2017重庆市中考英语作文
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2017重庆市中考英语作文篇一
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2017年中考英语作文专题复习
书面表达(结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点!)
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么呢?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确,这一句足矣。第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!
要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折:but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
只要把这十个字都搞定了,那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定!
写作步骤
1 审题:审清作文体裁(类型)时态、人称、要点等细节;
2 列提纲(文章结构框架):分3段(层),以及每段(层)大体内容;
3 写作:在提纲的基础上补充要点;
4 复查:2遍——1遍看查要点、拼写、语法、标点等问题;2遍不出声读查,靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等;英语写作检查的原则:
5 誊抄:不允许做任何的更改。
*总之做到三审:体裁、时态和人称、要点;
三思:词汇—>短语—>句式;
三查:要点、拼写和语法、连贯。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同,例如:
汉语 英语
A. 句号 。 .
B. 省略号 „„ „
C. 顿号 、 无
结构
文章分3段(层):
(1)综述:概括性强,最多2句话引入主题;
(2)正文——主要内容:层次性强,一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话;
(3)结尾:紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。
逻辑
1)表层次:
1first, second, third, last 2firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3the first, the second, the third, the last 4in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly 5 to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 6to start with, next, in addition, finally 7first and foremost, besides, last but not least 8most important of all, moreover, finally 9on the one hand, on the other hand 10for one thing, for another thing
2)表转折;but, however, yet, though, although, after all, in spite of,
3)因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, due to,since, owing to, as a result(of), hence, thus
4)例证 for example, for instance, such as
5)表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
6)表示利弊的:be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; „have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; have an effect on sb.;
表示喜爱的:love/like/enjoy„; be fond of„; be interested in„; show great interest in„;
7)总结 As I see, As for me,As we all know,To my mind, as far as I’m concerned, from my perspective, in general, generally speaking, I think..., in fact , in a word, all in all, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up,
句型
一(1)简单句
1. 主系表 I am a middle school student. He is fourteen.
2. 主谓 I ran fast.
3. 主谓宾 We will have dinner together.
4. 主谓宾宾补 (主谓+固定搭配) We keep our classroom clean and tidy.
(2)简单句+状语短语
1. 时间状语 I am a middle school student now. He is fourteen this year.
2. 地点状语 We will have dinner together at home.
(3)简单句(主句)+状语短语
1. 时间状语从句 My parents helped me a lot when I was in trouble.
2. 条件状语从句 If you have any questions, please write to me.
3. 原因状语从句 I like English best because it is interesting and fun.
(4)主句+宾语从句
我认为(我想、我希望) I think he is helpful and great.
I believe you will love this city. I hope I can be a volunteer some day.
(5)使用定语从句
我喜欢可以跟着跳舞的音乐。 I love music I can dance to.
父母是我最爱的人。My parents are the people who I love most.
(6)简单句+连词+简单句
1. 并列连接 I am a middle school student and I study in No. 1 Middle School.
2. 转折连接 I work hard at English but my English is not good enough.
3. 因果连接 He is good at English so I often ask him for help.
