饮食习惯

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, some students have formed a variety of bad eating habits, such as not having breakfast, loving eating snacks, being particular about food, eating and drinking too much and so on, which will surely do harm to their health. To keep healthy, we should have healthy diets. Not only should we have various foods, like fish, meat, vegetables, fruits as well as rice, noodles, but also we should have the foods regularly and properly. Personally, I think it is important to keep a healthy diet, which contributes to building up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

三、举例说明 —— 和谐师生关系对你的影响

【要证明的观点】Actually, having a good relationship with teachers makes it easier for us to get along smoothly with our study at school. 【引出例子】Take me for example. 【例子】My teacher is my good friend. When I fail in the exam, it is my teacher that first helps m to analyze the problem. She is patient enough to make me get over all the difficulties in my study. When I am unhappy she always listens to me carefully and then gives me some reasonable suggestions, so that I can focus on my study soon. Also, I have learned to be helpful and considerate.

【重申主题】But for(要不是) the good relationship with my teachers, I could not have made such progress. 套语背诵

1.There is no denying that confidence plays an important role in our life.

A convincing example that jumps into my mind is about speaking English.

2.Such example can be seen easily in our daily life. A good case in point is …

这样的例子在生活中很容易见到,一个很好的例子就是……

四、讨论或辩论 —— 禁止乞丐在地下人行道行气留宿

【引出主题】Recently, Guangzhou has passed a law to ban beggars from begging and sleeping in the subways and our class had a discussion about it last Monday.

【反对及其理由】56% of the students don’t agree with the idea because they think some beggars really have difficulty in making a living and have to play music in the subway to survive.

【赞成及其理由】However, 44% of the students favour the idea because they think beggars bring a lot of trouble for the city. What’s more, some beggars are just taking advantage of people’s compassion to make easy money.

【个人看法】Personally, I think it is a good idea to forbid beggars in public places and we should take some measures to help them.

五、利弊对比 —— 网购的利弊

【点明主题】Nowadays many people prefer to shop on line. 【罗列益处】

Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, it’s convenient for us to shop on line. Secondly, it helps save much time, with which we can do more other important things. 【罗列弊端】But just as the saying goes, every coin has two sides. Its negative aspects are also apparent. One of the disadvantages is that we are not sure whether the goods we buy are in good quality. 【你的观点】Through the above analysis, I believe that positive aspects of shopping on line for outweigh negative ones. Therefore, I would like to shop on line.

六、采访类 —— 中学生英语单词拼写的问题

Last Wednesday, I had an interview with Mr Wang, an English teacher, concerning the issue of English word spelling among middle school students. According to Mr Wang, slightly more than half of the senior middle school students’ English handwriting is very poor and about 45% of them can not spell words correctly although they are able to speak. He also pointed out that the causes for spelling problems are that there are no specific word spelling checks in exams, and there is not enough training. Worse still, the students are lazy to memorize word spelling. He suggested that we should raise the awareness and place great emphasis on that, and above all, we should master skills while we are training ourselves.

七、调查类—— 21世纪最令人担忧的问题

Last week, we made/did a survey among 500 Senior Two students about the most worrying problems in the 21st century. The survey shows that 32% of the students think that they worry about the natural disasters(自然灾害)most, for earthquakes and floods have taken many people’s lives. Besides, 29% of the students hold the opinion that environmental pollution(环境污染)is the most worrying problem while 17% of the students consider the housing problem(住房问题)to be the most worrying one. The percentage of the students who worry most about employment(就业问题) is the same as that of the students who worry most about food safety(食品安全). As for myself, food safety is the most worrying problem because it is linked closely to our health.

八、心得体会 —— 诚实/ 勿以善小而不为

1. After reading the story, I am so touched by Alan, whose behavior is worth praising. There is no doubt that honesty still plays a very important role in people’s life and only those who are honest will be trusted and respected by people. (诚实)

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3.After reading the story, I was lost in thought. I came to realize that people should never ignore the deed of small kindness. Your small good deeds sometimes will get big returns or make a great difference! (勿以善小而不为)

九、记叙事件经过或过程 —— 日记或游记

【总述】Today we visited Qinghua University.

【过程】 Early in the morning we arrived at the gate of Qinghua University, where we were warmly welcomed by an old professor, who then showed us around the campus. In the library, we saw some university students reading attentively in the reading rooms. After that, we came to the lab building. At the end of the visit, the old professor gave us a lecture on science in the afternoon, which interested us very much. Time passed so quickly that before we knew it, it was time that we had to say goodbye to the professor.