二1. I am of the opinion that=My point of view is that=I think=I hold the idea that=as far as I’m concerned=To my mind=in my opinion 2.Among various kinds of +复数名词在各种...中,Among various kinds of sports, I like sth in particular. 3 as the saying goes,/as the proverb goes/as the proverb puts it 4 It’s said/reported/believed that 5 It’s our duty to do sth 6 ask/tell sb. (not) to do sth. 7 concentrate on sth 8 be busy doing sth. 9 be supposed to do sth=should do sth 10Every coin has two sides. Computer has both advantages and disadvantages No pains, no gains. All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. Failure is the mother of success. Think twice before you do. Where there is a will, there is a way. Do as the Romans do. The early bird catches the worm. An apple a day keeps the doctors away. All roads lead to Rome. Practice makes perfect. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑,长一智。
A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 今日事,今日毕。Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。
11.be glad to do sth 12buy/give/show/bring/lend/send/pass/tell sb. sth. 13 there be 句型 14 enjoy/hate/like/finish/stop/mind/keep/go on doing sth. 15 find it + adj to do sth. 16 get + 比较级 17 don’t do sth=stay away from sth 18 had better (not) do sth. 19 help sb. (to) do/help sb.with 20 I don’t think that 21 I would like to /Would you like to„? 22 is one of the + 最高级 + n(pl.)„ 23 It is +adj. for sb. to do sth. (important/ essential/ necessary/ urgent/ proper)24 It is a good idea to do sth. 25宾语从句、定语从句、感叹句型 26 不用说„„ It goes without saying that „ = (It is) needless to say (that) „= It is obvious that 27 It seems that„ 28 It sounds +adj. /It looks +adj. 29 It takes sb some time. to do sth. 30 It’s bad/good for„ 31 It’s time for„/to do sth. 32 Can you give me some advice on... 33 keep sb. doing 34 keep/make sth. +adj. 35 like to do / like doing 36 make / let sb.(not) do sth. 37 neither„nor 38 not„at all 39 not„until 40 One„the other„/Some„ others„ 41 prefer„to/prefer to...rather than...42 see/hear sb. do(doing) sth. 43 so„that 44 have fun doing sth48 thank sb for sth. 49 The more„the better 50 There is sth. wrong with„ 51 too„to 52 used to 53 What about /How about„? 54 What’s the matter with„? 55 What’s wrong„? 56 Why not„? 57 Will (would, could) you please„?
58.How nice to hear from you again./Let me tell you something about the activity./I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th./I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit./I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.59.I’m looking forward to hearing from you. / I’m looking forward to your reply.
亮点
一、the + est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)
例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen。海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education。没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much (再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。) 例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much。我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V .。。(不可否认的„„)
例句:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse。不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道„„)
It is well-known + 句子~~ (全世界都知道„„)
例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us。
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的„„)
例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired。毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。{2017重庆市中考英语作文}.
七、An advantage of is that + 句子(„„的优点是„„)
例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution。使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子is that + 句子(„„的原因是„„)
例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air。我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子(如此„„以致于„„)
例句:So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it。
时间是如此珍贵,它经不起我们浪费。
十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V (虽然„„)
例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory。
{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不} 虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V (愈„„愈„„)
例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make。
十二、By +Ving, can (借着„„,„„能够„„)
例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy。 借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。 十三、enable + Object(受词)+ to + V („„使„„能够„„)
例句:Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能„„)
例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge。
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是„„的时候了)
例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems。该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、Those who ~~~ („„的人„„)
例句:Those who break the law should be punished。违法的人应该受处罚。
十七、There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不„„)
例句:There is no one but longs to go to college。没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不„„)
例句:Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports。由于考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的) It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)
例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是„„的原因)
例句:Summer is hot.That is the reason why I don't like it。夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 时间,S + 现在完成式。(过去„„年来,„„一直„„)
例句:For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination。过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。
二十二、Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式
例句:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard。自从他上高中,他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V („„是值得的。)
例句:It pays to help others。帮助别人是值得的。
二十四、be based on (以„„为基础)
例句:The progress of the society is based on harmony。社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。 二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
We should spare no effort to beautify our environment。我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (让„„明白„„事)
例句:We should bring home to people the value of working hard。我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
二十七、be closely related to (与„„息息相关)
例句:Taking exercise is closely related to health。做运动与健康息息相关。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V (养成„„的习惯)
We should get into the habit of previewing and reviewing。我们应该养成预习和复习的习惯。 二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, (因为„„)
例句:Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream。
因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么„„!)
例句:What an important thing it is to keep our promise! How important a thing is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
三十一、Leave much to be desired (令人不满意)
例句:The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我们的交通状况令人不满意。
三十二、Have a great influence on ~~ (对„„有很大的影响)
例句:Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
三十三、do good to (对...有益),do harm to (对„„有害)
例句:Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~ (对„„造成一大威胁)
例句:Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
三十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best (尽全力去„„)
例句:We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。
2017重庆市中考英语作文篇二
备战2017中考英语作文题热门话题{2017重庆市中考英语作文}.
备战2017中考英语作文题热门话题
一、 学术文化篇
1.沉迷网络游戏{2017重庆市中考英语作文}.