【结果】Since then, I have worked harder at my lessons than usual and made up my mind to be a student of Qinghua University.

十、人物简介 ——用英语简介李敏同学

【姓名职务与特点】 Li Min, monitor of Class 1 Grade 2 (同位语), is healthy and lively. 【成绩与爱好】 She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. 【事迹】 When she came to school, she had much difficulty with English, but through hard work she made great progress. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Min is very strict with herself in her work and daily life, and is always ready to help others.

相关短语:

1. be admitted into a key university 考上重点大学

2. major in law主修法律

3. get a master’s degree 获得硕士学位

4. graduate from Harvard University 毕业于哈佛大学

5. win the first prize 获得一等奖

6. win a gold medal 赢得一枚金牌{2017广东高考作文预测}.

7. become a world champion 成为世界冠军

8. set a good example to us 给我们树立了良好的榜样

9. be highly thought of 受到好评

10.be awarded a medal for 因……而获得奖章

11.be awarded the title of 获得…称号

12.devote ...to ... 把…专用于/奉献给

13. born of a poor clerk ’s family 出生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中

十一、假设处境 —— 假如你当时在场,你会怎样做?

If I had been on the spot, I would have jumped into the river to rescue the child on the condition that I could swim. If not, I would have first called the police and then persuaded the people on the boat and the swimmers nearby to help. (湖北大学生为救溺水小孩死三人事件)

十二、说明异同 —— 古典音乐与流行音乐的异同

【同】From the point of many people, there are many similarities between classical music and pop music. Both of them can make people relax and enjoy life as well. 【异】 However, the differences are also obvious. Classical music can remind them of the sweet memories in the past. Besides, classical music, which was made by the famous musicians like Beethoven is in high class and can last long, while the words of pop music are often concerned with modern life, even true love between friends or lovers. What’s more, pop music is easy to sing. 十三、图表作文

1. 【总述现象】 From the chart, we can see clearly that there has been a sharp rise in the average income of Chinese farmers in the past 30 years. (从上表可以清楚地看出, 在最近30年里中国农民的人均收入急剧上升。)

2.【数据变化】 As early as 1978, the average income of Chinese farmers was only 193 yuan . Then only 16 years later, it increased to 2181.52 yuan. And by 2010, the average income of Chinese farmers had reached 7890 yuan, which was 40 times as much as 30 years ago.

3.【解释原因】There are many reasons accounting for this change. Firstly ... Secondly ... Finally ...

有许多原因可以解释这种变化。第一……第二……最后……

4. 【阐述观点】 As far as I’m concerned, I firmly support the policy of reform and opening up, which is the exact way to make China powerful.

(就我来说, 我坚决支持改革开放政策, 改革开放是强国之路。)

十四、地点简介 —— 介绍广州

Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, also known as Five-lamb City, Flower City and so on, serves as the capital city of Guangdong Province. This city covers a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers with a population of more than ten million. Guangzhou, a famous city with a history of more than 2, 200 years, is a starting port of the Silk Road on the sea in history. With the Pearl River winding its way through the city, Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate. The beautiful city, well-known for its beautiful scenery, is also abundant in traveling resources. 十五、邀请信 —— 邀请外籍老师参加学校新年晚会

Dear Mr. Green,

On behalf of the Students’ Union, I’m writing this letter to invite you to participate in our New Year Evening. The party is going to be held in the school meeting hall from 7:00 p.m. to 9:00 p.m. next Friday. Many wonderful performances, presented by the teachers and students in our school, will be shown on the stage, such as the{2017广东高考作文预测}.

Chinese folk songs and dances, Chinese musical instruments, short plays of traditional style and so on. So it will surely offer you a good opportunity to obtain a clearer picture of Chinese traditional culture. We should be very delighted if you could come; meanwhile, our evening would be more cheerful if you could give a performance. We are looking forward eagerly to your participation.

Yours,

Li Ming

十六、节日简介 ——介绍端午节

[时间] The Dragon Boat Festival, a traditional Chinese festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. It dates from over 2000 years ago, which falls on June 6th this year. [方式] On this day, Chinese people prepare Zongzi — glutinous(粘黏的) rice dumplings wrapped in bamboo leaves. As the festival name shows, people have dragon boat races to celebrate it, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. [意义] The Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet of ancient China.

十七、兴趣爱好 —— 我最喜欢的运动是游泳

My favorite sport is swimming. 【喜欢的程度】I first became interested in swimming when I was eight in primary school. Now I am a member of my school swimming team and I keep on swimming every day in the river near my home even in winter. 【喜欢的原因】I like swimming because it can not only help me build up my body, but also enrich my life. 【最喜欢的运动员】In this sport, although I like Liu Yu, I admire Michael Phelps, who is one of the best athletes in the world and got 8 gold medals in Beijing Olympics. 【愿望】How I wish to be an Olympic champion some day!

十八、通知 —— 举办“中学生才艺大赛”的通知

Notice

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A “High School Students Talent Show” will be held in Guangzhou Television Station on May 1. There will be eight kinds of talents, including speeches, songs, dances, and musical instruments playing etc. One 1st prize, three 2nd prizes and five 3rd prizes for each type of talent will be offered at the show. If you’d like to have a try, please go to the TV station to sign up before April 30. It’s a good chance for you to show your special talent.

The Students Union

十九、分析原因 —— 分析极端天气出现的原因

[指出现象与引出原因] Reasons for extreme temperatures are varied. [分析原因] For one thing, human’s activities like burning fossil fuels produce carbon dioxide, which make the globe warmer, causing the global temperature to go up. For another, people’ s cutting down trees that can absorb large quantities of carbon dioxide for furniture also contributes to the warming of the earth, which gives rise to extreme temperatures.

二十、问题解决 —— 建设绿色校园

In order to build a green campus, we need to take the following steps. (学校) On the one hand, the school should make rules and regulations to prevent students doing something harm to our green campus.(学生) On the other hand, students should take some classes to raise their awareness. I don’t doubt that our campus will be more beautiful if we work together.

二十一、说明重要性 —— 责任心的重要性

[提出观点] Responsibility is essential to us. [论证] (正面)It not only represents one’s noble quality, but also enables one to be steady-going. Being responsible, you will gain many precious things, such as true love. (反面) Without responsibility, however, you will be an annoyance and can’t do anything successfully. What’s worse,people will lose belief in you if you are irresponsible. [总结] In short, only when we are responsible will we be respected and loved by others.

二十二、发表看法 —— 假期外出旅游

Nowadays, more and more people are in favor of travelling during vacation. [表明观点] To be frank, I can’t agree more with it. [说明理由] There are several factors contributing to my point. In the first place, journeys can widen

our knowledge of geography, customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries and enrich our experiences. In the second place, it is a good way to relax ourselves in my opinion. Furthermore, we can develop better relationship with our friends or family. [得出结论] Therefore, it goes without saying that we can benefit a lot from travelling.

二十三、观点对比 —— 说说人们对幸福的理解

[引出不同观点] Opinions are divided on the feeling of happiness. [观点一] Some people believe that if they have much money or many things, they will be happy. With great wealth, they will be able to do everything they want, with which they will be happy. [观点二] On the other hand, some people regard their intelligence, or their health as their great happiness. [观点三] Still others maintain that happiness is closely tied to their family, for they believe that they feel happy when all members of their family are happy and healthy.

二十四、经历感受 —— 拔苗助长

The story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. He was once badly ill and went to see the doctor. The doctor gave him some pills, telling him to take them three times a day. However, he failed to follow the doctor’s advice and took them 6 times a day. To his great surprise, he became worse. Just as the old saying goes, “more haste less speed”. No matter what we do, we should obey the law of nature. It is the same with our studies. Only by learning step by step can we achieve something.

二十五、概况记叙文的内容要点

The author tells a story about (某人)a Chinese student with an excellent academic achievement who (做某事) couldn’t find a job in Germany (原因) because of his stealing rides at the subway, (启示)which shows honesty is the best policy.

二十六、概况说明文的内容要点

A survey made in Australia shows (现象) that many teenagers lack one hour’s sleep (原因) due to organized activities and homework, (结果)which results in such serious problems as slow progress in study, weight problem, depression, illness and so on.

二十七、概况议论文的内容要点

The passage tries to tell us (论点) that getting up early in the morning (论据) will benefit us a lot, including a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day.

常见英语谚语50句

【勇气篇】

1. No cross, no crown. 不经历风雨,怎么见彩虹?

2. Life is not all roses. 人生并不是康庄大道。

3. All things are difficult before they are easy. 凡事总是由难而易。

4. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。{2017广东高考作文预测}.