题目:李华沉迷于电脑游戏中,影响了学习。作为他的好朋友,你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整,语言流畅。 提示词:give up concentrate on be (become)interested in
★ 范文
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.
Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
2.怎样学好英语
世界在发展,文化在交融,英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验,请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。
要求:1. 词数:80—100词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
2. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
★ 范文
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
二、 素质教育篇
3.如何减压让生活更美好
许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:{2017重庆市中考英语作文}.
(1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;
(2) 我的压力是什么;
(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。
★ 范文
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
4.学做好人好事
今年是学习雷锋五十周年纪念日,雷锋同志说过:“我要把有限的生命,投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”
请写一篇意思连贯,符合逻辑,不少于80字的作文。
在作文中,简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情,为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。
★ 范文
Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character. Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “learn from Leifeng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.
To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.
I strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of us treat Leifeng as our model and copy his spirit.
三、 现代生活篇
5.怎样保持健康的生活习惯
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。
信息提示:健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。
要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
★ 范文
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
6.毕业感想
初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。
提示词语: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
★ 范文
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.
四、 社会经济篇
7.低碳生活
现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life),即:降低二氧化碳的排放,采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处,请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括:你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。 提示词语:be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse
★ 范文
Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.
8.节约用水
水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺,节约用水是我们每个人的责任,请以此为话题写一篇不少于80字的短文。
★ 范文
As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.
五、 人生哲理篇
9.幸福
幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光,幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶,幸福是„„ 请以My happiness为话题,写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求:条理清晰,语言流畅,用词准确, 字迹工整,80-100词。
★ 范文
Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.
2017重庆市中考英语作文篇三
2017中考英语复习:英语写作三部曲
2017中考英语复习:英语写作三部曲
英文书面表达是中考试卷中的最后一部分内容,分值设置通常为十到十五分。它考查考生的英语表达能力,看是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。通常,该题对写作的目的、内容、体裁及字数都有明确的要求,会提供一些材料,如文字、图画和图表。因此,中考英语书面表达题不同于汉语写作,做到以下几点即可:审清题目要求,能读懂题;组织好所提供的材料;连词成句,连句成篇,用明白、通顺、恰当、得体的英语表达出来。毕竟是初级写作,篇幅和难度方面要求并不高。
写作的过程应当是有计划、有步骤地展开。可以把这一过程划分为三部曲,即写作前、写作中、写作后。
一、写作前
不可急于动笔,要先审题,列出要点,写出提纲。接下来,脑海中确定文章的体裁与时态。初中阶段所接触的体裁主要有:记叙文、应用文、议论文及说明文。其中,应用文又包括信件、电子邮件文稿、寻物启示、失物招领、请假条、留言条、通知等不同的形式,这些都是生活中常用的。至于时态,要依据表达的内容来灵活应用。初中阶段较常用的主要时态有:一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。其他时态多为必要时穿插使用。平时有必要积累一些有代表性的,与生活贴近的文章,用以参考。
二、写作中
动笔前要有清晰的轮廓,即上述的要点、体裁、时态,并可回顾一下已学过的类似篇目。但在考试时,最好不要直接写在试卷上,以免修改时涂改太多。先写在草稿纸上为宜。写作中应注意三大问题:文章所要求的格式,逻辑顺序和遣词造句。以下主要谈格式的运用与过渡性和连接性词汇的运用。
(一)常见格式
信件的格式:
[Dear Betty,
Thank you for your last letter. Here are…
Love,
Lucy\&]
电子邮件的格式:
[Subject:My dog From: Thomas\&Nancy,
Good news! I have a new pet…
Thomas\&]
日记的格式:
[Friday,April 10th Fine
Today our school held a sports meeting on the playground…\&]
(二)、写作中的遣词造句
1、使用熟悉的,已掌握的词汇和句型;少用难拼写的词及复合句,多用容易词、简单句。
2、学会用同义词及同义句替换不会写的词句。
3、使用过渡性、总结性的词汇。
如:文章及段落起始的用语:to begin with, first of all
表示先后次序的词:first, second, then, next, finally
表示因果关系的词:so, because, as
表示并列关系的词:and, or
表示转折关系的词:but, however
表示举例的词: for example , such as, on the one hand, on the other hand
表示总结性的词:in fact, in a word, in general
4、多用固定词组,为文章增色。
5、直接用英语表达,避免用汉语思维。
6、简单发挥,不能脱离中心。(下转第18页)
(上接第16页)
7、符合字数要求。
三、写作后
在草稿纸上完成文章后,不要立即誊写在试卷上,以下几步也极其重要。
(一)再次查看题目要求,看有无遗漏。
(二)看语言是否通顺,语法是否正确。包括大小写、标点、时态、语态、主谓一致及词语搭配等。