5. Let bygones be bygones. 过去的就让它过去吧。

6. Never too old to learn, never too late to turn. 亡羊补牢,为时未晚。

7. Never say die. 永不言败。

8. Adversity makes a man wise, not rich. 逆境出人才。

9. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。

10. No gains without pains. 吃得苦中苦方为人上人。

11. Success belongs to the persevering. 坚持就是胜利。

12. He laughs best who laughs last. 谁笑到最后,谁笑得最好。

【惜时篇】

13. Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。

14. It is never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。

15. Time flies. 光阴似箭。

16. Lost time is never found again. 岁月既往,一去不回。

2017广东高考作文预测篇二

预测2017年高考作文题

预测2017年高考作文题:生活没有“如果”

阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。出身于音乐世家而如今成为美国证券界风云人物的苏珊说:“如果重新选择,我会毫不犹豫地选择音乐,但我知道那只是美好的”假如“,我只能把手头的工作做好。”

自小喜欢建筑艺术的荆青说:“我因为放弃了不喜欢的公务员职位,才在十年中设计出了今天大家看到的近千个独一无二的楼房样板间。”

歌手王杰说:“我做过茶楼伙计、油漆工、的士司机„„我喜欢并感恩做过的每一份工作。”

上述材料中,你更认同哪个人的观点?请综合材料内容及含意作文,体现你的思考、权衡和选择。要求选好角度,明确立意,明确文体,自拟标题,不要套作,不要抄袭。 优秀作文:生活没有“如果”

美国证券界风云人物苏珊出生于音乐世家。她说:”如果重新选择,我会选择音乐,但那只是“假如”,我只能把手头的工作做好。“我认为,她的观点正是我们大家所需要并学习的。

荆青、王杰的说法固然没有错,但细细品味下来,他俩所说的不正是苏珊话语的另一种表达吗?一切都没有“如果“,选择就选择了,感恩并活在当下,做好现在所做的事情,不正是我们的每个人所需要的吗?

人要学会自己做出选择,选择之后便要坚定地走下去,正如荆青放弃了公务员的职位,选择了建筑艺术并最终取得了成功。试想,假如她继续干着不喜欢的公务员,心中却惦记着建筑,这样她不可能成功。然而生活没有“如果“,她作出了选择并坚定地走了下去。又如王杰,他的选择较多,但他确定用心将自己所选的工作做好,最后才成就了一代金嗓。 生活没有“如果“,我们不要在踯躅不前,做出自己的选择,不要让今后都在如果那时的悔恨中度过。如果皮尔洛没有选择足球而是继承家业,如果马云没选择踏入互联网市场而是继续干小本生意,如果贝多芬因耳聋放弃了音乐而选择孤独终老„„这世界将少去太多美丽,所以不论我们现在身处何方,脚踏何地,做出选择,活在当下才是创造你人生精彩的办法。

没有人能永远做出所谓“正确“的决定,选”错“了也没有关系。让我们面对它,把当下能做的事做好,你的人生也会绽放不一样的光彩。俗话说,”车到山前必有路。“每一个不经意的选择都会成为日后的一个”如果“。坐在考场中写下这行字,也许会成为日后我可以骄傲,可以懊悔的理由,但我不会抱怨一切,生活没有”如果“,一切选择都是自己选的,抱怨当时这样的就好了,那样就好了又有何用呢?徒增烦恼罢了。

苏珊,荆青,王杰都是我们现今所谓的成功人士,但每个人成功道路都是不可复制的,我们却可以自己把握行驶的方向。这样无论结果如何,你想的不会是“如果那时“,而是”我做出了自己的选择,我尽力了。“这也可以笑一切了吧。

“如果“我没有写下这篇文章,我会怎样?我不在乎,我做出了我认为正确的选择,因为:生活没有”如果“。(冠华作文网)

2017广东高考作文预测篇三

预测2017年高考作文题

预测2017年高考作文题:真心的尊重

阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分)台湾爱乐乐团到大陆某市演出,场地两侧不断打出“演出中请勿摄影录音”字幕。演出中,不少观众被精彩表演所感染而猛拍猛录。在场地维持秩序的工作人员,发现谁违规,就用镭射光笔直接照谁,被照观众有的自觉理亏,有的恼羞成怒,现场秩序时好时坏。演出后,爱乐乐团官方微博发出帖子,表明不欢迎那些不尊重艺术的观众。对以上这件事,你是怎么看?请你以网友的身份,对爱乐乐团、观众或工作人员的表现加以评论,表明自己的态度,阐述自己的看法。要求综合材料内容及含意,选好角度,确定立意,完成写作任务。不得泄露个人信息。 优秀作文:真心的尊重

爱乐乐团在大陆演出,为禁止观众摄影录音,不仅不断在场地两侧打出字幕,甚至用起了“镭射光笔直射”这般野蛮的方法,然而收效甚微。我认为原因在于乐团负责人并没有对此现象进行思考,只知堵住下游,却不从源头治理。观众为什么“顶风冒死”摄影录音?归根结底是喜爱这个演出,否则为何做这种吃力不讨好之事?因此,爱乐的处理方式太过强硬,丢了观众的面子,还极有可能砸了自己的场子。然而为什么即使采取如此强硬的手段,大陆观众仍是屡教不改呢?我想原因一言难尽。摆在首位的,便是观众对艺术的尊重程度,或是认识程度较低,对艺术与娱乐的概念,观众混为一谈不作区分。在台湾或是西方发达国家,交响乐被视作神圣庄重的高雅艺术,观众大多是了解并真心热爱交响乐之人。他们不觉得曲高和寡,愿意用安静聆听的方式尊重音乐和音乐家们。然而大陆观众中,这样的知音比重恐怕不会太大。有多少人是冲着“台湾爱乐乐团”的冠帽而去,又有多少人是为在门面上“提升”自己而来。他们或许觉得悦耳动人,却不会意识到交响乐和演唱会的区别。对于他们来说,这都是娱乐,娱乐就该记录下来与朋友分享。转型期中国的国民劣根性又何至于此?中国人不爱守规矩的习惯和大众的侥幸心理,这一次不过是再次集体显现而已。一个人过马路、听交响乐,或许会老实地遵守交规,静静聆听;一群人扎堆,就会出现“中国式过马路”的壮景,以及快门声和屏幕亮光遍布观众席的“盛况”。这也难怪工作人员会出此下策。我想,爱乐若真想营造良好的演出氛围,就该站在观众的思维上考虑和处理,而不是一句自视清高的“不欢迎不尊重艺术的观众”,不给人留一丝情面。这种“曲高和寡”的表态,只会将大陆观众推离交响乐更远,有悖于音乐存在的意义,并对交响乐在民众的普及造成一定阻碍。若我是乐团负责人,那么在每场演出开始之前,我会身着正装站在舞台中央,用温和但有力度的语调,向观众普及有关交响乐的常识,让观众理解摄影录音对演奏者的影响。并且,搬出名家之语吧:“真正的音乐,是用耳朵听、用心感受的。”随着西方古典音乐流入中国,越来越多的中国小孩学习西洋乐器,人们的观念必将与时俱进。对待交响乐,也定会有更深入的认识,更真心的尊重。熄灭镭射光笔,用温和的眼神带领大众走向艺术的曙光吧。

2017广东高考作文预测篇四

2017年高考作文预测“永恒的飞翔”导写

预测2017年高考作文题:永恒的飞翔

阅读下面的文字,按要求作文。

一阵风吹来,一片叶子脱离树枝,飞向了天空。

“我会飞了,我会飞了。”叶子边飞边喊,“我要飞上天了!”

叶子飞呀飞,飞过了一棵棵树,飞过了一只只栖息在电线上的鸟。 “哈哈,我飞得比你们高。”叶子得意洋洋地对鸟儿说。{2017广东高考作文预测}.

又一阵风吹过,叶子在天空中打了几个转,被吹落到一个小水坑里,随即被路过的一头牛踩进了淤泥里,不见了踪影。

一只鸟感叹地对它的孩子说:“看到了吧,如果不依靠自己的力量,风既可以把你吹上天,也可以把你吹进烂泥潭。要飞翔,必须靠自身的力量。”

要求:选择一个角度构思作文,自主确定立意,确定文体,确定标题,不少于800字;不脱离材料内容和及含意的范围作文。不要套作,不得抄袭。

【写作指导】:

这是一篇材料作文,材料中的叶子曾经被风吹上了天,但最终被风吹进了烂泥潭。题意不难理解,因为材料中鸟的感叹就是明显带有总结性质的议论。鸟的感叹包含了两个方面的内容:“风既可以把你吹上天,也可以把你吹进烂泥潭”告诉我们外在环境、因素的作用;“要飞翔,就要靠自己的力量”告诫我们成功的内在因素在于自身的实力与努力。

可立意为:

1.外在环境(因素)既可以成就一个人,也可以毁灭一个人。

2.成功需要借助外物,但更需要自身实力(自我努力)。

3.成功,要靠自己。

【优秀作文】:

永恒的飞翔{2017广东高考作文预测}.