(三)查看字数是否符合要求。通常要求为100字左右。
(四)认真书写于试卷上。字迹规范、美观,卷面整洁。
经历了这样的三部曲,写作任务基本结束。
此外,学生还应了解老师怎样把握评判尺度。以满分为15分为例,可参看以下五个档次的评分细则。
一级(13-15分)
1、所写内容符合所提供的各种信息,有创意;
2、句子正确通顺,或只有个别小错;
3、单词拼写错误不超过4个。
二级(10-12分)
1、所写的内容与所提供的各种信息基本符合;
2、句子基本正确。表达错误较少,表达较通顺;
3、单词拼写错误不超过6个。
三级(7-9分)
1、所写的内容与试卷所提供的信息基本相符;
2、句子表达错误较多,但尚可读懂;
3、单词拼写错误不超过10个。
四级(4-6分)
1、所写内容与试卷提供的信息不符; 2、只有少数句子表达正确; 3、拼写错误在10个以上。 五级(3分以下) 只有个别词语可读,但通篇不知所云。
2017重庆市中考英语作文篇四
2017中考英语作文
1.为了交流学习经验,提高学习效率,《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以“How to be a good learner?”为题的征文比赛活动,请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。
How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our freetime. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student,working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.I think all these above will be helpful to us.
2. 亲爱的同学,你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了,请你以“My English Study”为题,谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求:①要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟;②词数80左右。
My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many
difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases.For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the
teacher and my classmates,I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
3.父亲节马上就要到了,但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展,并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
提示:
①如果有足够的零花钱,可以为父亲买一些实用但不贵的东西,如领带;
②还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准备一杯茶。
Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father.
Different people like different kinds of gifts.If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day.Don’t you think so?
4.请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
提示:
①春节是中国最重要的节日;
②人们大多回家过年,家庭成员团聚;
③家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友(friends and relatives);
④孩子们喜欢春节。
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in
China.People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
5.假设Linda是你的好朋友,你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来,你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示,简要介绍Linda的变化。
提示:
①外貌:以前个子矮,短发;现在个子高多了,长发。
②爱好:以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天;现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。
③性格:以前外向;现在有些内向。
要求:①不要逐字翻译,适当发挥;②层次清晰,语言流畅;③80词左右。
Linda is my best friend. She has changed a lot in the past two years.She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now.She used to be out going. Now she is a little
quite.I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.
6. 背景设定:最近,康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件,想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏,请根据以下提示,给Miachael回一封电子邮件。 过去生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系不便......现在生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多,住得舒适,手机普及......
要求:
①围绕以上内容进行合理表述;
②所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面;
③词数80词左右,开头语以给出(不计入词数)。
参考词汇:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯),telegram, thanks to,rapidly, mobile phone, policy
Dear Michael,
You want to know the changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house.Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.Thanks to the government, our home town has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Somepeople have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses.Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.
Sincerely Kang Min
7.随着网络的发展,人们消费观念转变,购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示,写一篇网上购物的文章。 优点:
①足不出户;节约时间;避免拥挤、劳累。
②价格通常比较便宜。
③可供选择的范围广,品种多。
缺点:
①只能看到图片,看不到商品本身。
②容易购买大量不太需要的东西,造成浪费。
注意:
①所表述的内容必须包含以上所有方面;
②80词左右,开头文章已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.
8.假如你是李华,今年上初三了,现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数:60-80。
I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few
weeks.I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.I really miss my old days.
9.某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点:
①父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;
②你对这些问题的看法;
③你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some house work.
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