叶子被风托起,洋洋自得地飞上了蓝天,但转瞬间又被吹落,它只能短暂地飞翔;鸟儿依靠自己的力量搏击长空,虽然有苦有累,但这才是永恒的飞翔:不依靠自己的力量,飞翔只是短暂的;依靠自己的力量的飞翔才是永恒的。

像烟花,依靠的是人们给它的力量,纵使在万人仰望时,发出云蒸霞蔚的灿烂光芒,在落幕后也是空无一物。《红楼梦》中的四大家庭,钟鸣鼎食之家,在元妃省亲时,大把大把地弃掷金钱,但他们靠的不是自己的真材实料,靠的是元妃的受宠,对权臣的打点进贡,最终辉煌只是一时的,大观园落了片白茫茫的真干净。如若他们靠自己的力量在朝中作贡献,或许不会受到那么大的打击。但是依靠别人,再成功也是短暂的,像叶子短暂的飞翔。

有些人的飞翔却是永恒的,他们的光辉如北极星般永久地照亮天空,因为他们是靠自己力量的。俄国科学史与文学史上的北极星--罗蒙诺索夫,他的名字将永垂人类史册。他原是一位贫苦渔民的儿子,为了读书,他冒充贵族子弟去上学,险些为此而被流放边疆;后来国家出钱送他去德国深造,他又被抓去当兵,九死一生地逃了出来;在做雷电实验时,好友利赫曼被雷电劈死,但他不惧生命危险,把实验继续了下去,终于完成了自己的夙愿:“在俄国大地诞生自己的柏拉图和牛顿。”几百年过去了,他北极星般的光辉仍旧照亮人类的天空。这才是永恒的飞翔,依靠自己的力量搏击天空。

不单是我们每一个人要依靠自己的力量,每个民族,每个国家都应该如此。过去的中国由封建君主统治,被外国的洋枪洋炮吓破了胆,西太后一味求和,甚至把外务部置在六部之上,他们这样跪在地上搞外交,虽然换得一段时间的风平浪静,但后来中华民族便受到了巨大的打击。依靠别人是不行的,这是历史的教训。于是我们独立自主,自力更生,用半个世纪创造了一个崭新的中国,虽然中途受过挫折,但是如今的中国犹如腾飞的巨龙般雄踞在东方,令世人瞩目,这样的飞翔才是永恒的。

人类的天空只允许勇于克服困难,依靠自己的翅膀搏击长空的雄鹰永恒地飞翔。所有靠风吹起的飞翔只能是短暂的。愿我们每个人依靠自己的力量,这样才能使我们的民族永恒地自由飞翔。

【点评】:

文章题目“永恒的飞翔”暗扣材料中心“要飞翔,必须靠自身的力量”。开头由材料引入,继而亮明中心论点,切合题意,并以此贯穿全文,使文章的立论集中而深刻。

文章主体部分先用烟花作类比,再举《红楼梦》中四大家族和罗蒙诺索夫的例子作正反对比论证,继而上升到民族和国家,从反、正两面举清朝政府和新中国奉行的不同外交政策作例证,结尾回应材料,照应开头,重申观点。

全文材料丰富,紧扣中心,综合运用类比、例证、正反对比和逐层论证等多种论证方法,行文思路清晰,结构严谨,是一篇较成功的议论文。

2017广东高考作文预测篇五

2017高考语文作文预测题

阅读下面的文字,按要求作文。

一阵风吹来,一片叶子脱离树枝,飞向了天空。

“我会飞了,我会飞了。”叶子边飞边喊,“我要飞上天了!”

叶子飞呀飞,飞过了一棵棵树,飞过了一只只栖息在电线上的鸟。

“哈哈,我飞得比你们高。”叶子得意洋洋地对鸟儿说。

又一阵风吹过,叶子在天空中打了几个转,被吹落到一个小水坑里,随即被路过的一头牛踩进了淤泥里,不见了踪影。

一只鸟感叹地对它的孩子说:“看到了吧,如果不依靠自己的力量,风既可以把你吹上天,也可以把你吹进烂泥潭。要飞翔,必须靠自身的力量。”

要求:选择一个角度构思作文,自主确定立意,确定文体,确定标题,不少于800字;不脱离材料内容和及含意的范围作文。不要套作,不得抄袭。

【写作指导】:

这是一篇材料作文,材料中的叶子曾经被风吹上了天,但最终被风吹进了烂泥潭。题意不难理解,因为材料中鸟的感叹就是明显带有总结性质的议论。鸟的感叹包含了两个方面的内容:“风既可以把你吹上天,也可以把你吹进烂泥潭”告诉我们外在环境、因素的作用;“要飞翔,就要靠自己的力量”告诫我们成功的内在因素在于自身的实力与努力。

可立意为:

1.外在环境(因素)既可以成就一个人,也可以毁灭一个人。

2.成功需要借助外物,但更需要自身实力(自我努力)。

3.成功,要靠自己。

【优秀作文】:

永恒的飞翔

叶子被风托起,洋洋自得地飞上了蓝天,但转瞬间又被吹落,它只能短暂地飞翔;鸟儿依靠自己的力量搏击长空,虽然有苦有累,但这才是永恒的飞翔:不依靠自己的力量,飞翔只是短暂的;依靠自己的力量的飞翔才是永恒的。 像烟花,依靠的是人们给它的力量,纵使在万人仰望时,发出云蒸霞蔚的灿烂光芒,在落幕后也是空无一物。《红楼梦》中的四大家庭,钟鸣鼎食之家,在元妃省亲时,大把大把地弃掷金钱,但他们靠的不是自己的真材实料,靠的是元妃的受宠,对权臣的打点进贡,最终辉煌只是一时的,大观园落了片白茫茫的真干净。如若他们靠自己的力量在朝中作贡献,或许不会受到那么大的打击。但是依靠别人,再成功也是短暂的,像叶子短暂的飞翔。

有些人的飞翔却是永恒的,他们的光辉如北极星般永久地照亮天空,因为他们是靠自己力量的。俄国科学史与文学史上的北极星--罗蒙诺索夫,他的名字将永垂人类史册。他原是一位贫苦渔民的儿子,为了读书,他冒充贵族子弟去上学,险些为此而被流放边疆;后来国家出钱送他去德国深造,他又被抓去当兵,九死一生地逃了出来;在做雷电实验时,好友利赫曼被雷电劈死,但他不惧生命危险,把实验继续了下去,终于完成了自己的夙愿:“在俄国大地诞生自己的柏拉图和牛顿。”几百年过去了,他北极星般的光辉仍旧照亮人类的天空。这才是永恒的飞翔,依靠自己的力量搏击天空。

不单是我们每一个人要依靠自己的力量,每个民族,每个国家都应该如此。过去的中国由封建君主统治,被外国的洋枪洋炮吓破了胆,西太后一味求和,甚至把外务部置在六部之上,他们这样跪在地上搞外交,虽然换得一段时间的风平浪静,但后来中华民族便受到了巨大的打击。依靠别人是不行的,这是历史的教训。于是我们独立自主,自力更生,用半个世纪创造了一个崭新的中国,虽然中途受过挫折,但是如今的中国犹如腾飞的巨龙般雄踞在

东方,令世人瞩目,这样的飞翔才是永恒的。

人类的天空只允许勇于克服困难,依靠自己的翅膀搏击长空的雄鹰永恒地飞翔。所有靠风吹起的飞翔只能是短暂的。愿我们每个人依靠自己的力量,这样才能使我们的民族永恒地自由飞翔。

【点评】:

文章题目“永恒的飞翔”暗扣材料中心“要飞翔,必须靠自身的力量”。开头由材料引入,继而亮明中心论点,切合题意,并以此贯穿全文,使文章的立论集中而深刻。

文章主体部分先用烟花作类比,再举《红楼梦》中四大家族和罗蒙诺索夫的例子作正反对比论证,继而上升到民族和国家,从反、正两面举清朝政府和新中国奉行的不同外交政策作例证,结尾回应材料,照应开头,重申观点。

全文材料丰富,紧扣中心,综合运用类比、例证、正反对比和逐层论证等多种论证方法,行文思路清晰,结构严谨,是一篇较成功的议论文。

2017广东高考作文预测篇六

预测2017年高考作文题5

冠华作文网预测2017年高考作文题:坚持成就梦想 阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。一只蜘蛛结网爬上了一辆停在屋前的马车,车辕与车座之间的木板之间恰好可以织一张绝妙的网,于是它快乐地织起来„„第二天,农夫来到车前准备出车。刚坐到座位上,感觉腿被什么缠住了,一看是蜘蛛网,他用鞭子杆儿把这张网搅得稀巴烂,蜘蛛也摔在地上,车夫驾车扬长而去。接连几天都是这样。农夫抱怨道:“你这样不分时间地点的织网,最后只能饿死了!”当天晚上,车夫到马车旁取东西,发现屋里的的灯光正好照到车座下,那里聚集了很多小飞虫,蜘蛛又在织网了„„要求:选好角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容与含意的范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。

坚持成就梦想

一只蜘蛛爬上了一辆马车,车辕与车座之间恰好可以织一张绝妙的网,于是它织起来„„第二天,农夫准备出车,把蜘蛛网搅得稀巴烂,蜘蛛也摔在地上,接连几天都是这样。农夫抱怨:“这样不分时间地点的织网,你最后只能饿死!”当天晚上,车夫取东西,发现蜘蛛又在织网了„„蜘蛛日日夜夜在织网是为了抓住飞虫,它没有选择安逸,因为它知道:放弃就等于死亡,坚持才能胜利。当它织出一张密不可破的网,它就成功了。人们为什么不能像蜘蛛一样,做事情具有坚持的可贵精神呢?妇孺皆知的阿里巴巴的创始人马云,也是从不知名的小人物,逐渐变成互联网的领军人物。当他创业之初,四处找朋友借钱,朋友面露难色不借时,当他创立公司遇到重重困难时,如果他不能克服困难,咬紧牙关坚持到现在,怎么可能成就今天“互联网+”的风云人物——马云呢?由此可见,困难挫折对谁都一样,正如马克思所云:“只有那些沿着陡峭山路攀登的人,才有希望达到光辉的顶点”如果马云当初放弃执着的追求,怎样成就今天的辉煌?前几天,辽宁队和广东队进行的篮球比赛,十分激烈,裁判连连吹哨,队员多次受伤,许多球擦肩而过。辽宁队队员越打越焦虑,比赛仍然进行着,时间一分一秒地过着,场下观众和电视机前的观众都目不转睛地看着,大家的心情都是一样的紧张。辽宁队队员只是在坚持坚持再坚持。无视伤处的痛,无视比赛突发情况的出现,无视裁判的误判。他们相信自己,相信团队,在不利的形势下依然逆袭,扭转了局势。辽宁队赢了!队员们欢呼着,观众们欢呼着,教练们欢呼着,就连广东球迷也对辽宁队致以热烈的掌声和祝贺。不是为了梦想而坚持,为了球迷的欢呼和期待而坚持,怎能一鼓作气赢得比赛?高一下学期到高二上学期,正是我们青年学生人生重要的阶段,许多人在这时冲在了前方,许多人还在掉入谷底徘徊,爬不上来,或自甘堕落。所以,为了美好的前途,为了人生的未来,我们一定要坚持,成就的是未来人生。想想这些,我们还有什么理由不努力,放弃自己呢?加油吧,别怨天尤人,别松懈斗志,努力和坚持不都是为了等待着花开的哪一天吗?人生就像一座山,只有坚持爬到顶峰,才能看见远处的风景;人生就像一碗药,只有意识到良药苦口利于病,才能坚持喝完;生就像一篇文章,坚持写到最后,才能画上圆满的句号。人生的坚持,是进取中的等待。当岁月斑驳了青春的过往,当时光的魔石砥平了眉峰的棱角,当苍老的皱纹骤然拥挤在眼角,但永远留下的是那段追梦青春的热烈拥抱。

【修改与点评】1.题目《坚持成就梦想》道出坚持与梦想之间的因果关系。揭示出材料和文章的中心。2.开篇注意引用材料,引出论点;中间三段列举事例,用名人成功、团队比赛胜利,到自身实际,证明论点,结尾都是用反问句,从反面证明论点,具有较强的说服力。

3.语言上整句和散句相结合,生动活泼,形象生动,及大地增强了文章的表现力。(冠华作文网)

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